more teamwork
Tue, Apr. 12th, 2005 17:20continued from the previous. not sure i really added enough to ino's bit to make it sound less underdeveloped. will do that later.
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... now what? if any of you have something they wish to see in this scene, please suggest, i'm listening. I know what happens next, but it's Naruto POV. If I end the hapter too quickly, it's gonna be four pages shorter than the previous one, at least ^^;
... now what? if any of you have something they wish to see in this scene, please suggest, i'm listening. I know what happens next, but it's Naruto POV. If I end the hapter too quickly, it's gonna be four pages shorter than the previous one, at least ^^;