more teamwork

continued from the previous. not sure i really added enough to ino's bit to make it sound less underdeveloped. will do that later.
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... now what? if any of you have something they wish to see in this scene, please suggest, i'm listening. I know what happens next, but it's Naruto POV. If I end the hapter too quickly, it's gonna be four pages shorter than the previous one, at least ^^;

*puts on pimping hat*

Of That Most Beautiful Disorder by kimi no vanilla

http://www.kiyasama.com/project_greenlight_fanfiction/viewstory.php?sid=160

WOW. this fic is neji/kankurou, and it actually works somewhat O_o Okay, it has some plot, and the study of the settings (the Sand village) and the way the hierarchy with kankuro's family works alone deserve a read. It also acknowledges that it's crack by having them both aware that they never even talked to each other before; it's not a OMG IVE BEEN IN LOVE WITH HIM ALL ALONG fic, thank god.

As for Kankuro, never paid attention that closely to him, and he's not a central character in the manga (his brother always steals the show), but it does sound like him (also, he's funny. XD). Neji is SPOT-ON. He acts like a stuck-up, irritating prick, angsts in secret and thinks about what Naruto would do to better himself -- when he remembers that he actually wants to change. He's not made perfect by insisting on his tragic qualities (of which he has loads); the tragedy of his situation is understated, which makes it all the more effective.

Anyway, i started reading because I was bored as hell, and ended up finding a more than decent fic. I'm not a new fan of the pairing! XD but heh, it was very entertaining, and interesting, and i'm always a sucker for fics that explore the Sand village dynamics, so it made me happy.