Sat, Nov. 8th, 2008

askerian: Serious Karkat in a red long-sleeved shirt (5_tell me you're kidding)
Bunny! )

I rewrote the beginning of the second scene of chapter 1, and I like it a LOT better now. It's more easy to visualize and understand why they suspect Duo at all, and it gives a few glimpses into Wufei's undercover as a guerillero stint. Read here.

Also ENTIRELY rewrote the fourth scene, when Wufei meets the ministry officials -- now it's Heero POV and Wufei was asleep in the infirmary all along. I thought I'd posted it but I can't find it in my tags. D: Here it is.

Working on actually continuing the fic instead of tweaking the previous parts now. ya rly. -___-;;;;;
askerian: Serious Karkat in a red long-sleeved shirt (Default)
So, one day after the offer of a date. u.u HAHAHA THE PLOT FINALLY KICKS OFF.

[livejournal.com profile] phoenix_melody, I loev you. Just so you know. The plot would still be dead without you. ♥♥♥

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