Teamwork 2 -- chapter 3, scene 3
Fri, Aug. 1st, 2008 08:16Uwah NaruSasu. ♥
Blahdiblah not betaread yet, if you want to point out mistakes I'll love you forever, this scene is mostly fallout from previous and setup for later stuff, so it's rather inbetween and I'm not sure it really has much merit on its own.
(Apart from the narusasu stuff, which I'm not sure is 100% alright since it's been so long since the last time I did it. DX )
First scene of chapter 3 (Team Seven disembarked on blahblah beach blah) - Previous scene (FoxyNaru antics in the night)
( Just over 1000 words of Naruto POV )
By the way, I decided the chapter was getting too long and didn't need six POV shifts, so I cut it in two, and now all the Team Kunoichi stuff is technically chapter 4. Disorganized, me? Never.
Blahdiblah not betaread yet, if you want to point out mistakes I'll love you forever, this scene is mostly fallout from previous and setup for later stuff, so it's rather inbetween and I'm not sure it really has much merit on its own.
(Apart from the narusasu stuff, which I'm not sure is 100% alright since it's been so long since the last time I did it. DX )
First scene of chapter 3 (Team Seven disembarked on blahblah beach blah) - Previous scene (FoxyNaru antics in the night)
( Just over 1000 words of Naruto POV )
By the way, I decided the chapter was getting too long and didn't need six POV shifts, so I cut it in two, and now all the Team Kunoichi stuff is technically chapter 4. Disorganized, me? Never.