IZ TAT SUM CROSSED WIRES? :O
Sat, Sep. 29th, 2007 00:59Okay, so... Sasuke's interacting with outsiders, and it's mostly fallout from the previous hospital attack and following arguments, so there isn't a lot of action...
It hasn't been betaed yet, some of it might not make enough sense or be awkward or whatever, but ARGH I need to post it. ~____~
I don't remember if I posted the first scene before, but this one is edited a bit...
I'm working on the next scene, and it IS Sasuke and Naruto. And some plot I hadn't planned on putting there, but it insisted. >__> Also, I edited chapter 2 a bit to add some tiny foreshadowing. I know the thing with Neji's uncle still seems to come out of left field, it's my fault, but I can't figure out where else to add some mentions. I lose. :sigh:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2599861/1/Crossed_Wires -> previous chapters.
( the tiny bit I asked to chapter 2... )
( Sakura isn't usually physically assertive, so when she swoops in on Sasuke in the corridor and tries to herd him toward the break room, he's startled enough that he stops moving entirely -- which means she ends up not moving him anywhere. )
It hasn't been betaed yet, some of it might not make enough sense or be awkward or whatever, but ARGH I need to post it. ~____~
I don't remember if I posted the first scene before, but this one is edited a bit...
I'm working on the next scene, and it IS Sasuke and Naruto. And some plot I hadn't planned on putting there, but it insisted. >__> Also, I edited chapter 2 a bit to add some tiny foreshadowing. I know the thing with Neji's uncle still seems to come out of left field, it's my fault, but I can't figure out where else to add some mentions. I lose. :sigh:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2599861/1/Crossed_Wires -> previous chapters.
( the tiny bit I asked to chapter 2... )
( Sakura isn't usually physically assertive, so when she swoops in on Sasuke in the corridor and tries to herd him toward the break room, he's startled enough that he stops moving entirely -- which means she ends up not moving him anywhere. )