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askerian: it's so disappointing, when you find a fic that's good-ish, but the choice of words is approximative and the characters, while IC, are handled... kinda clumsily
askerian: a bit too much like a laundry list of "so X is this and that and he tends to say things like this and that"
askerian: because you keep wanting to point out what's wrong with the story, but technically, nothing is wrong
askerian: but it's still jarring
askerian: it's disappointing, because it's almost yay!good
askerian: ...and that almost is really all the difference in the world
[Bad username or site: Saro Lynne @ livejournal.com]: Oh yeah. It's like the literary equivalent of being slightly tone deaf or something.

*loves on Saro for wording it good for me* T___T


In other news, fic recs!

phoenix_melody: Oracle: a Neji-centric fic, heavy on the Hyuuga clan study, internal politics and angst. Slow to update. Neji is blinded during a mission, and now he's going to die. DDD: It's really good, great characterisation, the angst isn't shoved at us and some lines are really excellent. Oh, Neji, you -- you -- aurgh. ;_;

edonohana: good Sand Sib oneshots, and for those of you into Saiyuki, many very nicely evil Hakkai/Gojyo drabbles and short fics. And one funny Samurai Champloo gen ficlet.


Today, Dad and brothers weren't home for dinner, so mom took me to the vietnamese restaurant. All-you-can eat buffet. mmmmmmmmmmmmm. Now I sleep. still digesting, and also sotired. will reply to feedback tomorrow love you everyone oh hé kin faudra qu'on se téléphone ce weekend ou kekchose câlincopine... yeah.

*flops* ♥ =____= ♥

(teamwork) Kakashi-centric sidefic thing

This is a missing scene from Naruto's chapter, mostly because he was nowhere near that place when it happened. It's not really necessary to his chapter, but hey! Kakashi insisted. Happens just before Naruto gets back home and finds the boxes full of his stuff.

Thanks to crazy_toffee for the quick beta~ If you see anything we missed, plz point it out ?

( Chapter 6: Inutile Interrupting Interlude :p(Kakashi) )