(teamwork2) chapter 6, scene 3 (complete-ish?)
Tue, May. 16th, 2006 03:14Not sure everything is smooth enough, or the characterizations work, or the motives and undercurrents are clear enough.
And once again, I am staring at my draft and wondering what scene comes next. Oh well. (hopefully nejiiii because I want to write neeeeeji. but hnnn. i still don't know for sure what happens in the neji scene apart from some "oopsie, sorry about last time", sadly. Hrrrm. But team 7 still has stuff to talk out, argh.)
For the previous bits, hit the tag and scroll down~
( on the road again~ )
And once again, I am staring at my draft and wondering what scene comes next. Oh well. (hopefully nejiiii because I want to write neeeeeji. but hnnn. i still don't know for sure what happens in the neji scene apart from some "oopsie, sorry about last time", sadly. Hrrrm. But team 7 still has stuff to talk out, argh.)
For the previous bits, hit the tag and scroll down~
( on the road again~ )