teamworkness, chapter 3
Fri, Apr. 22nd, 2005 00:02after thinking about it, i decided
wing_serenade was right and there was something lacking between chapters 2 and 3. So since i can't add more to chapter 2 since it's already posted and all (and sasuke is not talking, AGAIN), i added something to the beginning of chapter 3.
it's a quick scene, with more tell than show, but i really can't make it too long because the chapter is going to be heavy enough as it is.
(if i manage to finish that stupid sparring scene. rrrrgh.)
( beginning of chapter 3 )
more of chapter three here:
http://www.livejournal.com/users/askerian/150752.html
( and a little bit of the sparring scene, because it amuses me. )
Now I need to think up a way to get them from here to the next plot point, which is surprisingly difficult. I hate action scenes like this. x__x
also, GYAH!! crap, super-cool replies I haven't replied to. I suck! ;;__;;
lissiel,
_sachi,
blackheisei, forgive me ! T_T
( omake courtesy of sailor seraphim )
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it's a quick scene, with more tell than show, but i really can't make it too long because the chapter is going to be heavy enough as it is.
(if i manage to finish that stupid sparring scene. rrrrgh.)
( beginning of chapter 3 )
more of chapter three here:
http://www.livejournal.com/users/askerian/150752.html
( and a little bit of the sparring scene, because it amuses me. )
Now I need to think up a way to get them from here to the next plot point, which is surprisingly difficult. I hate action scenes like this. x__x
also, GYAH!! crap, super-cool replies I haven't replied to. I suck! ;;__;;
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( omake courtesy of sailor seraphim )