(naruto) Teamwork - sequelness (KyuuSasu)
Sat, Dec. 18th, 2004 19:42This is a sequelish PWP-thing that happens a few months after Teamwork. It is about Kyuubi wildly sexx0ring Sasuke, though the sexx0ring doesn't happen in this bit because i didn't write this far yet, because i'm tiiiired.
If I can write like i want, there will be a few sequels that happen before this one, si i'll probably have to rewrite to tighten up the writing/edit some timeline clues/add details and stuff. Also, the POV jumps around quite a bit, but i'm not sure if it should be fixed so only one person tells about the events or not. i rather like having several POVs. what i have is too many characters to keep track of. x_x
The kids know that Naruto hosts the Kyuubi, but they've never seen him yet. Sakura is 5 or 6 months pregnant, so she stayed home. naruto promised Kyuubi a whole afternoon of doing what he wanted because he actually helped about something.
I was very tired when i wrote this (and it's still not complete) so i'm sure it's not so good, and there might be plot holes and places that need fluffing up or something. I don't really care right now; i just wanna post and then go to bed. =_=
( need a title )
Les betalecteuses, j'ai recu les mails de boubanath et céline/neko, mercimercimerci. pas encore eu le temps de lire les corrections, je répondrai personnellement plus tard promis je vous aime. je suis crevééééée... =___=;;;;
If I can write like i want, there will be a few sequels that happen before this one, si i'll probably have to rewrite to tighten up the writing/edit some timeline clues/add details and stuff. Also, the POV jumps around quite a bit, but i'm not sure if it should be fixed so only one person tells about the events or not. i rather like having several POVs. what i have is too many characters to keep track of. x_x
The kids know that Naruto hosts the Kyuubi, but they've never seen him yet. Sakura is 5 or 6 months pregnant, so she stayed home. naruto promised Kyuubi a whole afternoon of doing what he wanted because he actually helped about something.
I was very tired when i wrote this (and it's still not complete) so i'm sure it's not so good, and there might be plot holes and places that need fluffing up or something. I don't really care right now; i just wanna post and then go to bed. =_=
( need a title )
Les betalecteuses, j'ai recu les mails de boubanath et céline/neko, mercimercimerci. pas encore eu le temps de lire les corrections, je répondrai personnellement plus tard promis je vous aime. je suis crevééééée... =___=;;;;