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askerian ([personal profile] askerian) wrote2004-12-18 07:42 pm

(naruto) Teamwork - sequelness (KyuuSasu)

This is a sequelish PWP-thing that happens a few months after Teamwork. It is about Kyuubi wildly sexx0ring Sasuke, though the sexx0ring doesn't happen in this bit because i didn't write this far yet, because i'm tiiiired.

If I can write like i want, there will be a few sequels that happen before this one, si i'll probably have to rewrite to tighten up the writing/edit some timeline clues/add details and stuff. Also, the POV jumps around quite a bit, but i'm not sure if it should be fixed so only one person tells about the events or not. i rather like having several POVs. what i have is too many characters to keep track of. x_x

The kids know that Naruto hosts the Kyuubi, but they've never seen him yet. Sakura is 5 or 6 months pregnant, so she stayed home. naruto promised Kyuubi a whole afternoon of doing what he wanted because he actually helped about something.

I was very tired when i wrote this (and it's still not complete) so i'm sure it's not so good, and there might be plot holes and places that need fluffing up or something. I don't really care right now; i just wanna post and then go to bed. =_=



If there was one thing they hadn't expected when they went for a walk and a picnic in the forest, it had to be a naked Naruto perched on a branch over their clearing, bare toes curled around the wood, claw-tipped fingers digging into the bark.

He was balanced like a big cat hunting, ready to leap front paws first, and the grace with which he was crouching there, on all fours, as if it was the most natural of places to be, somehow made his impersonation of a wild predator feel utterly normal.

Neji, of course, had noticed him first, then Hinata; the others had needed to see them blink up at their guest before even noticing the interruption.

It was weird; somehow Naruto was at the same time blending in with his surroundings seamlessly, and yet drawing the eye like a magnet. He was, after all, a naked man up in a tree. A naked man who watched them with a weird, unusual expression on his face, and didn't reply to Ino and Chouji's surprised calls and demands for an explanation. He only shifted a little, tilting his head on the side as he watched the little group.

He was very, very naked. And from that angle, the branch didn't hide much.

Hinata turned away, blushing, and Ino scowled and put a hand in front of her eyes, pretending to be offended, even though she kept staring between her fingers. Tenten was openly watching, appreciative.

It was Kiba who jumped on his feet first, eyes wide, Akamaru whimpering and growling as he hid behind his leg. And then Shikamaru saw what Kiba had probably smelled : Naruto's eyes were narrowed and of an unusual color, the spiral -- the seal -- on his belly standing out vividly, the whiskers scars too wide, and the stance... the stance was utterly alien to Naruto. Bestial, even.

Well, that and he was naked up in a tree, and didn't seem to find that weird.

Then Naruto -- Naruto, really? -- let himself fall off the tree casually, landing with a catlike grace that was definitely not normal for him, and padded slowly toward their little group.

By then, Neji was standing in a defensive stance and Kiba's hand was firmly in Akamaru's collar, even though it was hard to tell which one was preventing the other one from fleeing. Lee was getting up slowly, as was Tenten, and Shikamaru's shadow was stretching before him, just in case.

The creature that was Naruto and yet not casually strutted past them, gloriously uncaring, and plopped down on the thickest patch of sun-warmed grass, his upper body sprawling over Hinata's lap.

Hinata blushed as her eyes flicked over his bare skin, then paled as the identity of her new lap tenant registered. That was not Naruto. That was Kyuubi no Youko.

As Kyuubi stretched, yawning, baring his fangs, Neji lifted a hand, ready to strike, and she gave him a wide-eyed look, quickly shaking her head to tell him to stay put. Kyuubi's eyes had opened, just a slice of blood red irises between falsely lazy eyelids, and they were all good enough ninja to feel the cold threat in the otherwise unmoving body.

Kyuubi's killing intent projected itself very well indeed. Akamaru started whimpering, and for once listening to her survival instinct, Ino cautiously stepped back.

As for Hinata, she was quite trapped. And when she tried leaning back a little, so that her stomach wouldn't be against Kyuubi's shoulder, he started to growl softly. No moving; right, got it.

"Uhm... K-Kyuubi-sama?" she stammered, her voice a shaky whisper at best.

He grunted, frowning briefly. It was astonishing how much he looked like Naruto on the surface, and yet how different every little action felt.

"Scratch."

Hinata blinked, surprised by the order. Scratch what...?

Growling, he nudged her hand impatiently. Hoping that she understood right, she started petting his hair. Her heart was slamming against her ribcage so hard it was a wonder she hadn't broken bones yet.

Kyuubi particularly liked being scratched where his fox ears should be. It made a strange sound rise from his throat, a bit like a growly purr. Kiba squeaked a protest.

"H-Hey! That's my girlfriend you're rubbing against!!" he yelped, hands clenched.

Neji paused, and slowly turned to look at him. Kiba ignored him. He hadn't planned to officially announce their relationship to Hinata's cousin quite like that, what with Neji being an homicidal maniac persuaded that Hinata-sama must be protected from everything. Right now, though, Neji wasn't the biggest threat around.

He was shaking, scared as hell, his instincts howling at him to get the fuck away from the demon fox, or at least to roll over and submit, but that was a matter of principle, really. Hinata was way too nice to do it, but he knew that his sister and his mom would dump any guy who wouldn't stand up for them in a heartbeat, and they were right to demand loyalty.

Kyuubi opened an eye to glance at him, and snorted. "You didn't mount her yet," he commented; his voice sounded scratchy from disuse, and so low it made a shiver go up his back.

Hinata and Kiba spluttered, blushing; Neji looked fleetingly contented, as if Kiba had just gained a few days longer to live.

"B-But she's still my girlfriend and -- you just don't ask other people's mates to pet you!!"

"Shut up," Kyuubi said in an almost friendly tone, "or I'll tear your throat out."

It wasn't even a threat; it was a fact. Kiba shut up, sending an apologetic look Hinata's way. She managed a shaky smile in response. She didn't stop petting.

Kyuubi stretched his legs, still purr-growling deep in his throat, then settled down on his patch of sun again. His tanned skin was a vivid contrast to the lush grass; he wasn't that much paler where he ought to have been wearing his boxers, and she wondered for a second whether Naruto was used to walking around his house in the nude. Then of course she blushed, because that was one thing she didn't need to wonder about her friend.

It wasn't so bad, really, apart from the almost debilitating terror of having such a murderous beast on her lap. He was a little heavy, but not so much, and his skin was warm, and his breath was slow... as if he was napping.
Wait a second; he was napping. If Hinata hadn't been such a shy, gentle girl, she might have cursed him.

She was so busy not-cursing the fox and trying to find a way out that she only noticed the second arrival when a shadow fell across her. She looked up; Uchiha Sasuke was standing there, hands on his hips and coldly glaring down at her. For a second, she wanted to apologize, even though she didn't know what she'd done wrong.

"You're standing in my sun, bitch," the demon growled quietly.

Sasuke was actually glaring at Kyuubi, not at her; she felt relieved, but not so much because she was still very much in the blast radius.

"Though luck. Get off the girl."

It was amazing how Sasuke appeared totally uncaring about ordering the Kyuubi around, as if it was normal and his obedience was actually expected. One needed nothing less than the Byakugan to notice the faint trembling in his hands.

Kyuubi frowned and opened one red eye, throwing a nasty glare Sasuke's way. "No."

"So you sprawl in girls' laps regulary? Sakura will be happy," Sasuke shot back sarcastically.

"The pink slut isn't sitting in my sun patch. If she wanted me to sleep on her, she should be here. She's not, so I'm using this one. Now leave me alone." And with that, he closed his eyes again, apparently falling asleep on the spot.

Sasuke scowled heavily, but didn't reply right away, as if trying to find a new attack angle.

"... Sasuke-kun...? He's not going to hurt Hinata-chan, right?" Tenten asked. She was cautiously standing almost fifteen meters away.

"He shouldn't," Sasuke replied unconcernedly, then saw Hinata's dismayed expression and Neji's murderous face and decided to add something else to reassure them. "Naruto wouldn't let him."

Hearing the name, Kyuubi growled, baring his fangs briefly. "Be quiet, bitch. And stop taking my sunlight."

"No."

And then Sasuke nudged the demon-fox with his foot.

Any of the others could have told him it was a bad, bad idea; but he was Uchiha Sasuke, and he was living with Kyuubi's vessel; one would have assumed that he knew better.

There was a snarl, and a second later, the bushes on the other side of the clearing were crushed under the weight of the Uchiha and the youko. They rolled in the grass, through another bush before stopping against a trunk, hitting it heavily. Sasuke somehow had ended up underneath. Kyuubi leaned toward him, fangs bared...

Sasuke planted his feet in his stomach and pushed, hands grabbing his shoulders tight. Then Kyuubi was airborne and flying toward the little stream curling around the clearing.

Weirdly, when Kyuubi was wet, he looked even more naked then when he was just dry and naked.

With a furious snarl, the fox threw himself at Sasuke. His chakra was suddenly all over the place, intense and angry enough to choke on. Once again they rolled around, throwing wild punches and kicks. The fight was hard to follow in detail, because the grass was tall and they weren't always in the clearing. Lee actually looked ready to jump in, but Neji grabbed his elbow and pulled him back, almost throwing him back to where Kiba was standing over Hinata protectively. Ino huddled close to Shikamaru, eyes wide and scared.

"Sasuke-kun..." she whispered, shaking.

He was strong and fast. He was a genius. That didn't make him good enough to take on the Kyuubi. And if Uchiha Sasuke couldn't stop the Kyuubi, Shikamaru didn't know who could.

Despite his terror, Kiba was standing on the balls of his feet, one hand on the back of his dog, ready to tackle the demon at the first occasion. Shikamaru watched them with narrow-eyed concentration. Lee, of course, was about ready to charge in without thinking. Neji himself would have jumped in, if he thought he could help, but -- but. It just went so fast-- one moment Sasuke would be on top, and a second later he'd be thrown on his back and pounced on by a snarling fox-demon. It just wasn't possible to take part in the fight. These bastards were too damn swift.

"He's playing," Shikamaru said suddenly.

Ino swore, words a young lady oughtn't use. "Playing?! If Sasuke was even a fraction of second slower, he'd be left with broken bones, at least!!"

As if to illustrate his point, one punch aimed at Sasuke's head hit a trunk, which exploded in shards at the point of impact and fell; of course, the two fighters had rolled away by then. Kyuubi pounced again; Sasuke attempted to kick him over his head once again, but this time the fox was waiting for it and kept a hold of his shirt. They landed in the water a second time, raising a wave that splashed Hinata's feet.

When they emerged, Kyuubi was laughing.

It was not a nice laugh. It was mocking, sharp, dark. Threatening.

Sasuke threw him a dirty glare, wet bangs sticking to his skin, his usual messy hair flattened, his large shirt sticking to his skin. He tugged on it, apparently annoyed at the way it pulled on his arms. Shikamaru elbowed Ino, who despite the situation was sighing dreamily.

Laughing and growling, Kyuubi pounced again, tackling Sasuke on the riverbank. Sasuke attempted to crawl out from under him, but ended up half leaning back on the muddy riverbank on his elbows, the fox slowly leaning closer. They exchanged a few words, too low for the spectators to hear. But first, Kyuubi had been smirking, and then Sasuke snapped something back, and then he wasn't anymore. He started growling, a sound so low that it almost sounded like a purr. The threat in the sound was enough to make the few birds still hanging around flee in terror.

"He wants Sasuke to submit," Shikamaru muttered, trying to assure himself that his analysis was right almost as much as sharing his opinion. "If he wanted him dead, he'd be dead..."

"If he wants him to submit, he can wait a long while," Kiba whispered back urgently. "Uchiha'd rather die than show his throat --"

"CHIDORI!!!"

There was an explosion of light as blue flashes started arcing around Sasuke's fist. Snarling in fury, the fox-demon leaped back.

"You little BITCH!!"

Sasuke had used his sudden freedom to whirl around and disappear in the forest. Howling in rage, the demon dashed off after him, his chakra swirling around him like a flame, scorching the grass under his feet.

Ino bit her fist, almost dancing in impatience. "We have to follow them!!"

"And what will we do once we find them?" Shikamaru shot back, annoyed. "Even together, we're no match for the Kyuubi. I know he's scary as hell, but he won't hurt Sasuke too badly anyway, Naruto wouldn't let him."

Kiba mumbled something. Chouji blinked at him, asking him to repeat. Pressed against his side, Hinata was blushing, eyes wide.

"Kiba?" Neji snapped coldly.

"I said," Kiba repeated sulkily, "he don't want to kill him 'nyway."

Ino blinked owlishly. "Beg you pardon? Then what--"

"Nothing. It's not important. What are we going to do?"

Kiba's face was red now. Shikamaru put it together with what he'd noticed of the fox's body language and drew his conclusion.

Rrrright.

"... let's go back to the village. We can't help, we'd just get hurt. Maybe Sakura can get him under control," he added to stall Ino, "but we have to get her first."

Lee protested, but Shikamaru outranked him and in the end, he admitted that Sasuke was probably a lot safer than either of them would be around the demon. Neji glared at them both, but Shikamaru had a feeling it was more due to the fact that Hinata was still glued to Kiba's side than any anger directed at them or even, god forbid, worry for Uchiha. Ino looked pissed as hell, but as much as he liked her, he wasn't about to risk their lives to save her old crush, when he was almost sure that Sasuke wasn't in any really life-threatening situation in the first place. Chouji was... picking up his snacks. Of course.

Tenten was nowhere in sight.

Damn it. He could not remember when exactly she had disappeared. And he didn't know her that well, but she was intelligent enough to know that she would be useless in a fight, so where -- backup. She'd gone back to Konoha to get backup.

Well, fuck.





Les betalecteuses, j'ai recu les mails de boubanath et céline/neko, mercimercimerci. pas encore eu le temps de lire les corrections, je répondrai personnellement plus tard promis je vous aime. je suis crevééééée... =___=;;;;

[identity profile] malika.livejournal.com 2004-12-18 11:43 am (UTC)(link)
That's awesome XDXD also, spotted a typo:
"Though luck. Get off the girl."

[identity profile] malika.livejournal.com 2004-12-19 09:50 am (UTC)(link)
o_____o ::loves on you for adding lemony content::

[identity profile] solitude1056.livejournal.com 2004-12-18 12:06 pm (UTC)(link)
I love it - all the reactions were hysterical - but this part had me laughing out loud:

"H-Hey! That's my girlfriend you're rubbing against!!" he yelped, hands clenched.

Neji paused, and slowly turned to look at him. Kiba ignored him. He hadn't planned to officially announce their relationship to Hinata's cousin quite like that, what with Neji being an homicidal maniac persuaded that Hinata-sama must be protected from everything.


Do NOT piss off Teh Neji!

Kyuubi opened an eye to glance at him, and snorted. "You didn't mount her yet," he commented; his voice sounded scratchy from disuse, and so low it made a shiver go up his back.

Hinata and Kiba spluttered, blushing; Neji looked fleetingly contented, as if Kiba had just gained a few days longer to live.


ROFL. Bwahahahahaha. I can just so *see* Neji going, "okay, I won't kill him...yet." Bwahahaha.

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/societe_/ 2004-12-18 12:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Tssss...Repose toi, rien ne presse. Céline? Argh, je suis démasquée! (et contente que tu l'ais reçu, mon ordi me fait des misères en ce moment (toujours en fait) j'avais peur que l'email ne soit pas parti)
Pour une nouvelle betalecture, c'est quand tu veux!
Neko²

[identity profile] sarolynne.livejournal.com 2004-12-18 02:43 pm (UTC)(link)
more naked then when he was just dry

A little typo. "Then" should be "than."

Other than that, it's very fun. Where's the rest? ;)

[identity profile] rurounitriv.livejournal.com 2004-12-18 07:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, nicely done - the action was just detailed enough to give a clear image of what was going on, without any excess words to bog it down. Can't wait for the lemon.

[identity profile] sintari.livejournal.com 2004-12-19 09:06 am (UTC)(link)
Oh thank you thank you for writing a scary, near psychotic Neji! How I love him! *clings to Neji's leg*

This was great! Everybody else already mentioned any typos I found, so now all that's left to say is... write more, please!

typo :(

[identity profile] kiwiseed.livejournal.com 2004-12-20 01:20 am (UTC)(link)
should be "tough luck." instead of "though luck". that's all. otherwise, it's totally great!!! i love you XD keep it coming!!

[identity profile] stereotyped.livejournal.com 2004-12-20 10:42 pm (UTC)(link)
WRITE MORE I COMMAND THEE>

*not coherent, i know, your fics do that to me >_<*

[identity profile] erriefiction.livejournal.com 2004-12-24 01:57 am (UTC)(link)
That was great! I just found your fics today, and I added you, just so that you know!

I await more!