FMA bunny

x_x i blame it all on girl_starfish and jmercedesd, though don't fear, Mercedes, this is not the envyxed NCS sexx0ring i was hinting about XD

This is about Envy hunting Hohenheim down to Rizenbul, but arriving there a year or so late. And he meets the chibis. At first he hates them and wants to kill them, but Ed is so obviously resentful of Hohenheim it's hard to keep it going, and they're fascinated by him. (i think they meet in a forest or something? hm)

Then Trisha meets him and she's all nice to him and yet she knows somehow that he's her husband's "son". trisha doesn't know about homunculi, they just have a tense exchange about what he's doing in the area and then she goes all "oh! this is why I felt like i knew you." she thinks envy is Hoho's natural son, and of course being so overwhelmingly nice, she offers him to stay. She doesn't notice one second that all along, he was this close to killing her.

Man, that would be difficult as hell to write convincingly. And the repercussions on the rest of that universe... would envy stop then when they try to get their mother back?
(like i said, all girl starfish's fault. i have an overwhelming need to see bigbrotherly!envy, even tho it's OOC as hell)

*puts bunny away to grow or die on its own and goes back to Garou*

raurgh.

*stabs Quatre-cheetah* Why are you so hard to wriiiite? damn you!!! be manly dammit! Save Trowa! Show that you're competent or something, or he'll never want to nail your ass!

*closes Garou and opens Heero's Week*

Right, I think i'm gonna have to abandon a previous idea, because any way i tweak it, it just doesn't fit. but eldest-Jo helped with another scene to put in its place so now it looks like i'm unstuck. yay!! *works on Duo's Turn*



EDIT:
i don't remember if i ever posted the beginning of duo's turn, so here's all i have so far. i'm too dizzy and buzzy to write more; brain's halfway to falling asleep on me. But i sort of have a better idea of what comes next now.


( Wednesday afternoon )