Cloneness, complete scene
Sat, Aug. 14th, 2004 16:49http://www.livejournal.com/users/askerian/83395.html#cutid1 for previous scene.
I think I need some help with baby talk and the way the kids react. I'm not sure it's believable. But it's really hard to guess how such a group of children might react. They range from four to fourteen year old and they all have different experiences in their pasts.
( list of the kids and their ages and what happened to them before Duo found them )
( what I posted before, maybe a little reworded here and there )
( start of the new stuff )
I think I need some help with baby talk and the way the kids react. I'm not sure it's believable. But it's really hard to guess how such a group of children might react. They range from four to fourteen year old and they all have different experiences in their pasts.
( list of the kids and their ages and what happened to them before Duo found them )
( what I posted before, maybe a little reworded here and there )
( start of the new stuff )