Brand New Ofic Thinger...
Tue, Oct. 20th, 2009 22:18... I dunno, it just happened. Actually I kinda stole the idea out of a RP I did with
sarolynne, I forget which idea it was initially.
I think there's some infodump and some parts might go too fast and some parts too slow, I don't know, but I've read it over so much I've become blind to it. Any crit is welcome.
It was supposed to be a one-shot but it's making "you can put that in chapter two!" noises, so, I don't know. .__.;
Genre: Urban fantasy.
( She's at his bedside when he wakes, and she looks like no nurse he's ever heard of. Before the lack of white coat, it's the ponytail that tells him, perched high on the side of her head. Childish. The face says twenty. )
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I think there's some infodump and some parts might go too fast and some parts too slow, I don't know, but I've read it over so much I've become blind to it. Any crit is welcome.
It was supposed to be a one-shot but it's making "you can put that in chapter two!" noises, so, I don't know. .__.;
Genre: Urban fantasy.
( She's at his bedside when he wakes, and she looks like no nurse he's ever heard of. Before the lack of white coat, it's the ponytail that tells him, perched high on the side of her head. Childish. The face says twenty. )