Teamwork chapter 7 part 2
Wed, Sep. 16th, 2009 14:42I still haven't fixed part one to be more easily understandable. I am a bad, lazy asuka. Helpful crit still welcome on that bit. Helpful crit also welcome for this bit!
I think a short personal/feeling-centric moment of interaction should happen next, but so far I'm not seeing it clearly. Hn.
( Still Sasuke. Shortish bit. )
I think a short personal/feeling-centric moment of interaction should happen next, but so far I'm not seeing it clearly. Hn.
( Still Sasuke. Shortish bit. )