*gasp* *shock* *awe!*
Fresh off the presses therefore probably riddled with mistakes, OOC-ness, heavy-handedness and lots of repetitions. If anything bothers you tell me and i'll fix it, it's just the first draft.
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Fresh off the presses therefore probably riddled with mistakes, OOC-ness, heavy-handedness and lots of repetitions. If anything bothers you tell me and i'll fix it, it's just the first draft.
Previous scene
( Teamwork 3 chapter 6 part 1 )