Newtype - chapter 4 scene 1
Mon, Feb. 9th, 2009 08:51Is Duo Maxwell behind those heists and murders? Preventers Chang and Yuy want to find out, but the backlash from the Newtypes' sudden coming out quickly throws a wrench in their investigation.
I'm not sure I balanced Wufei's understandably chaotic emotions right, or whether I managed to keep them both IC, or who knows, whether they're still IC but the angst is still way too harped on. Also, there might be plotholes. If you have crit, don't hesitate, it's just the first draft.
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