teamwork 3 scene 6 - sakura
Mon, Jun. 2nd, 2008 04:44I promise, the second this chapter is complete I'll repost everything in order and correctly numbered. Don't have time for links right now though, and this follows the latest naruto pov scene anyway, it's just I have half-there bunnies about little scenes that need to be inserted before sasuke's and i know they'll get confusing. so. yeah.
not sure what's wrong with this scene, maybe nothing, I have a feeling sasuke becomes a nonentity by the end, he was getting hard to feel for me. will flesh out later. or maybe rewrite the end it kinda bugs me. not betaed i'm so sleepy my god five am again no.fucking italics.
( (Sakura) )
not sure what's wrong with this scene, maybe nothing, I have a feeling sasuke becomes a nonentity by the end, he was getting hard to feel for me. will flesh out later. or maybe rewrite the end it kinda bugs me. not betaed i'm so sleepy my god five am again no.fucking italics.
( (Sakura) )