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FF7 - restore -- end of chapter 3
Tue, Apr. 1st, 2008 03:32That's the Cloud/Tifa/Aeris/Zack/Sephiroth thing. So they're back at the bar, and now they're putting Seph to bed so the adults can talk. yeah, or something.
Still mostly Tifa POV, and I wrote a lot of it while half-asleep -- I swear I can only write this and Crossed Wires when i'm sleep-deprived and not quite understanding what I type -- so unless a miracle happened there are probably small (or huge?) problems with characterization, and there certainly are moments that need to be described more because I went all whee dialogue, and weird syntax and whatever else. if you spot anything that stands out badly, please tell me and i'll fix it. Thank you. ;_;
"... Well! Let's see it," Aeris commented with false cheer as she tugged Tifa toward the staircase, urging everyone to stay moving. "Say, Cloud, do you have a Seal Materia? I'll cast."
"Yeah, several. Tifa? You know where they are; would you mind?"
Tifa hesitated -- she didn't want to leave Cloud and Aeris alone with Sephiroth, and she still didn't know if she could really rely on Zack all that much. But someone needed to get the Materia, and the other ones didn't know where Cloud kept them.
Tifa walked fast into Cloud's bedroom, going straight for the drawer. Her hand closed on several Seal orbs; she released them all until she found the strongest, and then she held it against her chest and went to join them upstairs. She paused and got fresh sheets for the mattress on her way, though. She berated herself all along, but she got fresh sheets, and even a blanket. She would have cheerfully -- well, not cheerfully, but determinedly -- broken the man's neck, but making him sleep in the dust just seemed too petty.
( end of chapter 3 still mostly Tifa POV )
And in other, tangentially related news:
THIS IS THE COOLEST FANMADE VIDEO EVER. Seriously, i'm in awe. It's a CG thing and it's got the girls from FF7-10 fighting the girls from Dead or Alive and OMG HOT GIRLS FIGHTIIIING. *sparklesparkle* Loved it. Srsly it looks almost professional. i want the next eps so badly. ilu![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
windandwater ♥
http://www.gametrailers.com/player/usermovies/193489.html?playlist=featured
Still mostly Tifa POV, and I wrote a lot of it while half-asleep -- I swear I can only write this and Crossed Wires when i'm sleep-deprived and not quite understanding what I type -- so unless a miracle happened there are probably small (or huge?) problems with characterization, and there certainly are moments that need to be described more because I went all whee dialogue, and weird syntax and whatever else. if you spot anything that stands out badly, please tell me and i'll fix it. Thank you. ;_;
"... Well! Let's see it," Aeris commented with false cheer as she tugged Tifa toward the staircase, urging everyone to stay moving. "Say, Cloud, do you have a Seal Materia? I'll cast."
"Yeah, several. Tifa? You know where they are; would you mind?"
Tifa hesitated -- she didn't want to leave Cloud and Aeris alone with Sephiroth, and she still didn't know if she could really rely on Zack all that much. But someone needed to get the Materia, and the other ones didn't know where Cloud kept them.
Tifa walked fast into Cloud's bedroom, going straight for the drawer. Her hand closed on several Seal orbs; she released them all until she found the strongest, and then she held it against her chest and went to join them upstairs. She paused and got fresh sheets for the mattress on her way, though. She berated herself all along, but she got fresh sheets, and even a blanket. She would have cheerfully -- well, not cheerfully, but determinedly -- broken the man's neck, but making him sleep in the dust just seemed too petty.
( end of chapter 3 still mostly Tifa POV )
And in other, tangentially related news:
THIS IS THE COOLEST FANMADE VIDEO EVER. Seriously, i'm in awe. It's a CG thing and it's got the girls from FF7-10 fighting the girls from Dead or Alive and OMG HOT GIRLS FIGHTIIIING. *sparklesparkle* Loved it. Srsly it looks almost professional. i want the next eps so badly. ilu
windandwater ♥http://www.gametrailers.com/player/usermovies/193489.html?playlist=featured