Sat, Mar. 29th, 2008

askerian: Serious Karkat in a red long-sleeved shirt (T7_Seven - Punky)
Okay, writing sum Teamwork today. But oh man it's going so slooooooooooow. How come some days I can write three pages in one hour and today I needed three hours to pull out enough words for one paragraph? I don't get it.

I was thinking I'd post some to ffnet so people would stop whining that I've abandoned the fic it's not like i've ever abandoned a big fic so they really have no valid reason to be afraid ahaha, but Saro is in Paris which means she cannot beta, and finding myself a replacement just seems too difficult. I don't know who to ask. x__x So once again, i'm relying on the kindness of my trusty F-list. If you feel like reading this again, yay! and if you feel like pointing out some grammar/vocabulary/syntax mistake or other, double-yay!

Also, I've got a problem, I kind of think there should be a downtime scene between those two -- they're "end of first chuunin test" and "beginning of second chuunin test" and that's all action and team and meeting OCs stuff, it's too dry. I need me some inter-team romance or at least cute stuff. It's probably going to be Naruto POV because his next scene is small... Or Sasuke. Problem: what could happen? They're on a Mist Village island, supposed to be training, and probably being spied on by a bazilion rivals and Mist nin. If you have a prompt or a suggestion, I will love you forever, because I can't think of anything. I'm drawing a huge blank.

teamwork 3 - chapter 2 repost. Italics are for the weak. )

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