More ff7 ficcage! Restore, end of chapter 2
Thu, Aug. 30th, 2007 21:52So apparently there are awkward not-quite-english sentence structures in there. If you can spot them, or any other kind of mistake, it will be a great help. .___. ♥
I can't help but feel it drags on a bit, and I can't tell if it's because I spent a while sticking all the pieces together, or if it's because it really does lose its momentum and rambles on. Hn. Suggestions welcome.
As for fic names, I think I'll call this one Restore, and the one where Seph and Zack end up at the North crater Revive, after materias. Restore gets to be this one because they're getting back to a good life and the plot starts from there, but there are other unrelated-to-resurrection things coming up too. The other one is more about them reviving... in the middle of nowhere. And then dealing with the shit that falls on them in direct consequence to it.
Okay, it's going to be confusing as hell, but hey, that's the best idea I've gotten so far. .__.;
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I can't help but feel it drags on a bit, and I can't tell if it's because I spent a while sticking all the pieces together, or if it's because it really does lose its momentum and rambles on. Hn. Suggestions welcome.
As for fic names, I think I'll call this one Restore, and the one where Seph and Zack end up at the North crater Revive, after materias. Restore gets to be this one because they're getting back to a good life and the plot starts from there, but there are other unrelated-to-resurrection things coming up too. The other one is more about them reviving... in the middle of nowhere. And then dealing with the shit that falls on them in direct consequence to it.
Okay, it's going to be confusing as hell, but hey, that's the best idea I've gotten so far. .__.;
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