Teamwork 2 -- epilogue
Sun, Jun. 3rd, 2007 02:57Okay so.
yeah, I wrote the epilogue before I completed the main chapter. It's not my fault everything under the sun talks to me more than that stupid limelemonthing right now. XD
Not sure it actually works, whether it hints at what was going on behind the scene properly, blahblahblah. Also not betaed, fresh off the presses, please tell me if you catch grammar weirdnesses; Also it's Kakashi POV and I suck at Kakashi, please tell me if you find anywhere that sounds unKakashilike, pretty please.
But mostly. DOES IT SOUND BELIVABLE AND LIKELY. D: Because it's short enough and I could probably rewrite it. or find something else, if the scene is scrape-worthy.
thanks to
joisbishmyoga,
sarolynne and
phoenix_melody for letting me babble at them and suggesting things. XD
( Epilogue : Damage Control (Kakashi) )
yeah, I wrote the epilogue before I completed the main chapter. It's not my fault everything under the sun talks to me more than that stupid limelemonthing right now. XD
Not sure it actually works, whether it hints at what was going on behind the scene properly, blahblahblah. Also not betaed, fresh off the presses, please tell me if you catch grammar weirdnesses; Also it's Kakashi POV and I suck at Kakashi, please tell me if you find anywhere that sounds unKakashilike, pretty please.
But mostly. DOES IT SOUND BELIVABLE AND LIKELY. D: Because it's short enough and I could probably rewrite it. or find something else, if the scene is scrape-worthy.
thanks to
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( Epilogue : Damage Control (Kakashi) )