(teamwork) chapter 6, scenes 7 and 8
Mon, Aug. 21st, 2006 01:33Okay, so the first scene feels a little rough/awkward in a few spots and it bugs me; suggestions welcome. I switched bits around and i'm not sure they fit anymore, but it was that or even more blatant OOC. In the end I might have to get rid of the funny, because it STILL seems ooc to me.
Then we finally have Sakura showing some of these pregnancy hormones and maybe a bit of backbone, le gasp. mmm lil'angst. And then I drown you all in fluff BECAUSE I CAN.
The fluff is utterly disgusting in its cuteness, be warned. x_x
( The Plan. Dun dun dunn duuunnnn. )
Then we finally have Sakura showing some of these pregnancy hormones and maybe a bit of backbone, le gasp. mmm lil'angst. And then I drown you all in fluff BECAUSE I CAN.
The fluff is utterly disgusting in its cuteness, be warned. x_x
( The Plan. Dun dun dunn duuunnnn. )