(teamwork2) chapter 6, scene... i forget.
Fri, Jun. 9th, 2006 01:05beginning of the next scene. I was trying to finish it before posting, but blargh, got distracted for two hours and now Sakura and Naruto are refusing to be cute and I'm ze sleepy. So... blah.
Not sure if the action is clear, or if something is lacking, and some of my choices of words make me doubt a bit. Hrrm. Suggestions plz?
( Naruto is so smooth. )
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In unrelated news, someone's got to explain to me how a fic being a multiparter means it doesn't count as NC-17. Maybe they meant that a multiparter can't deserve the NC-17 in each and every chapter -- oh, wait, still doesn't make sense. Oh well. *shrug*
Oh, hey. Chan = anything with pre-teens. Guess that rules out anything that happens pre-timeskip then. I wonder if bestiality is allowed?
Not sure if the action is clear, or if something is lacking, and some of my choices of words make me doubt a bit. Hrrm. Suggestions plz?
( Naruto is so smooth. )
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In unrelated news, someone's got to explain to me how a fic being a multiparter means it doesn't count as NC-17. Maybe they meant that a multiparter can't deserve the NC-17 in each and every chapter -- oh, wait, still doesn't make sense. Oh well. *shrug*
Oh, hey. Chan = anything with pre-teens. Guess that rules out anything that happens pre-timeskip then. I wonder if bestiality is allowed?