(teamwork) chapter 6, scene ...4? I think.
Sat, May. 20th, 2006 05:31Might need to smooth it out a bit... describe the action a bit more or something. But for some reason i'm getting all jittery (might need sugar) so i'mma gonna stop poking here. Plz to be telling me if you see something that sounds weird, or typos, or think an action or dialogue lacks setting/padding.
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