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I'm letting my threesome (NaruSasuSaku, as if that's a surprise to anyone) for the themed drabbles community thirtyforthree go. If anyone's interested, they're now up for grabs.

Damn you, Teamwork, pretending to give some of your alloted inspiration, and then taking it all back. è.é

*obediently goes to work on more Teamwork*


ETA: Woohoo, I got Cercle fanfic!! XD

So I was nagging sleepyJo because she's not supposed to sleep yet and what better way to keep her awake than by making her write stuff for me! yeah, I thought so too. :D


joisbishmyoga: Hon, I can't quite remember how to make the puppyeye emoticon. You seriously want me even attempting to do anything creative or productive right now?

askerian: :D it could be fun

askerian: in a "i'm gonna print this out so i can mock you years from now" way

joisbishmyoga: ...

askerian: O:-)

joisbishmyoga: Once upon a time, there was a totally-uke-but-in-denial unicorn, and a half-demon whore. They had UST liek whoa -- the "U" part being ALL the unicorn's fault -- which drove everything with two X chromosomes across three dimensions into an absolute frenzy. One day, the frenzied horde descended upon the pair, and the unicorn succumbed to un-U-ing the UST out of sheer self-preservation. The horde took lots of pictures and made a video, and they lived happily ever after.

joisbishmyoga: P.S. - the half-demon whore went on to reinvent the gay kama sutra with the unicorn, including the supplemental "beastiality only not really since they're both sentient", equine, and humanoid avian volumes. And the horde died of joy, resurrected, and lived happily ever after as zombies.

joisbishmyoga: P.P.S. - damn, the half-demon can be kinky. Wonder how he talked the unicorn into some of this stuff?


*dies and is ded* XD that is SO how i'll finally manage to solve the aske/rei relationship mess.

(teamwork) first two scenes of chapter 5 (Sasuke POV)

I'm not sure I like everything in the first section. The second section might need to be fluffed up -- mood, actions -- or it might not, but I'm a bit more secure about the in-character-ness and enjoyment factor. It might be because I don't like long POV pieces and had to read the first bit way too often, but Sasuke sounds whiny and emo instead of reasonably worried and, well, brooding.

Also, I'm a tiny bit scared that it sounds too much like everything's about Sakura. Sure, one of the main plot points puts emphasis on what she's going through, but I really don't want to have all other characters fall into her orbit. (again, I'm much less worried about the second part than the first.)

If you have ideas on how to tweak that -- editing a few sentences? any other suggestions? -- please tell me. If you don't see what the hell I'm talking about and think I'm paranoid, also please tell me. I really don't know if it's all in my head or what.

( first scene )

( second scene )