Not sure the scene is finished this time but i'm stuck again, so here it is. The end line sucks mightily though, so if you could offer suggestions... *siiigh*
everything from that fic so far:
http://www.livejournal.com/users/reiyel/5036.html
The OCs, and all you need to know about them:
Yumeko: Sakura's cousin. (a redhead, imperious, somewhat sarcastic, though not mean. She likes makeup and tends to attract a clique)
Kimi: (girl) Yumeko's best friend. (blonde, very sweet and enthusiastic, a bit naïve and chatty)
Ken: (boy) Dirty blond, works out to attract the ladies. Can be amusing; very competitive. Thinks he's smooth. Gives nicknames.
Junta: (boy) Smooth black hair, black eyes, very tall and thin. Wears glasses. Bit of a dork.
Hiroshi: (boy) Messy black hair, brown eyes. Smiles a lot, generally helpful, secretly mischievous.
( the beginning of the scene, that i posted a while ago )
( The new stuff. Unfinished? Dunno. )
everything from that fic so far:
http://www.livejournal.com/users/reiyel/5036.html
The OCs, and all you need to know about them:
Yumeko: Sakura's cousin. (a redhead, imperious, somewhat sarcastic, though not mean. She likes makeup and tends to attract a clique)
Kimi: (girl) Yumeko's best friend. (blonde, very sweet and enthusiastic, a bit naïve and chatty)
Ken: (boy) Dirty blond, works out to attract the ladies. Can be amusing; very competitive. Thinks he's smooth. Gives nicknames.
Junta: (boy) Smooth black hair, black eyes, very tall and thin. Wears glasses. Bit of a dork.
Hiroshi: (boy) Messy black hair, brown eyes. Smiles a lot, generally helpful, secretly mischievous.