Previous part: http://www.livejournal.com/users/askerian/170951.html
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and i'm still writing, but slowly, so i don't know if i'll post more today, but hey, you know me, i'm a review whore. *stares at inbox* *staaaares*
Please tell me what works or doesn't work (kinda scared that Sakura comes across as pretentious, or that the OCs are hard to understand/picture/stuff), and if there are things you'd like to see or suggestions of scenes (things you'd think kids like that would do or talk about), please give them to me. I actually don't hang around with groups of friends that much, so i'm more or less pulling the interaction here out of my ass and some vague memories of high school years. x_x;;
( end of the previous scene and start of another one... )
and i'm still writing, but slowly, so i don't know if i'll post more today, but hey, you know me, i'm a review whore. *stares at inbox* *staaaares*
Please tell me what works or doesn't work (kinda scared that Sakura comes across as pretentious, or that the OCs are hard to understand/picture/stuff), and if there are things you'd like to see or suggestions of scenes (things you'd think kids like that would do or talk about), please give them to me. I actually don't hang around with groups of friends that much, so i'm more or less pulling the interaction here out of my ass and some vague memories of high school years. x_x;;