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RAR!! *determined!!*
(no reason for the icon, just felt like Itachi today and the only pretty face icons I have of him have mean things written on it. XD)
Today, I rewrite Teamwork.
Well, the first chapter, at least.
... if I can stop cringing long enough to actually dwell on it. ~__~;;;
I'm not going to ask people to re-read it just so they can help me, but if anyone remembers something they wondered about back then, or some scene that was too long or not enough or a little awkward or whatever, I will love you forever and ever. ♥
(and yes, the Anko thing is one of the problems I'll try to fix. It sounds like bashing and nnngh. *annoyed at self*)
... gnnh, i hate rewriting. ~___~
Today, I rewrite Teamwork.
Well, the first chapter, at least.
... if I can stop cringing long enough to actually dwell on it. ~__~;;;
I'm not going to ask people to re-read it just so they can help me, but if anyone remembers something they wondered about back then, or some scene that was too long or not enough or a little awkward or whatever, I will love you forever and ever. ♥
(and yes, the Anko thing is one of the problems I'll try to fix. It sounds like bashing and nnngh. *annoyed at self*)
... gnnh, i hate rewriting. ~___~
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Ah, I always figured the twitchiness with the parentals was due to the whole "these two know I fucked their daughter and got her pregnant and Sakura will be so pissed if I make them mad" thing.