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askerian ([personal profile] askerian) wrote2012-06-11 10:34 pm

teamwork babble! :O

Someone sent me Teamwork-related questions, and I babbled a bit, and now i'm in a teamworky moodso hey. Here they are if you're interested, and if you guys have any questions of your own that won't spoil the next fic then I'll answer them.


>what is Sakura and Sasuke's relationship like when Naruto happens to just not be around for a while, like if he is on a solo mission or is out training with Jiraiya or anything really?

So far it hasn't happened much yet since they got together! They haven't been separated for more than a few hours to maybe a weekend, and even when they're not living together they still train or have missions. For the shorter breaks Naruto often wanders out to go see Iruka or Shikamaru and Kiba and the rest of the group and those evenings Sasuke and Sakura apparently take the chance to have a quiet day in. XD Often they'll be reading scrolls or books in the same room and not talking much. Sasuke likes it, he finds it restful and he does consider it something he does with Sakura, not just him pretending she's not here at all (he'd go in another room, and sometimes he does go into another room and lock himself in, that's different for him). Sasuke likes it some days because she knows what Sasuke means by it, and some days she'd like to chat but she doesn't want to disturb him too much and she wonders if maybe she isn't reading too much into it and he is, in fact, not even really noticing she's here.

So yeah, it's a bit awkward, mostly from her side. Sasuke assumes she understands him and his motives and thoughts, but he isn't fully taking into account her own needs about communication and closeness, and the thing is Sakura usually *does* get him really well, but sometimes she doubts herself and her understanding, since it's mostly wordless and she has a tendency not to trust her instincts, or to be down on herself in general. So Sasuke would be more awkward as well if he stopped assuming it's all fine. XD

Mind, that doesn't happen every time they're alone together. Sometimes Sakura feels daring or Sasuke feels... I don't know, cuddly? husbandly? XD and they'll be kind of leaning shoulder to shoulder and end up kind of cuddling. But first they have to test the waters for like a half hour or something. XDDD They're too used to Naruto dragging them in and getting things started.


>My next question is about Jin. He is a Kunoichi and straight, does that help or hinder is ability to detach himself from the job.

This is kinda complicated. The issue isn't really that he's straight, the training does help not taking people's advances personally whether they're men or women -- he does sometimes get a bit aroused when getting close to very pretty women but he sees that as a distraction and "damn it why do I have so many hormones stupid teenagerhood", it doesn't happen with men -- it's that he's kinda macho, he wants to be a protector, only with his build and his face it's just not happening and he has to keep pretending to be frail and sensitive and while he can hide his true reactions for the good of the mission, that chafes. He'd be just as irritated if he was gay, only he'd be annoyed that sometimes his hormones get a foothold into his control and react inappropriately to targets (especially if he was passing as a girl at the time, sudden!erection isn't a surprise a lot of men would be happy about. XD) He does find men more dangerous to get close to, but they're also more predictable in some ways, and it's not related to his sexuality.

Anyway, he's not supposed to enjoy macking on people he's going to steal from or even kill later on, so long story short it's not that much of a bother and he has long since learned to see kissing and caressing people he's not attracted to as a performance art rather than anything personal. It's just when people learn that he's a guy and they immediately assume he's gay and naturally effeminate to boot, it pisses him off.


>Also, does he target the closet lesbians as well?

Hahaha, likely so. It'd be hilarious, wouldn't it. His target is pretty much anyone his mission persona pings as their type, he can adapt.

>(also I was wondering if I could write some fanfiction for you about Jin. I like the character and I would not post it unless I have express permission, I would credit you, and link back to you if I did. I am not much of a artist but I would love to give some fan stuff in your direction and my only real talent is writing, I do really love your universe)

Oooh, that would be awesome! Please feel free to write, post, whatever you want.

>Then there is Kyuubi and his giving chakra to the kid no matter who is the actual father would Shukaku have that happen to him as well if he was in heat and if the threesome happened to be GaaSakuNaru instead... would both of their chakra be sent into the kid or just one? Or would depend on who is in heat?

I think if Shuukaku had been anywhere near Kyuubi when he was half-freed and running on instinct things would have ended rather badly. Kyuubi wouldn't have let a male he didn't consider his at Sakura, especially one who might possibly (i don't think anyone's ever tried it so possibly not even the demons know?) erase/dominate the chakra bond he was tying into the potential baby. Sasuke wasn't a challenge in that way and Naruto's possessiveness leaked through to Kyuubi, but he doesn't see Gaara like that.

That or they'd have forgotten Sakura to tear each other to shreds and hatefuck until the village was a hole in the ground. XD

I admit I haven't thought much about how Shuukaku works and how his seal is set up.

>I am also unclear on when exactly the universe goes AU from the series. It probably says it somewhere, but I may have missed it and can't for the life of me find it.

During the Naruto/Sasuke fight at Valley of the End, but I haven't yet managed to write that flashback. Every time I get close to mentioning it the story swerves on me and argh. Long story short Kyuubi being more active he was gaining more influence during the fight, and so during the last pass instead of scratching Sasuke's headband Naruto put his hand through his lung. Sasuke was in the hospital for a while, it's mentioned in the prequel Progression but not really explained wtf happened to land him there. After that Itachi killed Orochimaru, because he was fine with Sasuke going to him if it was his decision but Oro was getting annoyed with his lateness and planned to kidnap him and that just was not on, so Sasuke didn't have anywhere to go so he stayed in Konoha. He kinda hated everyone and treated them like shit for the next two years. XD

>My last question for now is how far does your universe match with the cannon besides the obvious. Do you pick and choose what you like from cannon and leave the rest, do you try to keep some cannon on purpose, or do you just not care one way or the other?

If something neat is unveiled that doesn't mess up my plans, I tend to grab it. Even if it doesn't make it to the screen, for example Kushina being Naruto's mom, it's just that in my 'verse she wasn't a jinchuuriki since I'd said before Naruto was the first, but Kushina being awesome I am totally grabbing the hell out of her if I ever have a reason to mention her at all. I also grabbed Sai and Tenzou because I like them as characters and Konoha is a big village and it means two OCs I don't have to make up! If it doesn't match, I go with my previous ideas, unless the new canon is really awesome and works better with the plot than what I had planned instead. So far that hasn't happened yet, though. I had the Kyuubi as a summon idea two years before Kishi put it in his manga, damn it!!!! *pout pout pout* XDD;
Feel free to send more questions as you remember them, and I hope you won't mind if I post the answers on my journal for other fans, I haven't written or talked about Teamwork in so long I think they're feeling neglected. XD; They're good questions, at any rate!
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[identity profile] ravelqueen.livejournal.com 2012-06-11 09:01 pm (UTC)(link)
uhh questions, yay, I love world building and explaining, ok here goes:

1) How many of their friends and how many people in the village know really what their relationship is?

2) do you think in that verse that if Naruto hadn't come into heat they would have gotten together differently or maybe only SasuNaru or SakuNaru?

3)at what point in the story have the feelings between those three balanced out, or do you think it still has to happen?

4) Why was Ankos reaction to their threesome so disgusted?

(also didn't you want to write the spin-off Neiji/Hinata/Naruto at some point ;P, oops that is not a real question I guess^^)
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[identity profile] ravelqueen.livejournal.com 2012-06-11 09:55 pm (UTC)(link)
uhh it's all so interesting^^

do you plan on Sakura's parents finding out that Naruto and Sasuke are dating too? For that matter, do you think that those two will ever be able to be more affectionate with each other as they mellow out?

How would Naruto have told Sasuke and Sakura about Kyuubi if it hadn't happened the way it did?

and another follow up to 2) do you think that either of them would have moved on and found different partners? if so who? and what are Kakashi's thoughts on Sasuke's obsession with Naruto anyway, when he first noticed it (cause he must have noticed it before The Night)
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[identity profile] ravelqueen.livejournal.com 2012-06-11 09:57 pm (UTC)(link)
that's totally fine...I probably would have skipped most of it anyway, because argh the angst it burns, but I was really looking forward to the sex to be honest. Because there is just not enough fic out there where other people just want to take care of Naruto (still waiting for more of Sasuke and Sakura ganging up on Naruto to really drive him out of his mind and show him how much they love and appreciate him sex in teamwork ^_^)

[identity profile] therhoda.livejournal.com 2012-06-12 01:43 am (UTC)(link)
is it a sad thing i saw the icon for this post and had to go track down that vid again

I love the crack!

[identity profile] venia.livejournal.com 2012-06-12 11:44 am (UTC)(link)
I already asked this in the past but, how on earth did the Hokage and Kakashi and the whole freakin' council KNOW that the three of them had had sex the first time? If they just happened to see them walking piss-drunk in the streets the night before, why did they only arrive the next morning? (unless it's a "that's how the story is" answer XD;)


(I SAW their ring on a store by the way. With three interwined parts in gold, silver and pink, kyaah :D)

(Anonymous) 2012-06-12 09:31 pm (UTC)(link)
If you're still taking questions....

Does sage mode exist in the Teamwork universe and will any member of Team 7 reach it? QueenSlug!Sakura and NekoSage!Sasuke would be good for a laugh.

And


Will any of the members of Team Taka meet Sasuke in this universe? If not, what happens to them?

(Anonymous) 2012-06-12 10:13 pm (UTC)(link)

Sakura adopting the dog summons makes a lot of sense. Kakashi's always focused on Sasuke and Naruto and this balances things out more between the team.

Though it probably won't happen, Suigetsu meetings Sasuke in this universe would be hilarious. They won't ping as much because they don't have that common background as before but I can see Suigetsu perving on Sasuke because 1) he's fiesty, 2) it causes chaos, 3) he's hot. Naruto would be all protective and wtf about it and Sakura would be all silently amused.

Poor Juugo! ToT

[identity profile] lurker-lost.livejournal.com 2012-06-13 05:34 am (UTC)(link)
Very interesting answers -- especially about Anko and the SasuSaku-alone-at-home dynamic.

Questions:
Did Jin remind Naruto of Haku at all?
How would Jin and Haku react if they ever met in some AU somewhere?
Would Anko ever consider teaching Sasuke some of Orochimaru's techniques?

[identity profile] frynmar.livejournal.com 2012-06-13 10:19 pm (UTC)(link)

Hi!

You answering questions about Teamwork and getting into a Teamwork writing mood made me get into a Teamwork reading mood :)

So I went back and re-read Teamwork 1 and now I'm curious about something: Sasuke didn't seem surprised about his attraction to Naruto, didn't seem like he minded it and ddn't seem like he wanted to do anything about it; how did he feel about Naruto and what does he think about his attraction to Naruto?

More generally, what does he think about his sexuality?

And thinking that 'making out was never going to be better than training' and that 'High chakra levels always gave him something of a figurative hard-on' were his actual thoughts?

Sorry if that's too many questions or if you answered this somewhere else but the only thing I remember is you saying in a comment that Sasuke is attracted to anything powerful. If there's more about this in Teamwork 2 or 3 I really don't remember - it's been a while since I read them so I might not remember a lot of the details.

If it's ok I might come back with more questions in the following days.

A big thumbs-up to who sent you the first set of questions; and they were really interesting questions as well.

I love it when authors answer questions or give their opinion about their stories. I almost always like reading comments detailing their thought process or just giving extra information on the story and characters. That's one of the great things about fandom - how easily and naturally people interact and how close you can be to the creative process, from lurking to beta reading :)
Edited 2012-06-13 22:30 (UTC)

[identity profile] trishalynn.livejournal.com 2012-06-16 10:19 am (UTC)(link)
Yup, Sasuke started officially thinking about how kissing Naruto and sticking his hand down his pants might be sorta nice *after* Naruto stuck a hand through his lung. :X

Lemme channel Ino for a bit here: "Man, that's fucked up." :D

[identity profile] trishalynn.livejournal.com 2012-06-16 10:21 am (UTC)(link)
Sorry, ancillary question to this: So really, now that Sasuke knows that it wasn't just Naruto, it was Naruto with Kyuubi's help who stuck a hand through his lung, does he still love Naruto's strength?

[identity profile] frynmar.livejournal.com 2012-06-20 10:55 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks! Awesome answers! And way more detailed than I would have dreamed of XD
They also give rise to new questions but I don't know how to phrase them yet. Same for what I've reread of Teamwork 1 & 2 :/

Yeah, Teamwork 1 is pretty old ^__^ but it doesn't really feel so. Your style has been good from the start and pretty constant throughout so there isn't this horrible clash between the first and last chapter that you usually see when someone has been writing for that long. It's like you had a mature style from the get-go (though I haven't read anything earlier than No Kunoichi and Teamwork 1). Plus the Teamwork verse is very well defined and pretty separate from canon ('canon-independent'?) so really Teamwork 1 doesn't feel old at all. Maybe from a fandom perspective - there was a freshness to the fandom back then that's given way to something more settled imo.


What you've said in your posts helps me understand teamwork!Sasuke better. He's... less repressed than how people usually write him. I think I like that. He's usually pretty exaggerated and I was so used to reading him like that I got confused over his normal reactions in Teamwork ^__^


"And there's a part of him that admires and is grateful to Naruto in a very platonic, kid with a hero crush way, but like fuck he is mentioning this."
That's touching and IC. I think manga!Sasuke had a lot of admiration for Naruto while he was still in Konoha. It was definitely there, though I'm not sure how important that is to him anymore or what he thinks of it (as of start of The Fourth Shinobi War - where I'm at with the manga).


"It's gonna come out anyway, of course, not fun if it doesn't"
so true XD
though I'm not sure what would bother Naruto about that. too intense? too twisted?



I do have a couple of questions that I can ask now:

- I was rereading the dinner over at Sakura's parents and I'm very curious to know what each of her parents were thinking throughout the evening; what were their impressions of the boys and the whole situation? And I have to add I really like Yukihiro. He's one of the best OCs I've seen so far and he's such a likeable man.

- Sasuke's breakdown and vulnerability the evening he burned down his family home brought him very close to how I think he actually is. He knows it too. And he seems to know how much of what he does is just pretend. Does he really think shutting away what he feels and being so out of touch with himself is a mark of strength? Or am I being insensitive and that's something he needs to do to keep it together? Being so out of touch with yourself is such a glaring weakness, and he is completely aware of doing it. Does he do that because he honestly doesn't know it's weak and confuses it with being strong? Or he does know better but he's already doing the best he can and it would be asking too much of him to do more given what he's been through?
Maybe he's actually in control and not fooling himself at all. He's a smart guy after all, and resilient as well. I like that idea but it doesn't seem likely.


kinda off topic: it's incredibly irritating when people who take the manga (semi)seriously are condescending towards the characters like all the shit going on in Naruto is as simple as a walk in the park, 'how dare he leave the village?!?! if I had all my family murdered I'd totally have the strength to make all the right decisions'. *insert any variant of 'they are doing it wrong' here, especially 'why can't he just open up'... hmm... really? seriously?*
That's not what the second question is about. It's more about Sasuke's mindset and how he sees himself. I know it's not very clear but I've waited long enough to post and I doubt my thoughts on the issue will get any clearer any time soon, if at all hehe

(still off topic: not to mention, I don't necessarily agree leaving the village HAS TO be completely wrong. The way he let himself be pushed into it is more of a problem than actually leaving imho.)

I really appreciated getting a glympse of an unguarded Sasuke in Teamwork 2.


Despite my best efforts, my posts may tend to ramble. Hope you don't mind ^__^

[identity profile] romantiscue.livejournal.com 2012-06-26 09:17 pm (UTC)(link)
"You stuck your hand through my lung and then I knew you would kill me if I tried to leave again, and staying was a setback to my life goal but dying would have been a total failure and so I didn't *have* to leave and I didn't want to leave so... So yeah thanks for almost killing me in a fit of rage and possessiveness, best thing that ever happened to me."

This kind of makes a lot of sense to me, since Sasuke was/is feeling that he owes his family a "debt" and that he has to choose the path that'll lead to Itachi's eventual death no matter what he actually /wants/, and so having the choice taken away from him would be a relief because then he wouldn't be shirking his duty but also wouldn't have to leave.

Or, sorry, that's just how I interpreted it *pops up to comment* XD

[identity profile] romantiscue.livejournal.com 2012-06-26 09:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, yay, got it right! I have a tendency to overthink characters' motivations for stuff, but you imply below-the-surface reasons very well XD

[identity profile] loveandallthat.livejournal.com 2012-06-15 03:05 am (UTC)(link)
Ah, I love the Teamwork dedication/questioning. It is nice that you are willing to indulge! Of course, when the opportunity to ask questions is presented in such a lovely way, anything I've ever wondered just jumps out the window.

Just a silly one, then. Relating to the wedding sidefic where Neji thinks everyone is a little in love with Naruto. Who would you say you could argue (or twist slightly, or whatever) to fit the thought, other than Hinata and Neji? I don't know if I mean by the time of the wedding, or at the current stopping point, so whichever works best! I just think it's so weird/funny/fascinating/NARUTO to think that Naruto would just not notice people pining away after him (exaggeration) but that a lot of people might be.

(And with the answered question above, I love the thought of Sasuke's surprisingly intense feelings coming out and startling the pants off of Naruto.)

[identity profile] loveandallthat.livejournal.com 2012-06-15 09:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Dah random NaruShika love moment. I can totally imagine a 'verse existing where Naruto (or Shika, or both) is/are in a relationship with other people, and it somehow comes out that he and Shikamaru had a THING in the past. And everyone is shocked because 1, either of them having a past at all, 2, them with each other, 3, them keeping this all a secret. Though I'm also content to imagine Shika sitting around thinking MOSTLY just that Naruto is impressive in general, and then having that faint nagging curiousity... I mean, canon Shika obviously paid attention to Naruto's feelings and understood him soooooo. *is in happy place* Would you believe they're NOT my OTP? I'm just a slut.

(Thank you for the imagination fodder.)
Edited 2012-06-15 22:25 (UTC)

[identity profile] trishalynn.livejournal.com 2012-06-16 10:22 am (UTC)(link)
Poor Shino. Doomed to loneliness and romances with OCs. :)

[identity profile] romantiscue.livejournal.com 2012-06-26 08:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you for doing a Q&A! I love it when authors do stuff like this.

I read your Isuka POV prequel-y scene, and it made me wonder about something. How did Kakashi react to getting the summons (from the Isuka prequel)? Was he surprised at the three-way relationship that developed?

[identity profile] romantiscue.livejournal.com 2012-06-26 09:10 pm (UTC)(link)
What a prompt reply :D

Now I'm curious - how did he react the first time there was a sleepwalking-alert? (assuming he was one of those/the one sent out to deal with it)

Wait, so Kakashi knew there was a possibility of SasuNaru? I kind of expected that, but still. Hmm, which couple did he think was more likely?

Also, poor Kakashi XD Every time he tries to read Icha Icha Two, Bad Mental Images pop up at him *imagines him having all but given up on reading that particular part of the book* *also imagines him having dreamt something he /really/ did not want to dream about, and waking up and lamenting the lack of brain bleach*

Annnnd, I'm also incredibly curious about who he's had to shut up, and how? *slow grin*

[identity profile] romantiscue.livejournal.com 2012-06-26 09:41 pm (UTC)(link)
I... do that too, so that's okay *winces at thought of FF inbox*

Ohhh, somehow the thought of Kakashi and Naruto roaming together strikes me as kind of hot, all predator and smooth elite jounin stalking the night. And, alright, also Kakashi freaking out on the inside is also kind of interesting and makes me want to cackle. Just a little. Oh, on that note, what was Kakashi thinking when he and the other jounin showed up all bamf and chased off Kisame and Itachi during the chunin exam, and Naruto was all kyuubi'd?

"if Naruto gave Sasuke a good dicking maybe Sasuke would settle the hell down" - So Kakashi got the bottom-vibe from Sasuke? XD Heh, what do the rest of... everyone (well, the Rookies)... think the 'bedroom dynamics' are like?
I appreciate Kakashi not having an OTP XD ...at least not consciously. (yeah, he would, wouldn't he? also the aftermath... a lot more than most, I should think.)

"because if he corrects someone's bias, immediately his own objectivity is questioned" Kind of sacrificing the comments he might make otherwise to makes sure he doesn't come off as compromised and gets booted out of the group dealing directly with the whole *gestures* thing.

[identity profile] romantiscue.livejournal.com 2012-06-26 10:16 pm (UTC)(link)
People always seem to have faith in Naruto, don't they? Almost, kind of, despite themselves. Even super-genius Copy nin etc. Kakashi unconsciously chucks logic to the side in the face of Naruto's inherent stubborn, Naruto-ness. I can see him mentally kind of listing all the bad stuff going down, all cool and calm, but also really freaking but purely /feeling/ himself calm when he realized that Naruto was still awake. Like a cool rush through the panicking he totally wasn't doing, and he wouldn't even notice that it had calmed him so much, until afterwards (maybe).

"iyaaa~n" ROFL XD Sasuke would murderize you if he ever read this post. Ohh, does this mean that there is switching going on later? (I thought it might be, in that comfort sex after the killing-children-angst, but I wasn't sure, BECAUSE YOU TOTALLY WROTE THAT AMBIGUOUSLY) Anyway, you're one of few authors I've read who doesn't have the top/bottom roles somehow define the character's personality (I'm looking at you, wimpy-blushy-weak-uke-phenomenon!), so I'm mostly just slightly curious.

"Shika is officially Not Thinking About It." Is Shika of the 200 Theories in a Minute capable of not thinking about it? Color me surprised XD I thought he might be like Kakashi, trying not to think about it and kind of failing a little. Or a lot. Anyway, I like that people have different opinions (though I'm curious about what, hah, /Lee/ thinks XD was he still interested in Sakura?) about who goes in whom, rather than everyone being all 'he's obviously teh uke heh!' ...and I think Ino should graciously gift them with the Kama Sutra to give them Ideas XD

What a thin edge he has to thread. Wonder if he ever wishes his students were less important/infamous...

[identity profile] romantiscue.livejournal.com 2012-06-26 10:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Hm, you know, put like that... he could make a pretty good spy. Or recruiter or whatever. XD If not for the, eh, total lack of subtlety.

Ahh, he has? :) How did Sasuke feel about that? Not...like...porn...? *blinks uncomprehendingly* Somehow, I now want to stand up and shout 'BLASPHEMY!' and wave my fist towards the sky. ...well, no, but I love your porn and definitely think this should be written, when you feel like it ;D And, haaaaah, yeah Naruto totally didn't like it, in the same way Sasuke doesn't like it. To complete the set, Sakura should declare she doesn't like it either XD

"if he brains hard enough" Er? What, if he brains himself?

"in his heart of hearts he thinks Naruto tops, because Naruto" Best explanation evarrr XD

[identity profile] romantiscue.livejournal.com 2012-06-26 11:15 pm (UTC)(link)
:DDD *GRIN* I SO PROMPTED YOU. AND YOU SO LET ME.

Summary: Ngh *spine-tingles* And they haven't even done anything much yet! *rereads*

The way Sasuke goes about it all bastardly 'you're going to like it, now shut up' and Naruto being curious, but also not really wanting to be (except maybe he kind of does) and Sasuke calling him a coward because he won't acknowledge it. Because he's being a coward, kinda, and also because it's the perfect way to get Naruto to react. For two people who are so different, they're also kind of really alike sometimes, wanting-not-wanting, though of course Sasuke has it down to an art form.

I like how Naruto really is entrusting himself, this experience, to Sasuke. And how Sasuke notices that that's what Naruto is doing. Also, Sasuke stating the obvious in the form of dirty talk is much approved of XD And also that this is a 'game', or maybe a challenge, that the aim of this particular thing is to make Naruto like it. It's so Sasuke, somehow, to think like that. Like it's a mission to be completed. Well, a mission with hot sex and disguised tenderness.

"but honest reading porn is love but writing it is hate." Eh, I think it's like wanking. If you're at it for long, your fingers/hand/arms gets tired, but at the end of it you have a whole lot of pleasure XD

AND YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH I WANT MORE OF THIS PORNY GOODNESS AND HOW SAD I AM TO HAVE TO LEAVE YOU IN FAVOR OF MY BED ;__; (though I'll probably just be laying there, thinking about the, ahem, progression of this piece rather than falling asleep XD)

[identity profile] romantiscue.livejournal.com 2012-06-27 11:58 am (UTC)(link)
I'm sorry to hear that :/ It seems like half the 'net people I stumble upon have migraines, hm. (Excuses, excuses! Have a Tylenol.) Likewise :D It's always fun to meet fandom people, and even more awesome to talk to other fanfic authors ;) You shouldn't kick it! Stroke it, slowly, let it rise to the occasion... XD

[identity profile] romantiscue.livejournal.com 2012-06-27 11:58 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm totally popping up again to bug you!

I was just rereading Locker Room Therapy and this stuck in my head: "Kiba tried to stay with him, offer some support as Naruto waited for the showers to be a little less crowded -- but when Naruto undressed there were finger-shaped bruises on his arms and hips, and then Kiba remembered he had to be elsewhere."

What was Kiba thinking here?

I read the 'ohhaiguys I'm-dating-Sasuke-k?' piece too, and I just really liked the friendshippery and stuff, and couldn't stop thinking about what the guys were thinking/talking to each other about regarding the whole situation, because I'm a sucker for angst and rawr!friendship. Ahem, sorry for teh randomness, it's late and I'm off to bed *sheepish*

[identity profile] romantiscue.livejournal.com 2012-06-28 02:03 pm (UTC)(link)
That sounds very Kiba-ish, and I like how it's a kneejerk reaction, 'cause I imagine Kiba seeing the bruises and his brain just kind of freezing with numb horror and before he knows it, his legs are walking away with him and his mouth is babbling excuses... *seriously imagines the whole thing* And then bumping in to Shika, maybe throwing some automatic insult or something at him and half looking for a brawl but mostly not wanting to be alone with his thoughts and mental images... AHEM. Sorry, my mind carried me away.

IT WOULD MAKE FOR AN EXCELLENT FIC, all halfway-misunderstood angst and friendshippery and ANGST *accidental!prompt FTW* I'll cheer you on all the way as you ponder *retrieves pompoms*