askerian: Serious Karkat in a red long-sleeved shirt (T7_Teamwork)
askerian ([personal profile] askerian) wrote2007-06-27 12:14 pm

teamwork -sleepyramble

goddamnit! it figures that I only start getting bunnies for that goddamn teamwork lemon when I'm too tired to keep a train of thought going long enough to complete one sentence, much less a coherent dialogue/action-reaction tidbit. Ahaha as for finishing even one paragraph. hahaha. ha. ha.

Okay this is not working.

trying to take notes now, but the snippets tend to evaporate before I can properly nail them down. Those are going to be some cryptic notes, lemme tell you. I can't even tell how many times I've taken notes and then came back later and been all "what the hell was I trying to say here? Martian zulu turtle shampoo what?" but these might get an olympic medal or something.


Okay wtf. notes = chaos. Only a jigsaw champion with lots of imagination could fit those dialogue snippets together in any way resembling coherence. this is not sakura's voice. at all. ever.

... but at least there shall be claws.

I hope Sasuke didn't like his clothes too much.

That is all.

[identity profile] hiza-chan.livejournal.com 2007-06-27 12:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Haha.

1) You will probably wake up and the plot bunny will have evaporated. That's what happens with me at least.

2) I have no idea how you can write so well in English when it isn't even your first language. The idea of French-English notes boggles and confuses me. I can barely keep my own notes straight and I'm not even trying to translate things. I bow to thee.

And well, ya. That's my two cents.

[identity profile] hiza-chan.livejournal.com 2007-06-27 08:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Heh. It happens to the best of us. And hey, Sasuke getting his clothes torn off is ALWAYS a plus. Mmm, smexing of Sasuke. Is it sad that I still want you to write guy!Sakura topping the boys? Whether they're boys or girls at the time? lol

Hah. Lucky. I've had some Spanish, some Latin, a little bit of French and the bit of Japanese I've picked up from watching subbed anime for the past three years and I still can't imagine being bilingual. Don't get me wrong, I would LOVE to speak different languages (If only for the reason that most of them are so much prettier than English) but... the concept is so hard to get. Changing something you've been accustomed to all your life into something else is just insanely difficult. But then again, maybe our language classes just suck. T_T

Maybe I should take a page out of your book and just teach myself.

[identity profile] jmercedesd.livejournal.com 2007-06-27 12:44 pm (UTC)(link)
I hate it when that happens! Inspiration always hits at the most inconvenient times. And it sucks when you're half asleep, slumped at the computer and you get hit with the fuzzy need to type, but you can't even see the screen clearly enough to make out WHAT you're typing, let alone have the clarity of mind to type blind.

Nope never done that before... *shifty eyes* Really.

*cough* Anyway...

CLAWS! XD Yes, Sasuke should always have his clothes ripped off of him in a fit of passion. He'll make an attempt at getting upset, but really be terribly turned on by the show of force. *rawr* Both Sakura and Naruto?

[identity profile] monique-27.livejournal.com 2007-06-27 02:28 pm (UTC)(link)
goddamnit! it figures that I only start getting bunnies for that goddamn teamwork lemon when I'm too tired to keep a train of thought going long enough to complete one sentence, much less a coherent dialogue/action-reaction tidbit. <- Oh, Love...I know. *cuddles you*

As hiza_chan (http://hiza-chan.livejournal.com/) said, I have no idea how you manage to do the whole "Write in English when it isn't my first language" thing. I mean, I was raised speaking/learning Spanish and English simultaneously, and I still "think" in English, even when speaking/writing in Spanish or Japanese. That's gotta be one hell of a challenge.

trying to take notes now, but the snippets tend to evaporate before I can properly nail them down. Those are going to be some cryptic notes, lemme tell you. I can't even tell how many times I've taken notes and then came back later and been all "what the hell was I trying to say here? Martian zulu turtle shampoo what?" but these might get an olympic medal or something. <- *LOL* ... wow. I hate when that happens, but the "cryptic notes whut!?!?!" is just funny. *snickerfit*

... but at least there shall be claws. I hope Sasuke didn't like his clothes too much. <- *rereads a few times* ... *drools*

Everyone should think that way. *^_____^*

[identity profile] drich.livejournal.com 2007-06-27 02:55 pm (UTC)(link)
You are a gifted author Asuka. I have great faith that you can turn out some awesome crac.... um, ficcage with your 'Martian zulu turtle shampoo' note.

*nod nod*

^___^;;

[identity profile] terraminuit.livejournal.com 2007-06-27 11:32 pm (UTC)(link)
^-^ Squee. I'm just kinda happy teamwork hasn't totally lost it's plot bunnies. They're somewhere but they don't like to helpful, leastwise not when you want them to be. Squee. >> << Yay for clothes-less Sasuke!...^-^ Naruto will be pleased.

[identity profile] mommyr.livejournal.com 2007-06-28 04:30 am (UTC)(link)
*waiting patiently for teamwork*

clothes are overrated, anyway! :D And claws are good . . .

[identity profile] kikyou-sama18.livejournal.com 2007-07-03 05:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Hey Asuka,

I just want to leave a comment on your lj: *deep breath*
AlltheTeamworkseriesarefuckingawesome!!!!

*blushes* That had to come out! There really aren't enough Team 7 fics out there...nevertheless you're doing an awesome job with the three of them!!! And I love the time line the story is set and the character development as well!!!

Just ignore the comments about OOC-ness. In my view they're flawless!! =)

And guess what? I found two pictures on a Hungarian site and your story was the first thing that came to my mind!! Hope you haven't seen them yet.
They're here (http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i298/LadyCorall/1172226903.jpg)
and here (http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i298/LadyCorall/1172226955.jpg)

Of course I don't own them they're from here (http://www.gportal.hu/gindex.php?pg=15849054)

I also hope that you can continue the story soon! I just love seeing them together...you know what I mean *wink* *drools*

Have a nice day!