Teamwork, chapter 6

yes, I KNOW, Saro, but Teamwork talked to me and um ;_; I'm going to bed now really. promise.

So i'm not too sure of the characterization at the very end, but i was running out of steam, so tomorrow i'll read it again and maybe edit. But for now it's an adequate enough end for this scene, I guess.

As always blatant OOC, grammar, lack of logic, plz point them out. I know some of the logic in this chapter is probably not all that logical seeing as i'm teh sleepy. plz gimme a hand ;__;

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(teamwork) author notes/ Sakura discussion

So I've received many comments about Teamwork!Sakura VS Canon!Sakura, some that I even sort of agree with. I already know how to fix her, or start to fix her, anyway! But it can't happen just yet, and in the meantime, she is still very much not post-timeskip!Sakura, and I can't just expect people to trust me for something like that. XD

So yay! TL;DR author notes ahoy. XD; Plz point out anything that isn't coherent with my explanations -- or heck, even anything that could be trimmed out to make it less OMG AN ESSAY YUCK ME NO READ.

Also, if you have anything to point out, or want to discuss characterization, please feel free, i'm open on the subject. u.u

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