askerian: Serious Karkat in a red long-sleeved shirt (FF7_Sephirhahaha my sword is bigger)
askerian ([personal profile] askerian) wrote2011-03-22 07:04 pm
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GUESS WHO |D -- edit : added the finished pic w/Cloud!



Guile? Blaming you. SOOOO blaming you. ♥♥♥


on the other end of her sword is girlCloud. Alas she is still very sketchy atm. I spent six hours doing nothing but draw and color that sexy bitch and my fingers are cramped and my thumbnail is too long and gouged my thumb and I only just noticed when I managed to pry my hold on the pen open, but I am so ridiculously in love with girlSeph that I don't even mind.

oh god the MUSCLES. roarrr. She's a SOLDIER, bitches, and don't you forget it. X3~~~~






Saro is right, Seph totally steals the show here. ;_; I'll draw something for girlcloud too! .__. later. like, when the stumps of my fingers grow back. x__x

[identity profile] just-shai.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 06:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Unf.

Yeah.

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[identity profile] sister-dear.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 06:13 pm (UTC)(link)
O.O *drool*

Damn, that upper body is to die for. Rawr!

[identity profile] sour-idealist.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 06:45 pm (UTC)(link)
WhoaohDAMN. That is impressive.

(Look at those muscles, guh. I'm slightly terrified.)

[identity profile] uneko.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 06:51 pm (UTC)(link)
She is magnificent!

god, you can tell she's a labor of love. mmmf.

[identity profile] windandwater.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 06:54 pm (UTC)(link)
OH MY GOD. ♥ ♥ ♥ That is such a great girl!Sephiroth you have no idea. And that corset-strappy-bustier thing is so very rawr. I thought you'd just draw Seph bare-chested under the coat. XD;;
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[identity profile] rosethornli.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 07:21 pm (UTC)(link)
She is gorgeous.

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[identity profile] rurounitriv.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 07:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Hot damn. Yeah, she WILL kick your ass before you can blink, and don't even think about arguing with her.

[identity profile] mika-kun.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 07:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Hot damn girl!Sephiroth is sexy.

[identity profile] skellywag.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 09:29 pm (UTC)(link)
I can respond to this only with a resounding HOLY FUCK O.O

(Anonymous) 2011-03-22 09:42 pm (UTC)(link)
And I am happy to be blamed if it results in art like that, believe me =)

I've heard its hard for women to be muscle-y without losing a cup size or two. But, well, Seph [i]is[/i] genetic perfection.

-- Guile

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[identity profile] salmastryon.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 10:49 pm (UTC)(link)
:)

Somehow I have this image of Aeris and Zack snuggling on the bleachers with cameras, eating popcorn and going "Don't mind us. Go ahead!"

[identity profile] mikkeneko.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 10:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Can I say, I LOVE that you put muscles in their arms? I think my one biggest annoyance for World of Warcraft toons is that they give guys huge bulky arms, but girl arms are so rail think I don't even know how they can lift a bow, let alone draw it.
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[personal profile] romyra 2011-03-23 01:34 am (UTC)(link)
Wow! That up there is pure awesome!

[identity profile] ladynero.livejournal.com 2011-03-23 01:39 am (UTC)(link)
*purrs* Love this... both of them!

*steals to molest later*

[identity profile] m-a-foxfire.livejournal.com 2011-03-23 01:48 am (UTC)(link)
*....fans self* Strappy leather basque-ish garment oh my goodness. Cloud... looks good, but she'll never hit that pinnacle of utter raw sexy dangerous.

[identity profile] inverts.livejournal.com 2011-03-23 02:18 am (UTC)(link)
Oh dear, Cloud. You are at such a disadvantage...

I feel like there is something awkward in Cloud's arm--I think, technically, it's drawn correctly, but it doesn't look like the way you'd naturally hold a sword... um. hm.

Otherwise I like this a whole lot! ♥

[identity profile] artimusdin.livejournal.com 2011-03-23 02:26 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah, looks like the elbow's a bit high when compared to the hand/sword. But then, Soldier. Who knows.

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[identity profile] artimusdin.livejournal.com 2011-03-23 02:26 am (UTC)(link)
Oh god. They're hot. Seph's all Warrior Princess and Cloud's all Ranger Queen. *__* Even though Seph's top DOES make me flinch a bit. How does she breath with that around her throat? @.@

(Anonymous) 2011-03-24 05:55 am (UTC)(link)
I've always thought there was a very SM bondage component to Sephiroth. The outfit is just him/her being up front about it.

-- Guile

[identity profile] moocow33.livejournal.com 2011-03-23 01:38 pm (UTC)(link)
niice
are those back/shoulder-blade muscles on cloud? (there should be a drool emoticon)

[identity profile] flourite-roses.livejournal.com 2011-03-24 03:26 am (UTC)(link)
Yes Sephy darling really does steal the show. Hn. omg so sexyyyyyyyyyyyyyy *__*

[identity profile] daemoninwhite.livejournal.com 2011-03-24 11:16 am (UTC)(link)
Why have I got the feeling that, if we were able to see fem!Cloud's face, it'd be '....I should have thought this through.'?

That being said: OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD THEIR MUSCLES AND THEIR HAIR AND NGGGGH CLOUD'S FRINGE IS LIKE CLOUD'S FRINGE AND AND AND SEPHIROTH AND AND AND AND.

Sooooo hot~<3

[identity profile] inverseparadox.livejournal.com 2011-03-24 02:02 pm (UTC)(link)
(...what does it say about me that the first comment which springs to my mind is about one of the swords?)


Which way is Sephiroth holding Masamune? Because unless we're seeing it edge-on, the blade doesn't look right to me; I've always seen it as slightly katana-style, i.e., straight (though potentially still sharp) on one edge, with a curve - a very mild one, in this case - down from the point on the other side. Here, instead, it seems to be drawn as almost a "really long stiletto" sort of blade.

That could work without conflict if Sephiroth is holding the blade with the flat sides up and down, so that we're seeing either the curved edge or the 'rear' edge straight on, but it doesn't quite look that way to me.


I actually like some of the "sketchy" nature of the Cloud 'half' of the drawing. The unerased lines around the arm and the Buster give the impression that perhaps the blade isn't quite as steady as all that; whether it's shaking because Cloud can't handle the weight in that stance yet (when is this set, anyway?) or as a side effect of an emotional reaction or of whatever else, it kind of works IMO.


I've never envisioned Sephiroth's hair being that... not "messy", but relatively uncontrolled; it always seemed to flow more or less straight and together, in my mind, until near the very tips. (Probably related to Sephiroth's general well-groomed and overall immaculate appearance; comparatively flyaway hair doesn't fit well with "immaculate" in my mind.) This style still works, though, it just seems to imply a bit more of a "wild" personality than I usually think of for Sephiroth.


I think the distinction in regard to Cloud's elbow and the way she's holding the sword has a lot to do with grip. When you're swinging a two-handed sword around rapidly, you're probably (not an expert here) going to be gripping it with both hands fairly close together; here, they're almost as far apart as they can get while still both being on the hilt.

In order to keep the sword balanced (without a LOT more physical strength, specifically I think in the fingers) with the hands closer together, I believe you'd need to hold the sword at more of a vertical angle - either downwards or, more likely, upwards. Given how heavy that blade is, having the hands relatively far apart only makes sense.

From Cloud's current posture, straightening her elbow would result in lowering the tip of the sword. (That could be countered by straightening her other elbow as well and possibly making other adjustments, but unless I'm missing some possibilities, then either the sword itself would be lower or it would be out at more "full extension", the way Masamune is; neither seems like a good idea from a combat perspective, though I'm not sure why just offhand.)


Another point is that, when holding a sword with the elbow bent that way, you really aren't - or at least I'm really not - balanced for moving quickly in most directions; you're limited to one or two. (In a quick check just now with a (proportionally much shorter!) cane, those directions were "up" and "right". It actually felt as if it would be more natural to let go with the rear hand and swing the back of the cane around to hit someone with it, staff-wise; that really wouldn't work with the Buster Sword, though.)

There are a couple of ways that could work. The simplest one is of course "Cloud doesn't actually know how to use the sword that well yet", but I'm having a hard time finding a context for it which would still plausibly let Cloud have that outfit and the Buster Sword. A possibly better one is "Cloud doesn't really want to fight / doesn't really think she'll have to fight / is under psychological pressure which leaves her comparatively unable to fight", but that still may not be what you were intending.
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[identity profile] shewhoflies.livejournal.com 2011-03-25 06:39 pm (UTC)(link)
*____*

....OMG. Everything here is amaaaaaazing. EVERYTHING. But I do find myself oddly fascinated by their hair. Mmmmmmh, pretty pretty hair.

(Also, whoa Seph. She gives a whole new meaning to "dominatrix" and aaaaaahhh I did not need those images in my head.)

[identity profile] nemi-chan.livejournal.com 2011-03-28 07:03 am (UTC)(link)
My friend and I were talking, and she says, as a woman who used to have muscle mass before her health took a bad turn, that Seph's muscles are very well done. Though I think something's off with her closer armpit, it shouldn't have that notch there, the quadrangular space isn't formed exactly like that and leaves me going "What happened to her lats!?"

However, she thinks you made the elbows too thin, which makes them pop as unrealistic in comparison with the very well done muscles.

[identity profile] sohaliatalitha.livejournal.com 2011-04-04 07:23 pm (UTC)(link)
A little late to be commenting, I know, I know. But... This should be on the porn filter XD It's just so... *¬*

[identity profile] creepstakes.livejournal.com 2011-05-08 05:52 pm (UTC)(link)
I saw this picture a while ago....and now I can't stop getting bunnies, god dammit. *sighs*

If I credit and link you, do you mind if I borrow your designs for these two? I'm going to have to write it or It'll kill me.

Also, Sephiroth's boobs look real nice in that corset. I can't stop looking at how her SOLDIER belt, the corset and her fatigues are all joined. Mmmm. <3

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