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State of the Asuka
I'm still planning to write more Team Seven drabbles/ficlets at some point! Some of the promts are very prrt. And you guys are still welcome to give me more suggestions. (or comment on the three ficlet-things I already did post. Yes. You may do that, indeed. u____u.)
But well, I haven't written more yet because I've been writing Sasuke's Teamwork chapter. I suppose you guys totally hate me for this. u.u~
Frankly I'm not sure it's much better than the previously written thinger (which I ended up reusing a lot of anyway.) I decided to go EXPERIMENTAL and non-chronological and for a little bit the timeline keeps flipping between two different moments. I'm still trying to work out the kinks, because so far both Jo and Saro got confused at it, so...yeah. I suspect my in-prose timeline markers aren't obvious enough. Maybe some big - LINE BREAK - BEGIN FLASHBACK - would do the trick... XD
Maybe nothing short of a big BEGIN FLASHBACK would do the trick. DX
... Well, if my experimentation fails I guess I'll have to put everything back in chronological order, which will have the added benefit of saving my inbox from three dozen WE DUN GET IT from ffnet, but poo. Not as shiny for me.
I'm bad. For a couple of reasons! but the only one that's not too spoilery to share is this one. When I was writing this little bit of Sasuke POV I couldn't stop cackling.
Sakura was safe enough for now -- anyone who got within a half-mile of her wasn't going to survive Kyuubi long enough to cause her any trouble.
Pffffhahahaha YOU KEEP TELLING YOURSELF THAT.
But well, I haven't written more yet because I've been writing Sasuke's Teamwork chapter. I suppose you guys totally hate me for this. u.u~
Frankly I'm not sure it's much better than the previously written thinger (which I ended up reusing a lot of anyway.) I decided to go EXPERIMENTAL and non-chronological and for a little bit the timeline keeps flipping between two different moments. I'm still trying to work out the kinks, because so far both Jo and Saro got confused at it, so...yeah. I suspect my in-prose timeline markers aren't obvious enough. Maybe some big - LINE BREAK - BEGIN FLASHBACK - would do the trick... XD
Maybe nothing short of a big BEGIN FLASHBACK would do the trick. DX
... Well, if my experimentation fails I guess I'll have to put everything back in chronological order, which will have the added benefit of saving my inbox from three dozen WE DUN GET IT from ffnet, but poo. Not as shiny for me.
I'm bad. For a couple of reasons! but the only one that's not too spoilery to share is this one. When I was writing this little bit of Sasuke POV I couldn't stop cackling.
Sakura was safe enough for now -- anyone who got within a half-mile of her wasn't going to survive Kyuubi long enough to cause her any trouble.
Pffffhahahaha YOU KEEP TELLING YOURSELF THAT.
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Nah, only two timelines but they go back and forth a couple of times each... ^^; I need to work on in-prose markers. I'm just not sure how. *flopded*