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mika_kun, "Immediately after Sasuke was discharged from duty in CW.".
I'm annoyed at myself. I can't make the mental picture I had of that scene come across properly. I think I've hit another bunny drough, everything I tried to write today had to be pulled out word by word and it tends to end up flat and uninspired at best. T_T
Kakashi hasn't slept a lot in the last three weeks. There was no time. There rarely is, when your society does its best to implode. So when he drags himself out of his apartment after a six-hours-long night -- sinfully long -- he isn't exactly what one might call alert.
He kind of trips on the young man sitting in the staircase, and takes a nosedive. His reflexes are on a cruise somewhere in the Pacific, along with his general awareness and all the sleep he's lost, and he reflects with some vague annoyance that his plans didn't include spending the next month in the hospital.
A hand presses against his chest, halting his fall, supporting him like he weighs nothing at all. He catches the handrail, wobbling dangerously over his unexpected obstacle. They give each other an upside-down look.
"Sir?"
Kakashi sighs and pulls himself upright with the handrail, letting the young man get up. "I didn't expect you here."
UG-7-SA is one of a dozen Uchiha police-bots who have been stationed at his police station ever since that Secret Services unit went rogue and started terminating all other Uchiha units it could get its hands on. Last Kakashi heard, SA is also the only one left, due to the other units never coming back from their patrols eventually. No one is sure how SA dodged the bullet. Not that they really have much time to think on this mystery, what with their country deciding that this is the best time of the year to riot.
Except that their rookie android is on his doorstep and not, as he should be, on patrol or at the station. And if he were carrying a message, he would have knocked.
He's not wearing a badge.
Kakashi might be half-asleep, but he knows what this is about even before the rookie-bot says it. Maybe he should have expected it -- very few cops treat the brand-new Uchihas as anything but machines, not that this is unexpected because it takes them a while to behave as anything but. And it isn't like they're allowed to socialize off-hours on their own when they don't know anything about life just yet. Kakashi treats the rookies the same as the other Uchihas, though, the same as the other, human cops. It doesn't cost him anything, and it helps them reach the AI threshold faster.
He might be fond of them, too, a little.
"So?"
The rookie-bot frowns, clearly confused -- lost. He doesn't have a clue how to say, 'Help, I don't know where to go'. Kakashi is even wondering if he has a clue why he came to Kakashi in the first place.
Kakashi goes back to his door and unlocks it. "Come in," he says, before the kid can get frustrated by his inability to explain. "You can stay as long as you need, Sasuke."
mika_kun, "Immediately after Sasuke was discharged from duty in CW.".I'm annoyed at myself. I can't make the mental picture I had of that scene come across properly. I think I've hit another bunny drough, everything I tried to write today had to be pulled out word by word and it tends to end up flat and uninspired at best. T_T
Kakashi hasn't slept a lot in the last three weeks. There was no time. There rarely is, when your society does its best to implode. So when he drags himself out of his apartment after a six-hours-long night -- sinfully long -- he isn't exactly what one might call alert.
He kind of trips on the young man sitting in the staircase, and takes a nosedive. His reflexes are on a cruise somewhere in the Pacific, along with his general awareness and all the sleep he's lost, and he reflects with some vague annoyance that his plans didn't include spending the next month in the hospital.
A hand presses against his chest, halting his fall, supporting him like he weighs nothing at all. He catches the handrail, wobbling dangerously over his unexpected obstacle. They give each other an upside-down look.
"Sir?"
Kakashi sighs and pulls himself upright with the handrail, letting the young man get up. "I didn't expect you here."
UG-7-SA is one of a dozen Uchiha police-bots who have been stationed at his police station ever since that Secret Services unit went rogue and started terminating all other Uchiha units it could get its hands on. Last Kakashi heard, SA is also the only one left, due to the other units never coming back from their patrols eventually. No one is sure how SA dodged the bullet. Not that they really have much time to think on this mystery, what with their country deciding that this is the best time of the year to riot.
Except that their rookie android is on his doorstep and not, as he should be, on patrol or at the station. And if he were carrying a message, he would have knocked.
He's not wearing a badge.
Kakashi might be half-asleep, but he knows what this is about even before the rookie-bot says it. Maybe he should have expected it -- very few cops treat the brand-new Uchihas as anything but machines, not that this is unexpected because it takes them a while to behave as anything but. And it isn't like they're allowed to socialize off-hours on their own when they don't know anything about life just yet. Kakashi treats the rookies the same as the other Uchihas, though, the same as the other, human cops. It doesn't cost him anything, and it helps them reach the AI threshold faster.
He might be fond of them, too, a little.
"So?"
The rookie-bot frowns, clearly confused -- lost. He doesn't have a clue how to say, 'Help, I don't know where to go'. Kakashi is even wondering if he has a clue why he came to Kakashi in the first place.
Kakashi goes back to his door and unlocks it. "Come in," he says, before the kid can get frustrated by his inability to explain. "You can stay as long as you need, Sasuke."
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I think this is good, Asuka. Not flat at all. You manage to pack a lot of depth into a few words, something that is very hard to do.
One thing I noticed: "six-hours-long night" should be "six-hour-long night".
Adi
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oops, thank you! *runs to edit*
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... Okay yes you know what, give me a prompt and/or timeframe and I'll try to write another CW drabble. >_> yeah. *FIGHT*
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I think there's potential here: "...they don't know anything about life just yet. Kakashi treats the rookies the same as the other Uchihas, though, the same as the other, human cops. It doesn't cost him anything, and it helps them reach the AI threshold faster."
You've got Sasuke staying at Kakashi's place, at apparently an early stage in the socialization process. But by the time he shows up at Naruto's place in CW proper, he's doing a pretty good job of passing as human.
So what kinds of things might have happened to help him along, what Kakashi calls reaching the "AI threshold", while Sasuke was with him? How'd the android learn to act more human? I'd love to see more Kakashi/Sasuke interaction.
(No, I wasn't assuming sex, you perverts!)
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Thank you for the comment. It's nice to know that people like it, even if it wasn't what I planned to write.
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I'll take prompts, I think XD (just let memake another post...)
The problem is that Kakashi really isn't all that relevant to the current story and so I haven't really thought much about Sasuke's life with him. ;__; And most of what I have figured out for Kakashi's backstory I might end up not using, but if I do use it then almost everything will be spoilery liek whoa. *pouts*
ahahahaha your icon XDDD
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Part of the AI process would be learning to set up their own commands, and working out where to go without knowing explicitly.
I would imagine that in this case there are some subroutines, instincts that the bot wouldn't be overtly aware of that can help assist with getting to the point where the robot *has* experience, and *can* make choices, and move from instinct where they do things but aren't sure why, to intuition, where they can learn to read deeper than what's there, they might not know exactly *why* they know, but the knowledge is something that they can control and doesn't need to be explicitly stated for everything. Something that lets them see deeper, under stand tone, develop a sense of humour, understand sex joke and become more individualised - no longer a pure copy.
The whole idea with AI is that they are to become independent so the process would be following along those pathways, learning about societies expectations, and how to fit in, without having to be told each step of the way what to do.
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I hope that you can get your flow back for Crossed Wires, and that you can keep from getting too frustrated when the bunnies don't come or every word is so hard to get out. It's a great story so far, and it'll come with time, I know it. Good luck!
~Sara