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(teamwork) pic thing -- the Harunos
Ten minutes, sorta blah sketch of Sakura's parents in Teamwork. Horribly colored, I know -- yeah, try to get across that "redhead going gray" thing with a mouse and a bad case of the lazies. At least now i have a better idea of what they look like. (now let's wait for Canon to fuck me up the ass. XD)
Now I'm going to try to write the next scene, if Sasuke deigns talking to me long enough.
Naruto arrived back home to trip on a box, and only managed to hang onto the door by the tips of his fingers.
"Ow -- what the..."
He stared at the box, confused. It was full of his things; weapon cleaning kit, an old kunai pouch, a wad of explosive tag paper, his frog wallet, and other odds and ends that had progressively spilled from his bags onto the floor around the couch. For a moment he thought --
"...Sasuke?" he called, staring at the box.
"We're moving. Did you get the scrolls?"
We. Naruto relaxed; we. Whatever it was, it was alright -- waitasec. "Ah -- yeah, yeah, I got them. We're moving?"
Sasuke was in the kitchen, stacking up pots and pans. "Yes. Your own scrolls and weapons are in here. I cleaned your pile of dirty clothes along with some of mine; they're drying."
"Oh. Okay," he replied amiably. "Uh, by the way, Sasuke, what the fuck?"
Edit/ Okay, teamwork is not happening. T_T I've got the dialogue down, but everything else needed to support this dialogue -- actions, tones of voice, body language, naruto's thoughts process -- refuses to be written.
*goes to stare at CyberSuke instead* *hopes for a miracle* T_T
Now I'm going to try to write the next scene, if Sasuke deigns talking to me long enough.
Naruto arrived back home to trip on a box, and only managed to hang onto the door by the tips of his fingers.
"Ow -- what the..."
He stared at the box, confused. It was full of his things; weapon cleaning kit, an old kunai pouch, a wad of explosive tag paper, his frog wallet, and other odds and ends that had progressively spilled from his bags onto the floor around the couch. For a moment he thought --
"...Sasuke?" he called, staring at the box.
"We're moving. Did you get the scrolls?"
We. Naruto relaxed; we. Whatever it was, it was alright -- waitasec. "Ah -- yeah, yeah, I got them. We're moving?"
Sasuke was in the kitchen, stacking up pots and pans. "Yes. Your own scrolls and weapons are in here. I cleaned your pile of dirty clothes along with some of mine; they're drying."
"Oh. Okay," he replied amiably. "Uh, by the way, Sasuke, what the fuck?"
Edit/ Okay, teamwork is not happening. T_T I've got the dialogue down, but everything else needed to support this dialogue -- actions, tones of voice, body language, naruto's thoughts process -- refuses to be written.
*goes to stare at CyberSuke instead* *hopes for a miracle* T_T
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And yay teamwork! I just want to hug Naruto. ^____^ That's gotta suck to come home and find a box of your shit at the door. XD *sends Sasuke lots of liquor to keep him talking ~_^*
Yes!
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I loved how Naruto was afraid for a second that Sasuke was kicking him out. Shows his insecurity without seeming angsty or overdone. Also, Sasuke is an idiot in relationships for leaving his boyfriend's stuff out in a box. nice characterization.
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Sasuke is such a housewife and Naruto is soooo lovely ^^
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Sasuke: We're moving.
Naruto: Oh, okay.
Whew...=_=;;;I like the Harunos pic. :D
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*joins in the staring* *pretty, advanced hardware + complex, advanced software = double geek lust*
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*dead of snickerfits* Aaah, Naruto. So much love! XD <333
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i really wonder when sasuke had the time to look for a new home... *gg*
sakuras dad looks quite old... (how old is he?)