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I'm done with translating the second half of the garou chapter thinger.

... but god. the grammar, the awkwardness are awful. and what's even more awful, is that I had to stare my own lack of motivation in the face. I don't know how many places there are where I summarize an action scene in three sentences when it would have deserved at least a half-page of suspense and quick thinking and violence and stuff.

... but then this chapter is pretty actionny. hmm.

Anyway, Windshades, love, I'm not going to bug you to beta it because ~~I want the progression drabble first~~ I know you're so very busy *cute* (unless you're very very sure you have tons of free time, because this is nine pages of Trowa-and-Quatre that need serious, brutal kicking into shape)

So.

I have the chapter. But it's not ready.

I also have the author notes for the chapter. Somehow they came much faster. =___=;

And we go back to one chapter every ten years. :P (and yes, in the next chapter there's tons of Heero and Duo interaction and cuteness. Hohohoho.)

For all the people who reviewed and left me nice reviews and encouragements and questions, who sent me fanart or even just read the story and liked it, even if you never said anything -- thank you. It's not really a secret by now that it's become very hard and not fun at all for me to write Gundam Wing fics and every word I add to this story takes me about two weeks. I'm very surprised and touched that you're still here.

For the "is this story abandoned? *whine* " crowd -- the day it's abandoned for good, you will know, because I will put a big DISCONTINUED warning on all the archives (I will write up a summary of what was supposed to happen, for the people who want to know). In the meantime, just assume I'm slow as hell, and, if you're not patient enough to wait (very few people are, so I won't blame you) do us both a favor and forget it exists. If I get even ONE more "Wahh! How DARE you stop here? I AM WAITING, YOU BITCH, and you OWE ME" mail from yet another entitlement whore, I am very likely to explode and take the story offline. And once it's gone, it's not coming back. We're clear? Thank you.

In other news, I have a cold. I keep sneezing on the screen. It's disgusting. ~_~; what bothers me the most, though, is how hard it is to think. T_T

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go_hifreann_lea: silly tiny sketch. Itachi and Voldie. XD

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I have a cold too. I also have a ton of work to do this week before I can pass the semester. Work that promises to be very not fun. *feels your pain*

*flops on you* x_x

Lol, Voldie looks like a Neanderthal with a sparkler in that sketch :P

Neanderthal, evil snake man, same diff. xP

*crawls to not get spotted as is one of the GW nagging pests*
pretty icon :)
*runs*

*chews on you*

Dearest Asuka,

I officially give up bugging you for this fic. I will still love it, cherish it, and secretly keep a closet-full of wishful thoughts for its being finished.

But. But I say. I decided that you being actually pressured into writing it, makes reading Garu not nearly as pleasant as it should be. And so I thought, and thought, and then thought some more about it, and I decided that I care about you quite a bit more than I care for my beloved were-pilots' fate. So there. -.-;;

...Damn the ethical dilemmas coming from getting to know, even if only a little, the person behind the stories. >.>

Ok, I guess all this is probably useless information, but I just wanted you to know that you really don't have to do this, if it's become only a bother that's spoiling your good memories of the GW fandom. We’ll still love you and still be your faithful minions *ish being a Drama Queen* ^.^

*gets stoned by the angry mob*

*parries the stones with a kunai*

Hehe, I've never seen GW anyway, all I care about is Naruto. Then again, I understand the desire to see a grand multipart finished... but creativity should never ever ever be forced.

~~...Go watch GW. You should watch GW. EVERYONE in the whole world should watch GW at LEAST once! Go go go...!~~

Exactly. Forcing creativity = killing creativity, chopping it to little pieces, and then murdering it some more... >.

;__; awwwwww *lovelovelovelovelove* *cuddlesquish* T____________________T ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

*pets teh Asuka*

#^_______________________^#

*lovecuddleloves and runs*

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*cuddles up* z_z

I feel your pain. I also have a cold, bleh. Evil thing... my throat is killing me, and therefor I can't sing, which is evil, 'cause I sing pretty much constantly, so it sucks. Majorly. Only plus is that I can get away with eating lots of ice cream. ^^;;

It really sucks that its so hard for you to write GW these days, but I understand why. Eventually, everyone loses interested in the various fandoms. >.> I've done it... frankly, I'm amazed I'm still interested in GW, considering how long I've been into it. ^^;;; Just ignore the evil whiny bitches, they suck and can never understand. ^^ *Loves*

I love to hum when i have a sore throat, because my voice is all low and rough and purry. but i can't sing for real either, noes ;_;

*cuddlelove* thanks ^^

*snugs and tissues* Does this mean I have to give up my Garou shrine? I mean... it's tasteful and junk. Not all gaudy. *tries to look cute* And we only do the virgin sacrifices on the full moon (it seemed appropriate) so it's not like there's a lot of noise and stuff. *innocent blink*

so long as i don't have to actually show up at the shrine. :D (how come i haven't seen any of these virgins? *feels gypped*)

*grins* I have to admit; they're getting awfully hard to come by...

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yes, but you REALLY had a crazy stalker. :p besides, I don't hate the GW fandom so much as I am totally bored with it.

Is it the one with Sunako?? o__o if so i've read it -- but maybe i've got the title wrong, damn shoujo titles (but hahaha sunako)

Switching names seems like a reasonable and smart move, but taking down your stuff seems so awful; what about all the poor lurkers and nice people who enjoyed your stuff and now will never be able to reread it? It seems unfair to punish them for the stupidity of a few stalkers.

hope you feel better soon. being sick is no fun. It's too hot down here in Sydney, Australia for me to be sick at the moment, though i wouldn't mind the time off work. Summertime christmas is fun!
*gives warm blanket and mug of hot chocolate with little floaty marshmallows*
enjoy my icon, hope it makes you laugh.

Get well soon!!!

I'm already better, though not entirely healthy yet. ^__^

... O_O summer whristmas. Sounds neat ... and yet not very christmasy. XD;;;

!! XD haha. poor Elrics.

Awww, poor Asuka. I hope you feel better *gives gift of cute baby!narusasusaku that she found. Well, they don't have to be, but it's pretty easy to use your imagination*

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v85/Lilendae/Awwnarusasusaku.png

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! OMG SO CUTE *wibble* it's so. SO CUTE. and. CUTE.

... x___________________________x uwahh. and blue and pink and yellow and awwwwwwww~

It's really a shame that you don't find it fun to write for GW anymore. That being said, you've already owned my ass at all things fic writing, especially in the "finishing them" department.

Definitely don't force it. It's a great piece of work, and it's something you should be proud of, but if you force it, that'll all go down the drain. I know that the real fans of the story, and of your work will love you no matter what, (at least I hope so) especially if you write up a summary and don't leave us completely out to dry, which I've actually come across quite frequently.

Love many times over and good luck in all of your writing endeavors.

Ugh sickness. ;_;
*gives you tissues, cough drops, a blanket, and a SasuPlush*
Get well soon. D: *pethugglesquish*

And as much as I love garou; it's really one of the, like, two GW fics that I'm still hooked on. So.. :P It's that wonderful.

But it's cool to do a few words a week, or whatever. You'll be done sooner or later. ;P
And all of us who frequent your journal support you fully. Even... especially your lurkers. They love you so much they're frightened of talking to you. ~~I know I was for the longest time...~~ x3

So Two Knights smut is out?

Well, you give me good Naruto crack to smoke and anything else you decide to fancy.

*runs off to read Asuka smut*

*crawls past Garou-bugger-people*
*hugs*
Don't worry Asuka-sama, as long as you just keep writing and drawing pretty pics, and pointing out pretty pic and writer people, I will... um... be lurksome upon your stuff.
Yay! Chibi-Nins!
Besides, I'm part of a couple of groups of people who've been waiting for other stories to be updated for over a year now, so you're doing great in my book. The characters have refused to tell you what the heck is gonna happen now so since they aren't speaking nothing can happen. My characters will give me great stuff when I have no access to paper or computer and when I do write it down they repeat it back and make it sound stupid. At least yours stay coherent.

Delurking, only because I bring you possibly horribly written smut to hopefully make you feel better about your cold. This was originally written just for the hell of it, because I got the idea right before bed, but somehow I thought you'd appreciate this better than me. And it's possibly badly written because I'm too tired to judge my own work right now. I should really be sleeping for exams, but hell, I had to write it. Mostly because Naruto's a cheeky bastard. So sleepy = apology for spellings/typos/grammar in advance. Not too happy with the ending but I had to end it before it became a long smutathon. Haven't written smutty stuff in a while, so I guess I need the practice. XD

Please enjoy this giftsmut yes?
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Sakura came home, groceries in hand, to find Sasuke flush against a wall and Naruto kneeling inbetween his legs.

Okay, so maybe they had been living together for a few months, and maybe they had all had sex during a few nights in bed, but this was the first time Sakura had caught the two in such a... compromising position in broad daylight. Before she had only heard them in bed, shivering shadow against shadow, but this time she could see even the minutest detail. And from the noises Sasuke was making, little whimpers and groans as he fought to remain standing with his eyes squeezed tight, it was obvious that Naruto gave excellent head.

So it only made sense that Naruto, the less distracted of the two boys, was the first to notice Sakura, stopping what he was doing and turning to her with a cheerful, "Hiya, Sakura-chan!"

Sasuke's eyes flashed open wider than she had ever seen and if her face hadn't mirrored the bright red color of the pale teenager's cheeks, she would have laughed. "N-NARUTO!"

Oblivious that anything was wrong, or more like ignoring the fact that his partners were in danger of death by embarrassment, Naruto continued addressing her cheerfully, "Remember what you said about wanting to learn how to do this? C'mon, I'll teach you right now, I'm sure Sasuke'll be happy to--ITE! What the hell was that for, bastard?!"

Obviously Sasuke had finally gotten over his embarrassment enough to grab Naruto by his hair and give it a sharp tug. "Dobe!"

"Oy, I'm doing you a favor--ITE! STOP THAT! Leggo!" Naruto tried to free his hair from Sasuke's hold, only prompting Sasuke to tighten his grip and to tug at Naruto's hair harder than before. "OY!"

"Shut up a-and stop being a pervert, dobe!" Sasuke growled, trying to slide his way out from behind Naruto--or at least until he realized that he could do little more than shuffle with his pants pulled down to his knees.

"Fine, fine!" Naruto replied grumpily, although Sakura thought she saw a little twinkle in his eyes before he turned half-way back to glare at Sasuke better. "I'll be quiet!"

"Good," Sasuke smirked slightly but let go of Naruto's hair after a few moments of hesitation--and immediately realized that was a mistake.

Naruto had decided the best way to be quiet was to finish what he and Sasuke had started before Sakura had interrupted him. Sasuke whimpered and nearly fell when his knees became weak again, taken by surprise. There was little he could do other than to make sure he didn't fall onto his ass and embarrass himself in front of Sakura.

Speaking of Sakura... well, she obviously enjoyed the porn-quality expressions on Sasuke's face as he whimpered and groaned in time to Naruto's movements. And she never thought that his feet would have such a hard time trying not to slide against the hardwood floor. In the end, Sasuke finally gave up after Naruto had swallowed the lot of it, and slid to the floor, gasping, as Naruto proudly licked his lips. Naruto grinned wickedly to her as Sasuke gave him the darkest glare he could manage while still gasping and worn out, his wounded pride showing itself all over his face--and Naruto's too, now that Sakura thought of it.

At some point during this display, Sakura had dropped both armfuls of groceries to the floor. Groceries were the least thing on her mind right now and no one could blame her. After all, she knew the perfect recipe to heal Sasuke's wounded pride and celery wasn't one of the main ingredients.

*licks the last line with much love*

O.o And here I hated that last line. To each his own, I suppose.

Naruto has no shame. *shakes head sadly*

I didn't reply to that. SHAME. I remember it; it hits my accidentally-voyeuristic-sakura kink so perfectly. mrrrr, sexy~ I love how "shy" Sasuke is. XD

Ahaha, Sakura likes to watch but would never admit it. XD It's sorta like the one RP I'm doing where Sasuke gets turned on by A)Naruto licking him (I don't know why, don't ask) or B)Naruto making out with a Kage Buushin. He won't admit he likes it when confronted about it.

Only part of that was shyness. The other one is the insufferable Uchiha urge to always be on top! XD

.... and I logged in for that. What the heck, LJ?

*sends hot chocolate* I don't think it makes colds better, but it tastes so nice. *heart* I hate colds.

Chibi icon!! *loves on*

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