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LOVE ME. T_T

Trying to write more teamworky stuff, but i'm teh stuck. Naruto's not talking to me -- or maybe the problem's that he's not part of the action and that's just not natural for him. Maybe I should find a way to get him in, or switch to the next scene...

*prods Kyuubi* come on, be funny or pervy or something. =_=

edit/ wrote a little bit.

"LOOK OUT, IDIOT!"

Sakura rolled through the space on which he'd been standing just a second before, kicking up a cloud of dust on her way, and immediately jumped back up. She thwapped him over the head in passing, throwing herself back at Sasuke.

Naruto rubbed his head and scowled at her back for a second, then chuckled ruefully. For once, he was thinking too much. He made himself watch instead.

He was glad to see that she wasn't using as much anymore the straightforward, "let's bulldoze our way through the enemy's defenses" way which worked so well for Naruto himself but didn't do much for someone of her body weight and strength, and was instead starting to feint and use a few swapping jutsu. He was also glad to see that Sasuke was, so far, managing to keep a balance, not so fast and strong that she couldn't connect at all, but not so slow that she felt like he was throwing it because she didn't deserve a real match.

Though, in all honesty... well. Watching Sasuke's effortless taijutsu was a lot like watching a dance -- he had perfect control, not only of his body, but of Sakura's as well. Even when he didn't manipulate her so that she would attack exactly the way he needed her to so he could counterattack, he always responded to her kicks and punches and lunges as if they had been working on the choreography for months. And he wasn't even using the Sharingan.

Bastard was pretty hot, Naruto admitted to himself as he watched him do a backflip as effortlessly as if gravity didn't exist. He wasn't graceful in the way Sakura was, but he was flowing from attack to defense so flawlessly, and there wasn't one unnecessary move in his kata. It made Naruto wonder what it would take to make him jerk and twitch and struggle mindlessly.

He guessed he should feel more worried about the sad state of his heterosexuality as of late, but then, the thought of most every other guy still made him grimace. Sasuke was an exception -- both because he was almost as pretty as a girl anyway, and because he belonged to Naruto in the first place. He wasn't sure what he’d do if Sasuke actually wanted to top, though.

Sasuke still wasn't as hot as Sakura, the blond thought as he watched her flushed cheeks, furious eyes and heaving chest. She had unzipped her tunic slightly at some point. Mm, cleavage. It was a shame that she was so self-conscious about her breasts -- it was his guess that she'd been told she was too flat to be sexy many times by her girlfriends-- but maybe with the pregnancy...

Okay, maybe he should join them before he embarrassed himself by popping a boner.

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"Yo."

"GYAH!"

Kakashi was leaning over his shoulder, watching Sasuke and Sakura. He gave him a glance and one of his weird eye-smiles he did -- Naruto had a theory that the rest of his face was actually perpetually frozen and thus all his facial expressions were eye-expressions only, but then he had lots of theories about Kakashi’s face -- and went back to watching, nodding approvingly.

"Hm, I do think he’s actually teaching her things. Amazing."

Naruto grinned. "Yeah. If I had known some shagging would..."

"Naruto, so long as it’s improving, I don’t actually want to know how you improve your teamwork."

"I know."

"... brat."

The blond chuckled, and waved at Sakura who was glancing back at them to see what he’d been yelling for. "If I wasn't, you’d be bored."

Kakashi rolled his eyes -- eye? -- but Naruto had a feeling he was amused. It felt good. For so long his teacher hadn't really paid close attention to him; any sign that he actually liked him, even a little, always made Naruto content. He didn't really need the man's approval anymore, not like he had needed it when he'd been twelve. It actually helped, because it made him glad when he got it and he didn't bother feeling slighted when he didn’t. Naruto had other people to love him unconditionally now. It was okay that Kakashi-sensei would never do what Iruka and Jiraiya had done, go from teacher to father figure. The blond guessed that Kakashi had his emotionally stunted hands full with Sasuke's emo self anyway.

They watched as the sparring bout relaxed into a teaching session. Sasuke guided Sakura's arms, her posture, showed her how and where to strike. He looked serious and concentrated -- as if he didn't notice he had his hands all over her. Sakura was starting to blush, which meant she did, but she followed his instructions with the same concentration echoing on her features. Naruto wanted to tackle them both and kiss them breathless. But, yeah, Kakashi-sensei.

"Hey, what are you doing here? I thought we weren’t supposed to meet before the end of the week."

Kakashi shrugged. "You always complain I’m late. You should be happy."

"... Did you take bullshitting classes or does it come naturally?" Naruto asked with a cheeky grin, before sobering up. "Seriously... is there a problem?"

Kakashi actually looked at him this time. "No, not really. I was just walking past."

Translation, I wanted to check on you all so I followed you out here. Naruto was fluent in strong-and-silent-ese by now.

ten minutes until YAY HOME FOOD NARU EP YAY, so i'm not going to write more for now. ^^; but i have a free afternoon, so maybe... *rubs hands*

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Pervy!Kyuubi: If I could rearrange the alphabet I'd put u & i together.

...sorry. This post gave me the image of creepy-guy-in-bar!Kyuubi. You know, the one with the bad pick up lines... ^^; Don't mind me I'm just insane.

LMAO. oh, that would be so funny. *petpetloves*

haha, i managed to write a little more. I rule. (okay, it's really nothing, maybe four sentences, but -- hey, it's a start)

Kyuubi will forever be cheesy pick up line guy in my head. *nods and erects shrine*:P

four whole sentences! that's like half of eight! and two more than two! You're on a role!

yay! i'm reaching four PARAGRAPHS. I rule.

Kyuubi: ... *sulks*

OMG I just read the paragraphs and whee! You so rule.

*pets Kyuubi* There there dear, have a biscuit.

hee, thank you *^-^*

Kyuubi: *CHOMPS*

gah, i'm stuck. trying to work my way through, but. hnnn. what to do now? ~_~;;;

what to do now? I don't know. T_T But whatever it is it will be BRILLIANT. As long as it involves more Sakura cleavage. And possessive!Naruto/Kyuubi. And perhaps Naruto doing something before he does pop a boner. 'Cause then Sasuke would have to be snarky and Sakura would have to be ... very Sakura ish?

XDDD *pokes naruto to make him get off his ass and do stuff*

sadly, sasuke now wants to train sakura -- not spar, but teach her stuff. naruto would get in the way. ;_; maybe i should bring kakashi in or something.... ohhh. hohohoho.

THE PLOT THICKENS! SORT OF. Does training count as plot thickening? It should.

Dear Naruto,
DO STUFF.
Love, Me.

*ded of lmao*

“Yo.”

“GYAH!”

Kakashi was leaning over his shoulder, watching Sasuke and Sakura. He gave him a glance and one of his weird eye-smiles he did -- Naruto had a theory that the rest of his face was actually perpetually frozen and thus all his facial expressions were eye-expressions only, but then he had lots of theories about Kakashi’s face -- and went back to watching, nodding approvingly.

“Hm, I do think he’s actually teaching her things. Amazing.”

Naruto grinned. “Yeah. If I had known some shagging would...”

“Naruto, so long as it’s improving, I don’t actually want to know how you improve your teamwork.”

“I know.”

“… brat.”

*is proud at having ded-ed someone* XD

What a loving ... pair? team? people-who-work-together-but-NO-SEX-unlike-the-rest-of-team-7? Kakashi and Naruto are. Brings a tear to my eyes

you're so mean. ;_; *still dhed* *WITH A H.*

“… brat.”

The blond chuckled, and waved at Sakura who was glancing back at them to see what he’d been yelling for. “If I wasn’t, you’d be bored.”

Kakashi rolled his eyes -- eye? -- but Naruto had a feeling he was amused. It felt good. For so long his teacher hadn’t really paid close attention to him; any sign that he actually liked him, even a little, always made Naruto content. He didn’t really need his approval anymore, not like he had needed it when he’d been twelve. It actually helped, because it made him glad when he got it and he didn’t bother feeling slighted when he didn’t. Naruto had other people to love him unconditionally now. It was okay that Kakashi-sensei would never do what Iruka and Jiraiya had done, go from teacher to father figure. The blond guessed that Kakashi had his emotionally stunted hands full with Sasuke’s emo self anyway.

Me? Mean? ~~sometimes~~NEVER! Is ded with an h more specialer? I'm going to pretend it is. XD

LMAO Kakashi and Naruto make such lovely paragraph. *draws little hearts around their heads* Emo Sasuke makes the world a better place. I'm not sure how, but he does.

I guess it has to do with the fact that you always feel happier by comparison.

dhed is the specialest dead there is. ~~apart from the zombie sort of dead. duh.~~

Which is why I always care a mini emo Sasuke along with me wherever I go. 's why I'm so very perky! XD *is perky*

mmm zombie sort of dead. those were the days...

Emo Sasuke makes the world a better place. hee ^_^. he does, doesn't he?

oh, by the way, Pervy!Kyuubi: If I could rearrange the alphabet I'd put u & i together. -that was hilarious. I love that pick-up line!

One day I want to be just like the bastard love child of emo Sasuke and cheesy pick up line!Kyuubi. :P

*giggle*

btw, icon love!!

hee! thank you. *pets icon* preciousss >.>

He wasn't sure what he’d do if Sasuke actually wanted to top, though. well you'd have to FIGHT FOR DOMINANCE and it would be HOT. [/end pervy fangirl mini-rant]

by the way, is there any smut coming up for the teamwork universe? have they actually had any sex since that night?

i loved the little snippet of the sexy-no-jutsu fic u posted before ^_^. i love that story. are you inspired enough to write any more of it?

YESSS THEY WOULD. *nosebleeds* naruto would win, of course, but still, eeeee sexxxx.

no, they didn't have sex again so far. didnt even kiss for real, I think. Not in the mood mostly. Naruto's gonna have to jump them at some point. XD (OR MAYBE SAKURA CAN START IT OMG UNEXPECTED!!!)

I'll write more at home (meaning this afternoon, yay), i didn't think to update the notes i took with me so right now i forget what happens next ^^;

Naruto had a theory that the rest of his face was actually perpetually frozen and thus all his facial expressions were eye-expressions only. very true. actually, I think it would be totally weird to actually see his face. I can't picture it...

improve your teamwork. hee. points for working the title into the dialogue!! *applauds* (teamwork is the final, official title, yeah?)

naruto would win, of course. yes. yes he would. SO HOT.

oh, hey, do you have, like, an archive-type thing for all your stories? with them all in one place? you've probably got enough stories to have your own website by now ^_^.

I'll write more at home. really?! *is waiting very eagerly. and patiently. no pressure.*

XD seeing his face would probably disappoint me. either he'd be a stereotypical pretty man, or he'd be OMGDISFIGURED. or he'd be bland. i like the mystery better.

XD well, i didn't mean to but it was a word that fitted, so hey. :P

I do have a website. XD check my user info for a link, i'm too lazy to get it myself.

I'll be at home in a hour and a half, two hours. then I eat, then i WRITE LIKE I'M ON FIRE.

unless i get sidetracked by the latest naruto ep that's downloading right now... 9______9;;;

yea, it probably would be disappointing...better to keep it covered forever...

ah! yes! of course you have a website! I've even been there before...but i forgot. oh well...

hee. if you get sidetracked by the naruto ep, that's totally understandable ^_^.

Naruto should jump and tease Sakura into a mock fight which stops when Sakura kisses him, falling into a hot make out session or cuddle one.

Anyhow they need to get their hands on each other and get over the awkward phase, the poor dears.

Waiting for the explanation to Lee, o_0 waterworks big time.

ohhh kissies. I think I might. *__* and yeah, they need to start fondli-- uh, i mean, stop being so shy 9_9;;;

i still don't know how i'll handle that. o_o;;;;; i keep thinking about it, but i don't know how to treat it. I don't want to cheapen it by having lee fall out of love with her in the gap between the series and the fic, but at the same time i don't want to hurt him. T_T

Lee has cared about Sakura for a long time, but has never acted on it really since their first meeting. It would confuse him, shock him,hurt him a bit, but ulimately he is too good natured not to be happy for Sakura.

The difference between he loves her but is not in love with her.

hm, actually i do think he's in love with her. And he did act on it, by declaring himself and going out of his way to protect her -- he's too gentlemany to make a more physical move. he'd be happy for her, but he'd also be pretty sad for himself. T_T maybe i can have him smiling in teamwork, and write an angsty drabble on the side with him crying on gai's shoulder. hehehe.

**oogles the action..ish...ness, as well a Naruto!Thoughts**

**grins** Have I ever mentioned how much I love your ability to capture characters and make them dance to your tune without losing themselves?

**bows in admiration**

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*writes a little more* *edits first post* ~~*is not a slut for attention*~~

Ooooh. You wrote. You wrote Naruto perving over Sasuke.

Such a nice thing to read before bed. ^_^

*licks goodnight*

your icon slays me. X3

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<loves you ;)>
How do you make the drabbles so GOOD?
I love how you desicrbed Kakashi's expressions. It is so very true.
Sasuke and Naruto get into smexy fighting whos seme sex.
It think they'll just end up getting so excited that in the end none of them will be seme though. :p But then naruto, who has more stamina, would probably say that he won because Sasuke came first and.....when did my thoughts turn like this?
Lesigh. Ah well, it's allll goood ;D See what you do to me?

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ohh, i so agree about ALL of that seme-thing. *nosebleeds* that would be so hot, too.

*dies of happiness*
You're really amazing at this, you know? You do such a good job of taking the characters and keeping them true to the originals while writing original fiction about them! *so impressed* Did that make sense? *didn't sleep well last night*

Favorite parts: Naruto being pervy over the other two. Kakashi showing up to check on them. ^_^ And Sasuke teaching Sakura! sweetness! I also liked the comparison of their sparring to a dance--so true! When people are in sync with one another, or totally focused on their jobs, their movements become so very graceful.

Ok, that's all for now. *hands you a cookie and goes to nap*

*blushblushblsuh* *loves on* *eats cookie* *wags tail* X3333

The blond guessed that Kakashi had his emotionally stunted hands full with Sasuke's emo self anyway.

Hee! Yeah, probably. ::pets Naruto:: The audience loves you, sweetie.

*snickers* yes, we do.

hmm, i need a naruto icon... yours is so cute.

"Okay, maybe he should join them before he embarrassed himself by popping a boner"
YAY JOIN THEM DAMN IT !! XD
Pauv' pitit Naruto perturbé...le meilleur moyen de combattre la tentation c'est d'y céder, hein....*...pokes Naruto* *pokes Kyubi* go go go ! ^__^

Et ton Kakashi est génial. On se demande un peu quelles idées il a derrière la tête, mais...XD
"Kakashi rolled his eyes -- eye? -- "
Là est la question. XD

le meilleur moyen de combattre la tentation c'est d'y céder

vivivivivivivivi X333

marchi! kakashi m'emmerde toujours, je sais jamais ce qui lui passe par la tête. alors je m'arrange pour que naruto aussi soit pas très sûr. XD

*giggles* I love Naruto's theories about Kakashi's face. ^___^

So cute, glad to see you writing, even a bit. *nuzzles*

thank you! *posts more*

btw, kibaneji = CUTE. am v. sad it ended though. now i want to read about their friends' reaction to them -- and hoshiiii ;__; bet she's independent enough that she wouldnt mind only being bonded partway... 9_9

*dhed of amusement*

^O^ hee, Naruto WOULD think of Sasuke as Emo, like us. hee hee hee

wait....emo...like goth....goth wears black...

Sasuke in black leather.....mmmmmmm.

i just made a happie image.

yay another dead body for me. *steals*

... sasuke. leather.

*nosebleeds*

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