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The second (and last thank god) part of the Sue
Duo P.O.V.
When Serenity showed me my room I started to explore and lost a little time. Once my exploration finished, I directed my steps to Quatre's bedroom when I saw Wufei open the door of Serenity's bedroom and close it again. He was red: from anger or embarrassment I don't know, but before being able to ask the question he was back in his bedroom. A few minutes later, Heero exited my sister's bedroom, his face still as impassible but with a micro smile and I even believed to notice a little lipstick on the corner of his mouth.
Duo: And I have mad crush on him and I don't react more than that ? Did she see the Virgin Mary in 3D or what?
And once again before I could even ask the question that was burning my lips, I was silenced with a gesture of the hand.
Duo: Since when do I obey when I'm told to shut the hell up?
Frustrated, I went to knock on Quatre's door and briefly explained the weird acts of our comrades to him. He told me he would try to have an answer from Wufei. On that note, Quatre shut the door on me
Quatre: Auntie Quatre! She lives only to repair all sentimental problems! ::headdesk::
and directed his steps toward Wufei's room while myself went to see my sister.
Duo: Not too soon. How I look enthusiastic at the idea of knowing my only family member.
I knocked at the door and waited for it to open.
Duo: since when am I so polite?
I heard a : «
- Come in. »
Which I did.
Duo: Come into my parlor, said the spider to the fly.
Serenity's bedroom was all things considered the warmest of the rooms I had visited.
Kin: bitch kept the best room to herself.
Magnificent black and silver tapestries on which red and gold lights from the chimney fire danced.
Asuka: Wow, black and silver, very warm indeed. Where's the verb?
Kin, stupefied: Even I can notice her mistakes!!
Serenity was sitting on the bed, her long braided hair hiding estranges pictures. She had to notice that I was looking at her,
Kin: what stupefying observation skills.
maybe even examined when she asked me : «
- Do you like your room?
- Yes, a lot. Whose did it belong to?
- That was our Father, the Shinigami's bedchamber.
Duo: I thought I found daddy-dearest's room creepy as hell.
- Nahad, was this his name?
- Yes. And your mother was named Maeve.
- Is she your mother too?
- Sadly no. My mother died giving me life.
Suka: Fuck, even the mother is tragically heroic. Are Mary Sue hereditary?
Kin: I'd say that she was paying for her sins.
About four years before your birth. On the other hand, our mothers were sisters.
Kin: ... huh.
Asuka: ... I understand it better that Nahad wasn't more bothered than that if Serenity-sue is screwing her bro's man. I knew there were families where they share a lot, but that much...
In the overworld we would thus be half-brother and half-sister but also cousins... quite bizarre.
Asuka: The More Special Than Anyone syndrome strikes again. There's a difference between exceptional and abnormal, you know.
Kin: Hey, it can happen.
Suka: On top of everything else?
- I have to admit it.
Duo: You are so intelligent, Serenity-sue. Your analysis capabilities leave me speechless.
- But tell me about yourself.
Asuka: ::falls dead:: She's interested by something else than her bellybutton!!
Where were you born? Where did you grow up
Suka: That would be the Maxwell church. Maxwell like Father Maxwell and Duo Maxwell, and apparently Serenity Maxwell as well.
and how did you become a Gundam pilot?
- They say I was born on the L-2 colony. The oldest memory I have is to be arrived in Solo's gang, I was about 5 year old.
Duo: THREE.
Then the plague arrived and I was one of the only survivors. This is when Father Maxwell and Sister Helen took me in the orphanage and raised me. I was about10
Duo: EIGHT.
Heero: After all the aberrations she sowed, you are still expecting the chronology to fit?
when the orphanage was attacked by OZ and that during my absence. I have to say I was gone in search of a MS to defend us ... But I arrived too late and everyone was dead.
Duo: I'm turning into a Marty-stu!! Look, the first syndrome!! Verbal diarrhea!!! (and the MS was for trading, fuckwit, not to fight in. I didn't even know how to pilot yet.)
While I was wandering through the L-2 street a person with the name of Professor G signald to me
Duo: Let's forget the fact that I met him after stowing away on a Sweeper ship. Why is this sentence giving me a mental picture of G asking me if a wanted a candy while unbuttoning his trench coat?
and this is how I was trained to pilot the Gundam DeathScythe. Now it's my turn to ask you questions.
- Go on.
- How is it that you are my elder of four years but yet you seem to be my age?
Duo: O_O Whoa, the author noticed her own plot holes!!
Suka: Better late than never.
- Before taking me to L-5 Lucrezia put me into a trance for four years, I had to be at least eight to be bonded to the Glaive without danger. During these four years nothing could matter because only my body was there and not my soul.
Suka: I take it back. Better no explanation that a lame one. Souls are immortal and unchanging, if it's not here, it won't stop the body from growing old. That and if she didn't grow up during that time and her soul in limbo, what was the point of the trance in the first place?
Kin: Noin, you're disappointing us, why didn't you use the occasion to finish her off?
Noin: mary-sues are immortal. I did the best I could. That was four years of peace at least.
Suddenly, Serenity changed the subject by saying: «
- You should go to bed. Tomorrow a hard day is waiting for you. »
Roughly that meant « Do not ask more questions because I will not answer anything else ». I left her bedroom and went to bed.
Duo: ...
Heero: ...
Wufei: ... Why don't you ever respond when I use that one?
Duo: I know you don't mean it, Wuwu.
Heero: SUIMS.
Quatre P.O.V.
Duo came into my room looking somehow frustrated. And explained to me that he had seen Wufei opening Serenity's door and close it, his face red and a few minutes later he saw Heero come out of this same bedroom, a micro smile on his lips and with maybe a touch of lipstick on the corner of his mouth. I listened to him before kicking him out
All: WE KNOW. Apart from the pronouns, what did she change?
and going to talk to Wufei. For Heero it was like talking to a concrete wall and still even the wall would end up replying eventually.
Suka: humor. Hahaha.
Kin: Good try. Next time make it funny.
Once Duo exited, I directed my steps toward Wufei's room and knocked. Wufei opened and said : «
- What are you doing here, Quatre ?
Quatre: Stalking you of course.
- I don't have the right to come and see you and ask you what's going on with you. Since you seen Serenity you are more grumpy than usual.
- If you had seen and hear what Serenity and Heero did... you would be in the same mood as me.
Quatre: True. Het sex, erk.
Wu and Noin: HEY!
- If you explained to me maybe I would understand. »
And thus he explained what he had seen. He had seen Serenity kiss Heero and on top of that he had head from her that she considered him only like a brother and not like a husband. And when he told me of the promise that Serenity and Heero had done on their union... I fell on my ass.
Quatre: Heero... Dumping Duo for that nasty slut! I thought you had better taste than that!!
Once I came back to my senses, I left Wufei and went to see Heero.
On the way, I met Trowa who was searching for the toilets. Poor guy he didn't see that our rooms communicated through the bathroom.
Trowa: ... Now I look like a moron.
Quatre: See things on the bright side! She hasn't totally forgotten you in the fic.
Trowa: THAT is a bright side?
Quatre: ... Right.
Duo: ... Hey, I thought the bath chamber communicated with the serenity-sue's bedroom?
Heero: SUIMS.
I made him notice and continued my walk toward Heero's bedroom. I had raised my hand to knock when Heero opened the door. I immediately noticed the trace of lipstick on the corner of his mouth.
Kin: Did she copypaste the sentence or what?
Heero: ::wipes his mouth clean obsessively:: it won't come off...
He let me come in and I asked the question : «
- Heero why do you have lipstick? »
Heero: You discovered my secret. I am a drag-queen.
Duo: O.O woe. He developed a sense of humor!
Heero: It's that or self destruct.
And for once, Heero gave me an explanation that was longer than his usual monosyllables.
Wufei: Verbal diarrhea is contagious from what I see.
Duo: It was bound to happen.
Wufei: Happened faster with him than with you...
Duo: I didn't swap saliva with her.
To summarize,
Asuka: O.O we can summarize even more than that?
He told me that he had visited Serenity and that they had talked for a little while about some things and he only briefly talked of the kiss that him and Serenity had exchanged and the promise of marriage.
Asuka: not so much from what I see.
Kin: More summarized than that, it would have been netsp34k.
The Morning After
Kin: everyone wakes up, hoping it was a nightmare.
Serenity P.O.V.
The dawn had just risen
Duo: wow. It's the morning, and there's the DAWN. In the morning. Who'd have thought?
Asuka: how does she know? They're underground.
Kin: Asuka, you're going to hurt yourself, searching for the small bug on the back of the mammoth.
When I directed my steps toward my guests'bedrooms. They weren't long to get up, except maybe Duo who probably had that so characteristic trait from Father.
Kin: At four, she has such vivacious memories from her dad.
I offered them the meal and they quit right after.
Asuka: Quit what? GRAMMAAAAAR.
Kin: Quit eating? Ahh, we understand, they were eager to... start the day.
I suspected that Jehovad must not learn that they had leaft for the Palace and that Duo would soon be bonded to Shinigami's Scythe.
Asuka: Mary-sue! she knows all, she sees all, she can even play the banjo.
A few hours later, I felt the scythe change owners and Duo was the worthy heir of the Shinigami line. The boys came back from the ceremonial walls of the Palace and were supposed to rest a little before starting to travel again.
Asuka: TENSE... oh, I give up.
Kin: Congrats, Serenity. Even I can't manage to disgust her from betaing.
Asuka: It's strange how the time seems to hasten whenever Serenity-sue isn't directly concerned. Wasn't there, like, A WHOLE CHAPTER OF STUFF in the original fic?
Heero P.O.V.
Serenity came to wake us up at dawn and offered breakfast to us. And less than one hour later we were going to bond Duo to the Scythe. This was done and by noon we have come back to the palace to rest a little before returning to my apartments.
Asuka: YES, we have noticed your amazing copypasting skills. >_>
Serenity was waiting for us a smile on her lips. She knew.
All, raising their hands in salute: MARY-SUE KNOWS ALL!
I went to my room in the palace because there were still a few little things for me to get back.
Heero: my sanity for one.
Serenity P.O.V.
I followed Heero to his room and I knocked. He opened and was surprised to see me there. I let myself in and I kissed him while closing the door behind me. He responded to the kiss and guided me toward his bed.
Asuka: OHFUCKITALL NO. I'd forgotten. ;_;
Kin: I thought you'd read it before?
Suka: Amnesia following a trauma.
Kin: What could traumatize YOU? O.o
He looked into my eyes and asked : «
- I can smell your pheromones and I know what you want but do you really want it?
Heero: NO. NO. NOT THAT.
Duo: I'M GONNA KILL HER, STOP ME!!!!
All: ::exchange looks:: Why?
- Heero, I waited for your return for so long so I can only be sure of what I want. »
Asuka: She refuses to sleep with Wufei, her HUSBAND, but one day after having met Heero it's okay to fuck him?!
Kin: The mary-sue has her reasons that Reason knows not.
I didn't let him answer and kissed him again. The following hour was filled with love.
Heero: I feel dirty.
Duo: ::grabs his collar:: come here, we're gonna reaffirm your homosexuality.
Heero: ::hopeful look:: You're going to fill me with love?
Duo: ::Italian flirt voice:: You can call it love if you want, baby.
Kin: excuse me, we're not finished here.
Asuka: ::elbows kin in the ribs:: SHHH.
I left him before to say goodbye to the others.
Asuka: OO From the grammar of this sentence, serenity left Heero BEFORE the love-filled hour, implying that it didn't happen with her... YESSS!!! We knew you couldn't forget Duo like that, Heero!!!! ::throws self at Heero::
Duo: Hey!! Just in case, I'm busy filling him with "Love" here.
It must seem sad to you that I leave him so fast
Kin: It's talking to us?
Asuka: Us, personally? Sad? Nah, we're holding on. Courageously.
but I have to say that if Jehovad realized they had left he would know that Duo ha been bonded to the Scythe of the Shinigami line. When Heero arrived he told the others it was time to leave.
Kin: He arrives from where? I thought they were together.
Asuka: Another proof that she was elsewhere for the hour.
Kin: And he's late too.
Suka: ::grin::
I gave a light kiss on the cheek of each of them. Duo had one on each cheek and a light, sad smile appeared on his face.
Duo: That's my "do not burst out laughing" face.
As for Quatre and Trowa they blushed a little
Trowa and Quatre: ::throw themselves at each other and hold on tight, horrified:: GAYER THAN A PRIDE MARCH!!!!
and Quatre whispered in my ear: «
- Take care of yourself Serenity, you will need to go to the overworld soon. If you go and see a doctor go to one of my estates and show them this. Then ask for my sister Iria, she will help you.
- Thank you Quatre, I said while taking the little pendant wearing the interlaced RW sign. I will do that. »
Kin: O_o?
Suka: ::has read it before:: ::Understands the allusion:: ::tries to strangle herself with the mouse cord::
Quatre, confused: I'm an angel, I can understand how I would already know, but how does SHE -- forget that, it was a stupid question.
All: ::look disappointed not to get an occasion to start chanting the hymn of the almighty mary-sue::
Wufei only gave me a quick glance and quit before everyone.
Suka: Quit what?
Wufei: So that traitor insults me in the most cruel way possible and I leave without saying anything?
Duo: She didn't want to bother with explaining herself to you apparently.
Wufei: Flattering for the man she pretended to love like a brother. She's a shinigami alright.
Duo: Yeah, like my Uncle. She's gonna end up like him too.
Quatre: How?
Duo, smirking: chopped into little bits by her brother.
Heero, him, still had his impassible face on but sadness could be seen in the bottom of his eyes when I said goodbye. They left the Palace and took the direction of the heart of Shindamachi.
Heero P.O.V.
Once in my bedroom, Serenity knocked at my door and kissed me. I knew that soon I had to leave, with the others, the Palace. I asked her if that was what she wanted and she replied affirmatively.
Suka: would have been surprising that she answered no, after throwing herself at him and drowned him under her rutting-Sue pheromones...
We have consummated our future union
Suka: NOOOOOOOOOOO LET ME MY ILLUSIONS!!!!! And how can it be future if they just consummated it, moron?
Duo: You're not saying anything, kin?
Kin: I'm admiring Suka in action.
And she left me soon after. I got back what I had to take back and went to the hall. Serenity was saying her goodbyes. Quatre whispered something in her ear, Wufei quitted without waiting, Duo, him, had a smile on his face and Trowa was as was his habit ineffable. When Serenity was given back to me
Suka: ::throws up on the screen::
Kin: MY COMPUTER!!! Don't care how, but you clean that up.
She gave me a little kiss on the cheek and wished me good luck for the war. After that, I gave the order to come back to my apartments.
Duo: Wait a minute, wince when is Heero the leader?
Wufei: The favorite character of a sue always is a leader.
Duo: Why?... ah, I know. SUIMS, that's it?
Heero: ::applauds::
Five years later
Heero P.O.V.
Five years have gone past since the last time I saw Serenity.
Suka: wow, you seemed in such a hurry to see her again.
Heero: Are you blaming me?
Suka: no, I find that OOC. It doesn't fit with your masochistic and suicidal tendencies.
Duo: Can you tell me WHO isn't OOC in this ... fic?
Suka:... point for Duo.
Several things have changed... During the final combat I died thus becoming a vampire, Jehovad was killed by Duo with help from the Scythe,
Kin: Not that I miss him, but why did he die ?O_o
Suka: And why didn't they come back to Shindamachi earlier?
Duo: My dear sister was there?
Suka: ...point for Duo.
Quatre and Trowa now were a couple just like Wufei and Sally...
Wufei: Such generosity. Authorizing me to recover from the loss of the priceless Serenity Meiran Shinimegami Maxwell Chang Yui.
On the other hand, on my side I don't know where I am anymore because I have to say Duo has become my chalice (ND suka = person a vampire drinks from regularly) and that the promise made to Serenity still haunts me just as much.
Suka: Yeah right. You became just like her. You cheat on your lovers. In the other hand it means that you only loved Serenity-sue like a sister and that your real soulmate is Duo... ::n.n::
After all, this should be haunting me because I don't know how she will take the fact that I am become a vampire and that the Line will never be able to go on.
Duo: HELLO!!! ME HEIR TO THE LINE!!!!
Wufei: You also gayer than a pride march.
Duo: ah no, I'll have you know that I'm bi.
The others had left on their own : Quatre and Trowa stayed on Earth to help the reconstruction whereas Wufei and Sally helped in their way by working for the « Preventor ».
Wufei: PREVENTERS.
All my worries found themselves behind me when I came back to the Palace with Duo. At the same moment when I opened the main door two childish voices threw in the same voice: «
- Who dares to profane the sacred Palace of Shinigami. Profaner prepare to die! »
Suka: I hurt... ;_;
Kin: I already told you not to writhe in agony on my computer.
Suka: she bred... like the Alien queen...
By the next moment, a well-known voice
Suka: WTF they stayed with her one day. ONE DAY. There is no "well known" about it.
cried : «
- Meiran Shinimegami Maxwell Yui ! Solo Shinigami Maxwell Yui ! How many times have I told you not to fight inside the Palace ?
Heero: It's YUY. Not Yui. In other fics, you can pretend to know better than the creators of GW how my name should be transcribed from Japanese ; Not in this one.
Duo: it is NOT MAXWELL. You never ever WENT TO L2. You have NO RIGHT on this name.
Kin and Suka: SHINIGAMI IS NOT A NOUN THAT CHANGES WITH GENDER AND NUMBERS!!!
Wufei: How nice to give to your daughter the false name you had when you were my wife.
Solo: Err... I wasn't even in Shindamachi by then, why did she call that thing Solo?
- several times mommy, replied the two young. »
The two young: but we never listen because you keep saying the same thing over and over again.
Then the mother recognized us and cried out : «
- By the tomb of Shinigami !
Duo: By the power of the Moon Prism!!
You're back. Children, come here so I can introduce you.
Heero: she sounds so moved.
Duo: Since when has she portrayed a realistic emotion?
- we're coming mommy, chorused the children once again.
Suka: I knew we would get an evil twin at some point. There, we have two of them now.
Before me stood a magnificent woman with silver hair striped with purple locks and with blue eyes
Kin: She didn't have violet eyes?
Duo: No, amethyst.
and two children. The little boy had brown and purple hair
Duo: urgh, poor kid, they're so gonna bully him in school.
Kin: And this, children, is what we call a BAD color harmony.
and blue eyes, contrary to that the little girl had brown and silver hair purple eyes.
Kin: The sister ain't any better off.
And I guessed that they had to be my and Serenity's children.
Heero: Children or evil clones?
I looked at Duo and I saw that he was starting to get a blue tint on his face so much was he surprised by the resemblance between me and the children.
Asuka: Let's skip the heaviness of that sentence. The kids' hair color rubbing off?
Duo: Nah, couldn't breathe, trying not to laugh hysterically.
He had to start to realize that he was now uncle to these two ickle darlings.
Heero: Can I shoot them?
Kin: They're Mary-sue's children. They're just as unkillable as she is.
Serenity P.O.V.
I heard the main door of the Palace open and heard Meiran and Solo threaten the newcomer. I felt their aura and while going to find them I saw the damage of the last fight the twins have done in the Palace. While telling them that I arrived in the hall and recognized the two shapes. They were back, Heero and Duo. When I said the name of Meiran and Solo,
Suka: Wait, I thought she saw them AFTER calling her brats.
Duo: She tried for a dramatic entrance most likely.
Duo opened his mouth like a fish out of water and Heero examined the children. By the smile Heero showed he had understood that Solo and Meiran were our children.
Heero: It's the nerves. I swear It's the nerves.
The time for explanation had come. Meiran took Duo's hand and Solo took Heero's and lead them to the living room. Duo asked one question : «
- How...?
Duo: That's nice but I know about the flowers and the bees. I can even explain the bees and bumblebees to you.
- The presentations will do that work my brother, I said. Duo Shinigami Maxwell, Heero Yui I want you to meet my children Meiran Shinimegami and Solo Shinigami Maxwell Yui. Children, I want you to meet your uncle Duo, the Shinigami and your father Heero Yui, protector of the Line. »
Heero: Yu-Y damn it.
The silence that followed was almost unbearable but when I saw Heero take me in his arms and spill a lone tear,
Heero: Her trachea won't crush T_T Duo, fuck you, give me back that self destruct button!
I knew that he had understand and that he accepted. Following that he told me about his adventures and left an immense sigh
Suka. Left it where?
Heero: ...If I'm dead, with what do I sigh?
Suka: If you ended up prisoner of a mary-sue and her mini-me, you would sigh, whether you usually breathe or not.
when he told me that he was dead and that he was now a vampire.
Kin: we're at Shindamachi, it's not going to kill him to be a vampire... err... n.n; sorry, pun involuntary.
Suka: XD
Duo, him, was learning to know his nephew and niece.
Duo: Hn. Little shits keep bouncing off the staircase instead of breaking their sorry necks.
Duo P.O.V.
We have won the war but for what a price, Heero had become a vampire,
All: WE KNOW.
Trowa and Quatre decided to stay on Earth.
All: WE KNOW.
Wufei ended up forgetting my sister and fell in love with Sally Po
All: WE KNOW.
And the both of them worked for the « Preventor ».
All: WE K-- err, PREVENTERS.
And when we come back to Shindamachi, to the palace more precisely, we have been greeted by two children,
All: WE KNOW.
who were revealed to be my nephew and niece. I also learned that Heero was the father.
All: WE KNOW. FUCK HER, does she take the readers for morons of her caliber or what?
It wasn't difficult to believe because they had his eyes and hair.
Heero: ::searches for purple locks in his chocolatey hair::
Since we returned everything is calm and I hope it will last for numerous years.
Duo: This time, we threw her in a crater. We hope against all odds that she'll stay there.
Fin
Suka: T___T thank you my Lord, thank you...
Review SVP
Suka: :: angelic smile:: Already done.
Princess Yue Serenity
Suka: Serenity? What an original and fascinating name. I wonder where I could have heard it before...
Kin: Probably a mighty Goddess. Such a name inspires to greatness.
Duo: can we leave now?
Heero: Never do that to us again.
Kin and Suka: We're giving you a vacation. After this, you deserve it.
The G-boys: ::disappear faster than light speed::
Asuka: ::shouts at Duo:: Don't forget he's got lotsa holes to disinfect by filling them with love!!!
Kin: #oo# SUKA!!!
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Fav Part:
Duo: ::grabs his collar:: come here, we're gonna reaffirm your homosexuality.
Heero: ::hopeful look:: You're going to fill me with love?
Duo: ::Italian flirt voice:: You can call it love if you want, baby.
looooooool ^^ well great job at translating >_> but there's a lot of faults (but it's not yours...they were here before lol)
So....will you give the link for the pretty fic you told us in the other post (x-men2 fanfic i think)
I wanna LMAO!! ^o^
final word
poor girl
....
=_=
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but if you're masochistic you can take a look here
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2028769/1/
IT SUXX0RS WORSE THAN THE GW SUE. *scratches face off*
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I just wanna have a good laugh (as i said before) thanks for the linky ^^
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*lit le profil* Mon Dieu, elle s'est reproduite !!!! 'suka, j'ai peur !!!
(Essaye de mettre qch en italique ; soit sa fic soit vos commentaires, parce que là, c'est plus difficile à suivre ; en plus, ça oblige à lire sa fic si on veut trouver vos commentaires XDXDXD)
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Bon, j'ai essayé, mais j'ai pas réussi, j'ai aussi sauté à la fin...
"je devins Mme Logan Wolverine"
"- Marie Malicia Rogue[1], tu vas m'ouvrir la porte tout de suite "
Mais faut qu'elle arrête avec ces noms inhumains !!!
De Dieu, je veux savoir comment elle a appelé sa fille !!! Pauvre gosse !!!
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Et j'aimerais savoir comment un surnom de super héro secret peut devenir un nom de famille...
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Oh, je sais, je suis une experte ès X-men, lol (de cette période-là du moins ; j'ai pas continué de façon très suivi au-delà du départ de Scott mais je sais vaguement d'où sortent les nouvelles recrues par la suite...)
"j'aimerais savoir comment un surnom de super héro secret peut devenir un nom de famille..."
Voilà, c'est *ça* que je voudrai savoir ! XD
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Pour la fic Xmen ca saoule trop...j'ai lu deux trois paragraphe...(jusqu'a quand elle est dans la cage et quelle brise les bijoux de famille a Steel) Elle met trop d'adjectif pour un truc qui sert a rien...et explique pas assez ....tant que son persos preferer est pas en action elle zap tout mais des qu'il arrive tadahhhh on a le droit a 100pages de description bidon....oh regarder le jolie noiseaux tout blanc avec des jolies plumes toutes douces =___= you got my point right???
See ya....
*a little piss off*
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hors-sujet: tu finis à quelle heure demain?
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J'm'inquiete un peu pour notre monde futur.....>_> quand on voit le resultat............bref ^^ heureusement que tout le monde est pas comme ca
*cherish 'suka*
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Oh The Pain?
Original Trepaned Parrot?
Official Tale Parody?
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Y a des couples auxquels on devrait meme pas PENSER alors ecrire et les faire se culbuter c'est encore pire >o<
*sick*
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...
Euh, pardon..
jm'en vais;..^^
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(blondinet de Dazler ??)
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yup, I'm french. And i've never been out of france... wait, I went through part of switzerland a few times, but i didn't stop. wonder if it counts. ^^;
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O.O
You know, I'm actually surprized that she didn't go into detail when she supposedly "consumated" That would have seemed the appropriate Mary-Sue thing to do. But we're all thankful that she didn't (especially Heero)
Also....She actually made Heero say something even relatively close to "ickle" and "darlings"? WTF?! ^_^ Exactly, what you had said...(I wrote that before I read what you last wrote o.o;)
o.o It amazes me that I was actaully able to finish reading this obmination/atrocity to writer-kind everywhere.
This story is so.... I can't think of the word... but, it irks me so. T_T its so painful, it makes my teeth hurt.
She is the worst....um....it-thing-that-somehow-relates-to-writing-but-shouldn't... esp. the P.O.V She enjoys boring everyone with her self-absorbed repetitiveness. I feel like killing myself for some strange reason... Its just.... :shudder: horrid...
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Man, I'm scared. That was... uhm... well... To put it bluntly...
Thirty minutes of my life that I'm never going to get back.
::snort::
God, if you hadn't gone through with your snarky comments and chopped it into swallowable bits I think that one might've killed me going down!
Mary Sues... ::shivers::
You have a wicked sense of revenge. ::toothy grin, cackle:: Remind me to stay on your good side, Aske! XP
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(Anonymous) 2004-09-07 08:52 am (UTC)(link)Kari (Kari30150@aol.com)