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askerian ([personal profile] askerian) wrote2012-05-16 06:42 pm
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gw wolfbrothers

Damn it, OCs, stop being ethical AND smart, you're figuring things out way too early. *EDIT EDIT* auuugh.

Also, introducing five new people in one scene might be a bit much. :X I'll see if I can cut one off, but I don't see which one... :(


Seeing the two wolves side by side it was even more obvious Chiquito was still very young; he was fuzzy all over and round-bodied and his paws were huge compared to his legs. He could get under Killer's barrel without needing to hunker down more than a couple of inches. Killer jerked when he did it and sidestepped, but it seemed more reflexive unease and confusion than true, aggression-edged wariness.

After that of course it was butt-sniffing time. Urk. "Thanks for sharing, buddy."

Shh quiet. Important smells!

"Yeah, I'd say. So, the pup likes burritos?"

Makisig gave a guilty snicker. "Probably shouldn't let him have them, but oh, the soulful eyes."
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[identity profile] red-volpe.livejournal.com 2012-05-16 06:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Hmm, yeah, I get what you mean. I've seen in some stories where actual characters had trouble with unfamiliar names, and the author played it out to help with the confusion before.
Hey, what's wrong with Bianchi? I rather like it. Alright, maybe I'm biased, seeing as it's two letters away from my name, but still. XD
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[personal profile] askerian 2012-05-18 01:16 pm (UTC)(link)
I've seen in some stories where actual characters had trouble with unfamiliar names, and the author played it out to help with the confusion before.
huh, yeah, not a bad idea.

Nothing's wrong with Bianchi save that the wolf is white. Such an original name! XD
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