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[askerian]

Still writer's blocked. I kinda want to do another kissing meme or dialogue meme, but we all know my track record with any meme that implies I actually need to write shit instead of just babbling away. >__>;;;;

Ganked from sayaka_sama:

The Rules:

1. Comment to this post with the name of a character that I have written in fics. Or geeked out about. Or RPed. You should probably make sure it's one I've written more than once or twice.

2. I will comment telling you the following:

A. What initially prompted me to like the character enough to write about him/her.
B. One of his/her best traits.
C. One of his/her worst traits.
D. How easy/difficult I find it to write the character.
E. The story/chapter/paragraph/phrase where I feel that I truly captured the character (if I've written them).
F. My plans (if any) to write the character in the near future.

Comments

[askerian]

Where is this what? ^^; The team hebi does sasuke is on adult fanfiction.net, which is linked in my profile. the expanded sakukarin isn't posted yet.

[ishanatur.livejournal.com]

lol i guess i could have been more specific... i meant the expanded sakukarin, ive read the team hebi does sasuke and have sqeeed appropriately over it ^.^
Are you going to post it? You should it will bring much joy to all the randy hoodlums that you seem to be collecting like flies :o)

[askerian]

Of course i'll post it, but so far it's only a rough outline and a couple of dialogue notes. Also with my track record I might never finish it, so...

>____>

"Naruto, she's kinky."

Naruto gave an awkward chuckle. "Yeah, so am I sometimes..."

"She's not kinky in a fun way. She's not normal. I'm not saying that as an insult. She has needs and expectations out of a relationship that would seem weird or even unhealthy to most people. It's the way she is."

"... What? How--"

"She's not kinky in the sense that she enjoys a couple of spanks in the middle of fun-filled intercourse. She's kinky in the sense that she has this need to belong to someone who can and will use her. And Sasuke doesn't cut it, because he might be strong enough to control her, and he does have an use for her ninja abilities, but he won't take her to bed no matter what she does."

"Why are you telling me? it's -- private..."

"I'm telling you because I need your help." She sighed wearily, propped her cheek against her palm. "... I bit off more than I could chew there. You, er. You know what a dominatrix is?"

"Well.yeah. Um."

"It's not only about the costumes! It's. ... Shit, I don't know where to start. Naruto, I'm not her girlfriend. I don't love her. She doesn't love me. We don't even like each other! ... I don't even like girls much. There's no love or desire between us, there's nothing but the game. The only thing she sees in me is that I'm someone who is fully able to grab her by the hair and make her lick my boots.

"The problem is that my job as the domme is to keep her engaged -- keep her guessing what happens next, keep her feeling vulnerable and -- and owned. And since she doesn't trust me and she doesn't love me, it'll only work as long as I can prove I'm in control." she paused. "I'm starting to run out of hoops to make her jump through."

[rushthatspeaks.livejournal.com]

You should totally work on this! It is awesome.

... has Sakura thought about passing her around yet? That might keep her guessing. Sakura: "You have to go do whatever they say! Even if it's incredibly vanilla, which I might tell them to be just to annoy you!" Karin: *after sixth totally normal person* "Hey, wait a second..."

[askerian]

Well, that's what she's asking Naruto for help with. XD;;;

"And I need your help. For a game. .. a scene. For her."



Naruto was silent for a very long time.

"What do you have in mind?"

Sakura closed her eyes and relaxed slowly. "I don't think it will be anything complicated...

"Sakura."

He hadn't said Sakura-chan. She wasn't sure how to interpret it.

"I want her to service you. Nothing bad. You won't have to punish her. if it's necessary I'll do it. But... it's going to be weird, Naruto. It's going to be unpleasant."

"...yeah?"

"she needs to feel humiliated and put to use. You can't try to put her at ease or try to make it nicer or -- playful, or understanding or anything. I ... if you can't do that, it's okay, it's fine."

"Sakura-chan... I got it, that it wasn't gonna be a kind of free booty. I understand that, okay? It's about using her."

"...because if we don't she'll start going after Sasuke again, and disrupting everything--"

"because if you lose control of her now she's going to strike back. Isn't she?"

It's all still notes and I'll need to tweak and reword stuff, especially Naruto's dialogue , so it'll sound more IC. And of course add body language and whatnot inbetween.

... and then there's a kink scene to write, and then fallout that I haven't figured out yet. x___x;;

[na-no-nai.livejournal.com]

*_____* ilu. This whole thing is just WIN on so many levels. ♥ ♥ *sends good thoughts for your mojo*

[askerian]

yay, good thoughts! My mojo says thanks. (it's still too lazy to get to work though. stupid writer's block. hn. >__>)

♥

[kittychan1986.livejournal.com]

Is this further parts of the one Kink thing? With Sakura Doming her? *Hearts in eyes* Because Sakura as a Dom...is fantastic.....YUM.

*Squees happily*