Sasuke/Karin kissy ficlet-thing

[askerian]

-___-;;; Well, for me it's a good proportion! Almost a hundred suggestions, and... five ficlets so far. One of which is real cliche and blah and which I won't bother reposting.

But anyway. I'm still rewriting the other Naruto ficlet and it will probably end up under porn lock anyway, and I still have to get through the two Seirei no Moribito for characterization and voice (would love a beta who knows that fandom to look at them if possible because i'm so not sure of myself. .__.), but in the meantime, here's this one.



She dropped little kisses all over his neck, up and down and up again, nibbling and licking. Sasuke was statue-still, expression remote and displeased.

"Karin. Get off."

"I'm trying to!" she whined.

Her hands were starting to inch up his shirt. He caught her wrists, held them away, but she only shivered in renewed arousal and used her natural bendiness to press herself close. It strained her joints to the edge of pain, but that was fine with her.

"How many times do I have to tell you no before it sticks?"

Damn. She needed to switch tracks on the conversation right now. "I thought you were supposed to take care of us! You're our leader, right?"

Sasuke blinked slowly, disbelieving. "It's not like intercourse is necessary to your survival."

Karin hung her head and bit her lip. "... Actually..."

"... You're joking," he said flatly.

Karin stilled in his hold, though she kept putting her weight on her wrists so the muscles in her shoulders burned deliciously. "You remember how I heal people?"

"By absorbing your chakra via biting. How is that relevant to your need to have sex with me?"

She shivered at the memory of how good that particular pain felt. "It's not biting that does it. It's mingling our chakra fields, via putting a part of your body inside mine."

Sasuke gave her an incredulous look, annoyed. "So you could fuck me back to health. Great. I'm not injured."

Karin's eyes glazed over at the thought. Argh! She needed to concentrate on the here and now. Her fantasy blood-soaked Sasuke could wait. She lowered her head, like sharing a secret she had been trying to keep. "You don't get it, I need to get chakra from somewhere! I've been using a lot recently, and I just... Well, I can't make it up on my own. Sasuke, my body is starving. Literally."

He frowned, then, and she could see he was starting to believe her. She leaned closer, a pleading, vulnerable look on her face.

"... So you're... A kind of chakra vampire?"

"Well -- I suppose. Actually -- it's closer to succubus." Sasuke's eyelid twitched at the word, and she could see he was a little bothered. She did her best to look hungry and not horny. "Though I guess it would also work if you cut me open and put your hand--"

"No."

She was a little disappointed, to be frank; healing afterwards would be a pain, but there was something exceedingly intimate about someone's fingers on your inner organs.

Sasuke sighed loudly, pushed her off, and... let her wrists go, freeing her. "Alright."

Yessss!

"Juugo! Come here."

And as she blinked in shock, in the middle of reaching for him, Sasuke arched an eyebrow at her. "He has a lot more chakra to spare than I do."

"Wha -- hey -- no!"

"You're starving, aren't you? " Sasuke said, implacable and not half as fooled as she had thought.

Karin hung her head. Well damn. "...Nevermind."

Comments

[proanon.livejournal.com]

...*falls over laughing* Sasuke rocks. Just for the record. And, heh, now you have Karin's cooing over a bloody Sasuke make a creepy kind of sense. Well, beyond the typical fangirl response to such things...

[garmiet.livejournal.com]

(I review as I read.)

Great beginning. =D ___ Lol: “before it sticks?” ^^ Love Karin’s tunnel-vision when she’s like this. ____ LMAO!! XDDD “You’re joking.” That’s GREAT! XD ____ Ahh, interesting. Very clever interpretation of how it works. I really like. =D ♥ ____ Boy, what a great way to describe it. “You could fuck me back to health.” ^^ ____ Cool lines: “My body is starving. Literally.” ____ Ahh, succubus. I prefer the idea of her as a “chakra vampire,” though. ____ AHAHAHA, way to turn the tables, Sasuke! XDD Good one! Pulled the rug right out from under her! ^_^ ♥ ____ Oh wait. Was she lying that whole time? ^^ Heh—nice try, Karin.

[askerian]

Hehehehe.

I like the idea that she would be a chakra vampire actually, but it was funnier for this ficlet if she was lying. But if I get a more serious fic idea where she is, I might reuse that idea. *ponderyponder*

thank you hon ^^

[garmiet.livejournal.com]

GO FOR IT! =D

She needs a lot more love out there in the world of fanfiction. ♥

[uminohikari.livejournal.com]

*giggles* Cute~!

Karin gets points for trying!

[hsbs.livejournal.com]

Gotta love a crazy woman:
"there was something exceedingly intimate about someone's fingers on your inner organs." *snoorts*

....very intimate, like knowing someone inside out! lol

I love it when I get to say this: your crack made me laugh!

Re: Karin gets points for trying!

[askerian]

....very intimate, like knowing someone inside out!
*...cracks up* Oh, that was bad.

Thank you. ^___^

[m-a-foxfire.livejournal.com]

Wahaha oh Team Hebi and their wacky antics.

[kittychan1986.livejournal.com]

Ah, Karin. Poor thing. I think you're better off sticking with the other two Sasuke...is....Sasuke... :) He's the anti ADD. So hyper-foucsed you could dance naked infront of him and he's probably tell you to not get sick. ^.^ this is why he needs a Naruto to pin him to a wall. Or a Sakura to pin him to the wall, you know, Options. :) Love snipits. LOVE

[kittychan1986.livejournal.com]

So how does one get under the porn Lock? *Very curious and intrested*

[askerian]

By being over eighteen and asking. You are, yes? XD
(but, there's still no porny saku/karin in it. alas. or much of anything, really. i'm not great with porn.)

[kittychan1986.livejournal.com]

I am indeed over 18 and would love to be under porn lock. :)

I am really looking forward to that bunny finishing itself. :) Because..damn...much hotness.

[askerian]

XD;;; it's trying to develop a ploooot my god why me. *whimpers*

You're in !

[kittychan1986.livejournal.com]

But plot would be all yummy and stuff! *Belives that Asuka cannot write PWP* And then you could add Sakura following through with her threat to Dom for Sasuke....and it would be NUMMY!!!!!

Thanks!

[askerian]

... The plot is all about Karin needs a Dom to feel balanced but hates Sakura, and Sakura can Dom but she doesn't actually get off on it very much and she doesn't like Karin anyway, and Naruto really doesn't get what the hell they're doing and isn't that an abusive relationship and why are you getting so close to a sasuke-stealing bitch anyway?

It's so hard to write those dynamics. DX

[kittychan1986.livejournal.com]

The explanition of what's going on to Naruto must have taken awhile. It's a weird dynamic, because neither of them like the other one. But at the same time, Sakura is protecting her teammate, in her own speical suportive way, which is probably why it even works just a little.

Sakura: Because it keeps the Sasuke-stealing Bitch away from Sasuke.

Are you dealing with an of the intergration of Team Hawk (Hebi? Whatever New Defining name Sasuke has decided will Balence out his new team?) into the village? Or are you leaving that completly alone? Alternetly, the sex is pretty, but the conversations must be intresting. (Karin the sex adict needs people to hurt her in order to get off....Sakura the Medic would much rather heal people, but if hurting them is what it takes she'll take that path too)

[askerian]

yeah, especially since at first he thought they were secretly dating. XD "no, no, it's just BDSM sessions." "wha--?" I think Sai is the one who gets it the most (though he's more sub than dom). Sasuke is kinda stuck on "where is the little girl who peeled me apples" side of things for a good long while when he finds out. XD

I don't know about the integration stuff, so far i just have ideas for the D/s scenes, I suspect if i don't want to make it super long and complicated i'd have to keep it to quick mentions, it would get too huge otherwise. It's still in the conception stage and might never get past it anyway.

[kittychan1986.livejournal.com]

and Kakashi is, as he always is, going 'Where have my cute little students gone'. I do like the "Where in the little girl who peeled me apples." For Sasuke. Yeah, I don't think Sai could keep control of himself long enough to Dom for someone, he's too used to following orders, and while I think for long points of times he can accept giving orders, he's always going to have a hard time doing just that. Naruto..is Naruto...I think he's secretly a romantic at heart and wants everyone to have a happy ending.

Oh I hope it does, even if it does just end up being a long one-shot, it's such a delightful concept and I love your strong Sakura, people just don't give her enough credit. You are one of the few authors I have encountered that actully give Sakura enough credit to be more than the Girl who peeled and wrapped bruises and cried whenever danger appeared. She's a strong, confident young woman, who survived being instructed by Tsunada.