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askerian ([personal profile] askerian) wrote2007-09-02 01:39 am
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Naruto pic - narusasusaku - threesome? fivesome? - PG-13




Something is slightly wrong with Naruto's head -- it looks too big to me, and... I dunno. I should have fixed the lineart before I spent three days coloring five bazilion layers. X(

I like the rest, though. Except from my usual suckitude with all things background-related... but hey, let's say it's voluntarily, so I wouldn't take the attention away from them or something. Yeah, let's say that's why. XD;;;;;


Inner!Sakura: And if I ever catch you doing THINGS with those tails again, i'll stuff them where the sun don't shine!! >O

Kyuubi!Naruto: Uh huh. *not listening* *leer leer* *sneaks tails behind her again*

Naruto: Hay Sasuke, smile for the camera!! *tickletickle!*

Sasuke: No. *will you let go so I can elbow you in the guts already >(*

Sakura: ^-^ Ahh, what a nice day. *I'm giving them three seconds to settle down before I kill them all. ^-^x *

at deviantart

[identity profile] gem-samari.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 12:00 am (UTC)(link)
So pretty! *_*

Inner!Sakura's expression is so awesome ^-^. Not to mention all Kyuubi's tales; the coloring there (and everywhere else, but especially there) is excellent! And I am loving the Naruto-Sasuke dynamic in the picture (I thought Naruto was groping him at first xD), and Sasuke's annoyed expression.

Naruto's head does look a tad big, but I probably wouldn't have picked up on it at all if you hadn't said anything. It's not really that noticeable.

[identity profile] sahara-storm.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 12:08 am (UTC)(link)
I REALLY love how you draw bodies. *____* And omg, Sakura looks so pretty~.

[identity profile] inane-romance.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 12:13 am (UTC)(link)
Holy crap, Kyuu!Naru is unbelievably hot. O:

The coloring is gorgeous. But how is this classified as PG-13? Two shitless guys and one half-shirtless guy doesn't really make it PG-13. And so maybe Kyuu!Naru is all the way naked-- but you can't really tell, can you?

( Though, yes, Naruto's head is a bit big. And his eyebrows are colored a bit too dark, in my opinion. )

[identity profile] drich.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 12:17 am (UTC)(link)
I don't think it's his head so much as possibly his neck. There's something about the angle of the neck vs his facial position that seems awkward.

But the whole pic is WIN! Especially the coloring in my opinion.

[identity profile] spiralingvortex.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 12:26 am (UTC)(link)
I heart Sasuke's and Kyuubi's expressions.

[identity profile] imarobotica.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 12:31 am (UTC)(link)
Sasuke is a damn lucky bastard.

[identity profile] kanoi-trace.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 12:35 am (UTC)(link)
Prettyyyyyyyyy. I love Kyuubi!Naruto's tails!

[identity profile] kohikari.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 12:58 am (UTC)(link)
Oooh, I remember this from the scraps, I think. It looks even cooler finished. *.*

(The only thing I can see about Naruto that could be construed as 'off' is that he looks really young, like childish as opposed to the other four. I dunno.)

I really like how Inner!Sakura has a different color scheme, more vibrant than Outer!Sakura. It's very symbolic. Or something.

[identity profile] book-people.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 01:32 am (UTC)(link)
Pretty pretty! ^_^ I absolutely love Sasuke's expression. He looks kind of like he's thinking "How the fuck did I get here and how do I get out?"

*gives picture and Asuka squish of love*

[identity profile] bootoye.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 01:33 am (UTC)(link)
Team7 looking so yummy!!!!

Poor Sasuke he is the only one without an alter-ego! Then again I guess he has enough issues as it is^^

[identity profile] crunchberiasmic.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 06:11 am (UTC)(link)
No, there's still CurseSeal!Sasuke.

*has no art tips* but...

[identity profile] stardustonsable.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 01:39 am (UTC)(link)
Pretty.
Very very pretty.
Especially Kyuubi, and the hipbones, but thats my own little quirk

[identity profile] mika-kun.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 01:55 am (UTC)(link)
Wow, I really like this picture. Naruto's head isn't so much too big, it's more some of the spikes start a little to far away from his scalp, only about two or three of them, the ones above his left eye. Other than that the only thing is that regular Sakura's and Sasuke's right eyes are a little far to the right. The picture as a whole though, is absolutely gorgeous. I love it so much I'm adding it to my memories so I won't have trouble finding it again. I love the way you have them interacting, it seems totally natural for them. You also captured Naruto's grin perfectly. (And Kyubbi!Naruto's smirk) Also the background is perfect if they're posing for a picture. Photographers sometimes use a gray background if the subjects have both light and dark hair. It keeps everyone from fading out.

[identity profile] trishalynn.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 02:01 am (UTC)(link)
Kyuubi!Naruto rocks my socks. I'd have kitsune with him any day.

[identity profile] bakkhos.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 02:13 am (UTC)(link)
I love your inner Sakura, but regular Sakura is so beautifully serene in this one, I say she's my favorite of this pic. I also really admire your coloring.

[identity profile] mitsuhachi.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 02:30 am (UTC)(link)
Awww, sasuke and his bitches and their bonus!crazy. *heartmarks*

I think what might be wrong with naruto's head is that you have an extra row of spikes in the back that don't need to be there; the coloring on kyuunaru's tails is kind of OMG amazing and with them flailing all over the place I don't think you really need a background; outer!sakura's lips came out looking really soft and pretty in this piece; it kind of looks like sasuke is groping sakura's breast and I heartily approve.

I swear I'm almost done on your fanart. :

[identity profile] mitsuhachi.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 02:31 am (UTC)(link)
Also! How much older kyuunaru looks than naruto while still clearly being the same person is kind of amazing. and win.

[identity profile] rurounitriv.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 02:43 am (UTC)(link)
Loving the attitudes here. Did a great job on Kyuubi!Naruto's tails too. They look very soft and fluffy.

[identity profile] yira-heerai.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 02:47 am (UTC)(link)
...*swoon* *faint*

I'm gonna have to say a big HELL YES to Kyuubi!Naruto and Inner!Sakura. The colors and the body and the prrr prrr *-------*

Also? Sakura's breasts are hot. Really digging the minor cleavage.

I also keep thinking that Sasuke's kinda going... "Ignore them.. and maybe they'll quit. Ignore them and... It's Naruto. He's an artist at making people not ignore him. Dammit, I'm screwed."

...He's probably also wondering if he could cup Sakura's boob without being seen. If he's not, he should. I would D:

[identity profile] snapthestars.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 03:00 am (UTC)(link)
I really like the bodies and the tails :9
And Sasuke's expression-- it's so... Sasuke.

[identity profile] terraminuit.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 03:57 am (UTC)(link)
Kyuubi just has this look that says he's just gonna pounce her any moment. And Inner Sakura..I love how you made her so subtly different from Sakura. The hair color and style..her outfit. She's the same but different.

[identity profile] wildwesternwind.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 05:14 am (UTC)(link)
Soo pretty. Like very much. I love the expressions on Kyuubi!Naruto and Inner!Sakura.

Sasuke knows he likes it. He just doesnt want to admit it.

[identity profile] ayonoi.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 06:24 am (UTC)(link)
and for some reason, Kyuubi!NarutoXInner!Sakura looks hotter to me now than before XD. I LOVE Kyuubi!Naruto's tails, teeheee, Sakura knows she likes the tickling XD.

Ohh Sasuke, you are such a pimp XD

[identity profile] mandy347.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 06:48 am (UTC)(link)
I like this picture! Sakura's face looks a bit wide to me - eyes too far apart, mouth too wide, but her expression is very nice. Sasuke's looking very Sasuke (I'm not really here, really... If I stare into space and make-believe I'm elsewhere, I will be), Naruto looks so playful and hands-on, and Kyuubi!Naruto just looks pimp. I don't mind the grey background; I thought it looked a bit bland at first, but it really brings out Sasuke's blacks and greys more, so it works.

[identity profile] alita-b-angel.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 07:14 am (UTC)(link)
HAREM NO JUTSU!

Kyuubi!Naruto's face says: VICTORY.
ext_132474: green keys (flowers)

[identity profile] luel-exana.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 08:09 am (UTC)(link)
Haha I particularly enjoy Kyuubi!Naruto with Inner!Sakura. Now that is a pairing that needs more attention. And Sakura's last line, with smilies non the less, is hilarious. The background DOES suit the composition too. With that many figures compressed in a tiny space, and Kyuubi's tails everywhere, scenery would only be distracting. But you knew all this already. As you said, it was all intentional. ;D
Great work as usual~<3

[identity profile] aubuyn.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 02:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Ugh. SO GORGEOUS. I absolutely love this picture! Especially the contrasts between Sakura and Inner!Sakura, and Naruto and Kyuubi!Naruto. Sakura's face and body language are so at ease and soft, and the colors are very pretty! But than Inner!Sakura's colors are so alive and vibrant and her expression...ugh!

And Kyuubi is hot. Enough said. xDDD

[identity profile] tricia1224.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 03:47 pm (UTC)(link)
I love Sakura's thought. Might be something she thinks quite often with those two around. Beautifully done. The background is just fine. If you put to much background it would take away from the real focus of the picture.

[identity profile] bookem-dano.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 04:03 pm (UTC)(link)
I know someone already mentioned it, but I have to agree that I REALLY REALLY like how you draw bodies-- They look so natural and not stick-like like in most anime/manga-- Especially all the muscle detail, you should make a tutorial for people like me who have no understanding of where muscles are and what they look like when they're flexed certain ways 'cause the figures in your pictures are amazing lol XDDDD;

[identity profile] alexandrukas.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 04:11 pm (UTC)(link)
I love how you draw expressions. They're so real and display emotion so wonderfully.

[identity profile] shadowzephyr.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 04:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Wai! I love your artwork. This is beautiful.

[identity profile] venia.livejournal.com 2007-09-02 11:13 pm (UTC)(link)
ohhh *_* the three of them sitting at the front like this, are just perfect! I like Sakura's hair color is of a gentler tone than the kind of fuxia-pink many people use, and Sasuke's expression, especially the mouth is *love* (is it a little bit open somewhere?) and you draw very nice hands!definitely two thumbs up.
Hmm...at last I can see a Naruto with short locks (kyuubi made him have longer hair too XD;)but I thought his skin was more tanned? O.o whatever, he's adorable, smiling like that(shirtless too *_*)!!! Very good coloring!

[identity profile] kyutaru.livejournal.com 2007-09-03 05:23 am (UTC)(link)
Excellent picture! I love how you captured the expressions on kyuunaru and inner sakura, and Sasuke too.

Sasuke: I'm surrounded by crazy people... help.
ext_77486: (yuss!)

[identity profile] na-no-nai.livejournal.com 2007-09-03 02:24 pm (UTC)(link)
This wins! I must agree with the earlier poster that Sasuke is one lucky bastard. :3 Naruto's expression kills me. >D

[identity profile] nishasha.livejournal.com 2007-09-03 10:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Your art is ridiculously good. <3 Sakura's so peaceful! :D

[identity profile] monique-27.livejournal.com 2007-09-05 11:53 pm (UTC)(link)
*loves all over you*

OH, ASUKA! I JUST GOT BACK FROM A CRAZY, SPONTANEOUS VACATION AND SO MUCH HAPPENED AND OMG I'VE SO MUCH TO TELL YOU AND OMG!!! *>.<*

...this is hott! *will totally leave an awesome review later*

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[identity profile] monique-27.livejournal.com 2007-09-06 12:02 am (UTC)(link)
*flops on you with LOVE!*

OMG I MISSED YOU SO MUCH!!!! *HUGGLES*

OMG it's so much to tell and I'm rushing now cause everyone's getting ready for dinner and I still have to shower and holy goodness I'm going to make everyone late AAAHHH!!! *>.<*

Blah. *loves on you more*

[identity profile] sienna-maiu.livejournal.com 2007-09-06 04:43 am (UTC)(link)
ah man... this is beautiful
I love how Inner!Sakura is more vibrant and has her battle gear on, while Sakura has a more luscious richer red gown on, but softer coloured hair and eyes, giving a more demure look. However, on closer inspection her hands seem to have some tension and anger concealed in them.
Naruto is more fun-loving and younger looking than Kyuubi!Naruto which is a totally awesome affect (you and your shading...) The whole style makes Naruto look 16 while Kyuu looks about 25.
I like how Sasuke seems to be the only one who notices the other two's own selves.