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[askerian]

Gnngh.

So there I was, reading the Teamwork chapter again, and telling myself "hey, maybe I should write". And then there was a lame troll (no seriously, I think I jinxed it with that last crack!post, and if that was one of you people I'm going to be seriously unhappy with you. It didn't make me angry, or amused. It was tedious.), and then I went on to check on all the plagiarists I've got bookmarked, and oh look! the online comics folder just happens to be right next to the plagiarists and well, then, I was well and truly sidetracked, and now it's seven thirty and I haven't written anything.

Is there anyone online right now who would be willing to kick my ass into gear so I write, or at least be willing to discuss Teamwork stuff to help me unstick things? It's always so much easier to actually write something when I know someone's right there waiting for it, and plotting always goes more smoothly when I have to lay out everything clearly for someone who isn't in my head. (I'd like someone who's able to crit and ask "but wait, is this a plot hole or are you happy to see me", if possible. I'm looking for help, not handing out free spoiler passes. XD)

edit-- thanks, people, got it ^__^ And thank you phlegmaticphrog for the help! ♥

Comments

[ellenel13.livejournal.com]

I'm not good at kicking any body's ass into anything, but I'm willing to discuss Teamwork right now, if you want.

[askerian]

XD;; You just want spoilers! Cheatiiiing.

Mostly I need concrit, really. And pointed questions that help make me think on the plotholes. And stuff. ^^; I really would like to keep the number of people I spoil to a minimum, even though there isn't anything really big left for this chapter. Think you can do that?

[ellenel13.livejournal.com]

Sure.

[phlegmaticphrog.livejournal.com]

*raises hand* I'm up for some ass kicking and/or discussion.

/kicks ass

Now what seems to be the problem, other than ADD?

[askerian]

.__.;; mostly it's "HOMG ISNT THIS KIND OF LAME PEOPLE WILL GO 'WHAT, THAT WAS YOUR BIG SHINY END? LAAAAME' ON ME" Because, um. I'm still not too sure what happens. Also I'd like to stick a scene or two in the middle, but apart from "this scene should express X" I have no clue what should happen.

Do you have AIM? ~____~

[phlegmaticphrog.livejournal.com]

Sure do, it's FoxiliciousFrog. :)

[animeprincess.livejournal.com]

:D I'd like to help! Even just STAAAAAAAAAAARING at my computer waiting for the story. Does that help? ^^;;

*is weird*

[askerian]

XDD;;; S'ok, Phrog let me babble at her and now I have an idea. As for the writing itself, I've got to know where to start it first. XD;;

[animeprincess.livejournal.com]

Kay! I'll be at work for now, but i'll think of this alllllll during my shift. :D

[yira-heerai.livejournal.com]

YiraHeerai on AIM, if you need other messengers, I've got those too.

Know it wasn't me who did whatever the review said D: Stupid trolls. *punts them* Rawr.

[complexphoenix.livejournal.com]

I'm on AIM too, if you want to talk to me.

Nice icon, btw.

[book-people.livejournal.com]

'M available for a bit if you still need to bounce ideas off someone, but unfortunately I suck at betaing anything but grammar. >.<

*reads other comments* Oh, but you found someone. Coolness. Hope the block goes away!

Adi

[book-people.livejournal.com]

PS Your icon is so much love, just so you know... ^_^

[phlegmaticphrog.livejournal.com]

Happy to be a assistance :)

[sienna-maiu.livejournal.com]

daang... I wish I had like... the talent to help.
But today... nah, who am I kidding, no day's good.

But you have somebody by now, so neh.

[sienna-maiu.livejournal.com]

nyah! forgot to mention that the av is the shiz

[bootoye.livejournal.com]

Write WRITE!!!!!!

Its my birthday so please write^^

Um...concrit...hmmm. Maybe you could clear up that last scene a little. You know the part where the ritual begins and things get very weird in terms of POV

Also you missed out a part at the end with the smex part^^

[(Anonymous)]

Hey, lurker here. I just ran across this awesome pts narusasusaku fic by Sunfreak, and I wondered if you'd already read it. If not, I highly recommend it. Actually, I think you might find it interesting just because it has a take on how the three of them would relate to eachother in bed which is very different from yours, and yet is quite plausible and in-character. Check it out if you're interested.
http://community.livejournal.com/white_knuckle/32713.html#cutid1

[askerian]

Hey! Thanks for the thought. ^__^ I read this fic when it came out, actually, but I always love reading it again. It's a pretty awesome story.