askerian: Serious Karkat in a red long-sleeved shirt (Neji_This Means WAR)
askerian ([personal profile] askerian) wrote2006-03-13 08:52 pm

(naruto) another cyborg-verse fic~

Except it's not Sasuke POV. :D MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.

I even have the perfect icon. *__*




The first time Neji sees it, it is as if all the colors in the world were drained away. White, sinfully fluffy carpet, a silhouette of dull black metal, and wet red dripping from the blades springing from the back of its hand.

White and red and black eyes. Watching him. Weighing him.

Empty. AI?

"I take it Tanaka-san won't be coming to the speech."

Faint surprise in its eyes now -- wishful thinking? Anthropomorphism? He knows better. No emotions to appeal to -- dead secretary, ah, that's why Tanaka left. Affair? Industrial espionage?

Whatever the reason, two deaths have been judged necessary. No need to ask why; no answers forthcoming, nothing to appeal to.

He moves between the white secretary desk and the white wall; combat stance, the fluid crouch of the Gentle Fist. The dark shape is slender; light armor, hopefully thin -- probably quick, though. At least Neji sees no gun. Maybe he'll be swift enough. He doesn't know this make; where are the weaknesses?

"Why," the assassin asks softly, "do you read as Hyuuga Hiashi?"

Neji flinches. Briefly. Barely visible; painfully obvious. He sneers in retaliation, as if the assassin cared what he thinks of it. The palms of his hands tingle with a suppressed charge.

The assassin glances down at them. It shouldn't be able to see.

"Why," Neji counters, not so much soft as carefully smoothed, "do you care?"

"It might become pertinent later."

Neji hisses between his clenched teeth, and puts his feelings away. If he isn't allowed to kill the Hyuugas, no one else will.

"Who paid you?" he asks calmly, and slowly moves in the open space, where no chairs or wastebaskets will get in his way. He's still holding his crouch.

The assassin doesn't move, unnaturally still as it stands over the two crumpled bodies. It hasn't moved at all since Neji walked in. Only its hair; the fan is still whirring softly on a desk behind it.

The computer is whirring too.

"No one."

"That was -- personal?" Neji asks; he doesn't care, he just wants something to say as he steps to the side again -- there's a cable, snaking from the computer to lose itself in a smooth black ponytail.

Outrage; it's stealing data -- whatever! It's tethered. Thin cable, will break easy -- might damage its ports though, that's --

"Don't."

It isn't so much the quiet order that stops him, as the amused undertones. He looks up; the face is a mask, empty and smooth and surprisingly aesthetical. The eyes are red and non-organic and mocking. This isn't an AI, is it? They don't express such subtle feelings in that way.

"I won't let you touch me."

It knows. It knows about Neji's bioelectrical implants. How? They're an exclusive of the Hyuuga corporation. Neji sneers again; he only needs to brush against his armor, just once. It's a toss-up; if he can dodge fast enough...

A blade long like his forearm springs out of the back of the assassin's other hand.

Well. Damn.

"Why do you read as Hyuuga Hiashi?" it repeats smoothly, the blade a dull black that seems to absorb the stark light of the room.

"Why don't you hack into our computers and find out?"

This time it actually snorts. "I will. Later." And reaches up to free the data cable from its port.

Neji strikes, twisting to avoid the blades.

He doesn't die, because the carpet is damp with blood and his foot slips. He doesn't die and it doesn't even hurt; a line of cool dampness against the left side of his chest, ending at his shoulder. In his shoulder. He strikes again, a knee on the floor, aiming for a leg -- the assassin leaps over, lands on a desk.

Its armor is even lighter than Neji thought; the desk barely dents at all. It groans, high-pitched enough to hurt teeth as the assassin shifts, aims its strike. Neji climbs back on his feet; he wants to face his death standing.

Behind them, someone screams. The desk creaks. Neji lifts his hands -- not fast enough -- where is it?

It's crouching on the edge of the window -- blades gone -- Neji doesn't know how he manages to duck the sudden jet of fire. He rolls on the carpet, bumps against the secretary's desk -- pure instinct makes him crawl in the leg space and topple it over his body.

The fire roars on the other side of his shelter. The sprinklers hiss, drenching him. The alarms howl. The interloper is still screaming. He waits for a heartbeat, two, then peeks out quickly -- the window is empty.

The computer is a melted mess of plastic and metal bits. The bodies are charred. Dark smoke fills the other end of the office. Quickly -- in case the assassin is still hiding behind another desk, however unlikely he finds it -- Neji dashes to the door, shoving the spectator along through it.

The heavy fire doors farther down the corridor burst open; Neji pauses, long enough to be recognized, then leans against the wall as security mills around them.

He's vaguely amused that a heavy, fortysomething corporate shark could even scream that loudly.

Someone's talking to him -- security? Paramedic, the badge says. Huh. He can't hear; the siren is still howling, and

he's sitting on the floor. Huh. No white carpet here. Smooth marble. Cool under his hands. White and black, veined -- a red drop.

"... Oh."

Now, of course, it starts to hurt. The colors bleed back into his world; the paramedic has a forest green armband, the corporate screamer a dark blue suit. The walls are cream. He doesn't move as the medic applies pressure to his wound. He's shivering a little. It's just shock; it will pass in a minute.

"Neji."

Hyuuga Hiashi is standing in front of him. He looks angry, sterner than usual, as he stares at the damp, bloody, shredded shirt as if it was a personal affront. Neji clenches his teeth. "You'll have a scar," he comments, maybe a bit snidely.

Something in Hiashi's face tightens. Neji is satisfied. He pushes the paramedic away and straightens up, making sure to stand straight. He doesn't want more questions, so he starts talking first; "Assassin. Light armor, male body type, killed Tanaka-san and Midori-san's secretary before hacking into a company computer."

Hiashi's expression darkens even more, and his eyes narrow. Midori-san has heard his name, and gets into Neji's face, demanding more details. Neji would shove him away, but he can't be that impolite to the host; but Hiashi cuts his business partner short. "My nephew was injured. He almost got killed. He will answer the police's questions later, when he's feeling better; for now he's going home. Come along, Neji."

Neji pushes away from the wall, refusing the hand one of Hiashi's bodyguards offers him, and follows on his heels. He knows he won't see the police before Hiashi and his executive board are done debriefing him. It doesn't much matter; he's used to lying to the authorities by now.

He doesn't relish the prospect of facing that bunch of old vipers. No doubt they will berate him for being reckless; did he think about how much it would cost the Hyuuga to replace him?

No. No, he didn't. He could have run, he knows he could have. There would have been a chance that the assassin wouldn't have been quick enough to catch up.

He's just a clone after all. What does it matter if he dies, in the end. What does it matter to anyone but him.

He didn't run; didn't even think of it. He stayed; he fought. They can't take that away from him. He steels himself, holds close the memory of dull black and blood red death. The feeling of being alive. It's his, nothing but his.

He's still cold; his clothes are damp and stick to his skin. He doesn't let the bodyguard drape a vest across his shoulders as they leave the building. He sinks in the limousine's cushions and closes his eyes, and hopes he scars so thick no surgery will ever erase it.

Well, at least he dodged the rest of the reception.

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Is that plot I see? It does look like it, indeed.

Too bad I've got no clue where it's going or how it's going to influe on Sasuke's. XD

[identity profile] sarolynne.livejournal.com 2006-03-13 08:36 pm (UTC)(link)
*ROLLS AND ROLLS AND ROLLS IN ITANEJI INTERACTION*

*rolls a little in Neji POV, too*

Very interesting. And plot is good. I'm sure there has to be a way this can tie into Sasuke's stuff.
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[personal profile] qem_chibati 2006-03-13 08:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Haha! Thats awesome.

You've managed to come up with an explanation of why Neji would hate his family that fits really well with this AU world.

I also just wanted to say that I really enjoyed the other ficlet as well; where Sasuke mets Sakura; XD the way Sakura described meeting Naruto was just too perfect. XD
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[identity profile] kylara.livejournal.com 2006-03-13 08:42 pm (UTC)(link)
That was so freakin' cool.

[identity profile] nishasha.livejournal.com 2006-03-13 08:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay, plot! Though snippets without plot are fine and dandy as well. Damn me and my inability to tie bits of plot together. ;_;

What a lovely surprise to come to at my lunch break. XD I can always count on you for good fiction.

But yes... ITANEJI! *swoons*

[identity profile] nishasha.livejournal.com 2006-03-14 03:34 am (UTC)(link)
i'm weird in that i need smut like air. it's a disease called "i need smut now," or something like that.

*petcuddles right back* Woo! petcuddling! Just what I needed today. However did you know?

*reads fiction again, just because it's awesome like that*

[identity profile] questofdreams.livejournal.com 2006-03-13 09:49 pm (UTC)(link)
UuUuu..NEJI! hehe. That was intense. Well, let the bunnies roll around in your head some more, maybe they can breed more ideas to let it all work out ^__^

[identity profile] animeprincess.livejournal.com 2006-03-13 09:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Eeee! ItaNeji and blood and fighting and and and. *squeals*

X3 you'd think Itachi would be WiFi, considering his tie-breaking with the Uchihas. heeee. Poor Neji, needing to define himself even though he's a clone(nice way to define him in this universe, btw. eee).

*HUGSQUISHES*

[identity profile] justkat2790.livejournal.com 2006-03-13 10:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Woah...*great* action scene. And I love the pathos of a clone...of Hiashi?...wanting a scar. Itachi sounds very high-tech.*Poor* Sasuke; even as a cyborg he's out-gunned by Itachi. Wonderful universe this. I just love it!

[identity profile] matthias-drake.livejournal.com 2006-03-13 10:14 pm (UTC)(link)
So... Neji is Hiashi's replacement body? Or am I misreading this line?

Hyuuga Hiashi is standing in front of him. He looks angry, sterner than usual, as he stares at the damp, bloody, shredded shirt as if it was a personal affront. Neji clenches his teeth. "You'll have a scar," he comments, maybe a bit snidely.

It is Neji talking there, right?

[identity profile] complexphoenix.livejournal.com 2006-03-13 10:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Might want to replace the pronoun to make it clear that Neji's speaking. I TOTALLY missed that.

[identity profile] stitched-scars.livejournal.com 2006-03-14 04:08 am (UTC)(link)
I had the same problem as complexphoenix actually.... took me 3 times re-reading it. ^^;;
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[identity profile] stripedpetunia.livejournal.com 2006-03-13 10:52 pm (UTC)(link)
All I can say is that the more of this that bursts forth from you, the happier a camper I am. *purrpurr*
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[identity profile] stripedpetunia.livejournal.com 2006-03-14 12:16 am (UTC)(link)
*screeches homicidally like an Alien*

*spits acidy goo OF LOVE*

[identity profile] ktoth04.livejournal.com 2006-03-13 11:16 pm (UTC)(link)
yummy! I think I'll reread again later... After I watch the 12 discs of Naruto that just showed up on my doorstep :D

[identity profile] ktoth04.livejournal.com 2006-03-13 11:48 pm (UTC)(link)
I will definitely have fun, though it will probably take me most of the week... Dang jobs, I should quit and just watch Naruto for a living :D

[identity profile] sailor-comet.livejournal.com 2006-03-14 01:55 am (UTC)(link)
Niiiiice. I like part where Neji's thinking about how he could have run. Very nicely described, that caged feeling and rebellion against it.

[identity profile] rianax.livejournal.com 2006-03-15 10:02 pm (UTC)(link)
You should write professionally. You are one of the true few authors that has the talent for building world anew but keeping characters true to themselves despite or because of the changes you make.

[identity profile] go-hifreann-lea.livejournal.com 2006-03-17 11:31 pm (UTC)(link)
*late*

Yuum. I really do love this AU you have going on. You make it fit in so well with what's canon (bioelectrical implants? <3). And plot! dfslkj!! *incoherent with love*