naruto - team 7 ficlet : Sometimes

[askerian]

I didn't actually write, it's just an oldish ficlet I tweaked a bit until it was semi-okay for posting. It's team seven lurvin' from Sakura's POV. I'm not sure I like the way it ends, and I feel like it drags on a bit toward the middle, but I had to end it at some point. Ah, whatever.




Sometimes, Naruto felt tender. Those days, he made love to Sakura, gently, lovingly, playfully -- like she was beautiful and perfect, and those days, she loved him.

Sometimes, Naruto felt passionate. Those days, he fucked a red-eyed Sasuke, grabbed him and fought him until he could force his legs apart -- like he needed him -- like he was an enemy to be conquered, dominated, possessed -- and those days, Sakura hated him. Wanted them. Wanted in.

Sometimes -- rarely -- Naruto felt lazy. Those days, he let Sasuke take him. Sasuke bit and scratched, licked and held him close, eyes closed. Naruto kissed her while Sasuke wanted-needed-loved him. Naruto pulled her under him, and these days she could feel Sasuke's passion, softened through Naruto's love.

She wanted it the other way around.

Sometimes, Naruto felt kinky, and then he watched them. Sasuke wasn't as playful as Naruto was. He always took her face to face, properly. His eyes stayed black. He kissed her mouth, he never bit her neck. She felt protected, cherished. Sort of loved. Maybe. Maybe.

Sometimes -- sometimes she was tired of being the girl, the prize, the precious thing to be protected. Sometimes she wanted in on Naruto's passion, the mad sex and scratching and the lovebites that bled red -- she wanted in on Sasuke's love. Sometimes she wanted a change -- and she changed. She put on Naruto's face, or Sasuke's features, and then she pretended. She knew them well enough that neither of them could tell her apart. And then she let go. And then she had contests with Naruto on who could be wildest, and Sasuke moaned, mewled, pleaded under them -- and then she moved over Naruto, gently, tenderly, lovingly, giving him back what he gave her -- and then Sasuke looked at her with just as much want-need-love as he watched Naruto with -- and she was in between them, and somehow still wanting in.

Sometimes, Sasuke offered Naruto to her. He got him wild, got him crazy -- then watched them, as Naruto fucked her, and then she could see Sasuke's love for them, his love for her, as he shared with her what he needed most in the world. And this -- Naruto's passion, Sasuke's love -- it was all she had ever wanted.

Sometimes, she needed-wanted-loved them both with all the passion and the tenderness she felt and all she had been given, and they needed-wanted-loved her back just as much as each other, and everything was just as she always strived for.



AND NOW BED.

Comments

[nacchi-camui.livejournal.com]

*baaaaaaaaaaaaave* Heh. Ce fic me fait un effet pas possible o__o Mon estomac est tout retourné. Félicitations XD

[animeprincess.livejournal.com]

o.o *sniff* mm. smells like smut. yes it does, de gozaru yo.

^o^ eeeeeeee teamwork. if i didn't have to go do schoolstuff and buy food, i'd so be writing.

[iniq.livejournal.com]

;_;
Awwwwwww.
*dryhumps your leg* It's luuurve. Your pieces always make me sad with all the lurve in them. So pretty.
<333

[silverkiiri.livejournal.com]

You have made me just fall in love with Sakura. ::lubs you:: Seriously, this was beautiful and still managed to get in the smut factor we all know and love. Sakura is one lucky girl.

[windshades.livejournal.com]

*another quick "drive-by" comment*
I really loved this...the dynamics between the three and the way Sakura examines what each of them need. Beautiful.

P.S. I'm working on the fic I promised you and have fanart in mind, but RL is...difficult right now. ;_; I hope to have something(s) for you by Halloween. *emphasis on the "hope"* I'm so sorry that it is taking me so long!

[questofdreams.livejournal.com]

I love your writing ^__^ It's so wonderfully descriptive and deep without being EMO/ANGST! hahaha...

I'm getting better at not cringing whenever Sasuke and Sakura are mentioned together XD...I'm so horrible. I adore Sakura, I really do...and I love your team 7 fics so I look past my cringing reflex and enjoy the writing ^__^

[miko-no-da.livejournal.com]

Lovely! As usual. *purrrrrrrrrrrrrs*

[edenfalling]

Dude. How did you manage to make a total PWP come off philosophical and sweet, of all things?

(Not that it's not sexy, because it's totally sexy, but... Gah. *hugs the fic*)

Feel the lurve!

[pharaoh-cat.livejournal.com]

*sends mucho love to you*
hurrah for teamwork! You got me appreaciating Team 7 threesomes and Sakura all that bit more with your team work series *glomps happily*

[muffytaj.livejournal.com]

Mrrrr, the only woman DOES turn into a man *grins* I love how your fiction is both hot and bleeding and sexy, but also somehow comes off with a bittersweet tang. Things aren't always perfect for team 7, but when they are... it makes for good fic *grins*

I am glad I waited until I finished my fic until I read this, otherwise I would have never been able to finish it now. *brain melted*

[maldoror-gw.livejournal.com]

Yeah, threesomes are way complicated ^^; There's certainly something bittersweet in this, even as Sakura gets what she aims for. I wonder if the boys have any 'I wish...' moments when they watch the other two interact (or smex each other up :P Musn't forget the smexing)