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A flame! a flame!!
And a real one this time. ^__^ Except for the lack of bad spelling and random cuss words... ah, damn, I guess this isn't a real flame then.
Ok, this fic is far from being my best, if only because it's not really a fic, it's an adaptation of a roleplay. As such, it's supposed to be more fun than good writing. But that's really barely part of the complaint.
>The following review has been submitted to: Hogwarts
>Strawberries Chapter: 1
>From: KingSlime (http://www.fanfiction.net/profile.php?userid=61927)
>So, if you and another girl RPed yaoi... Wouldn't that make
>it lesbian cybersex?
Uhm. Wait. Playing two men makes us girls who like girls? ....Well, in that way, yes, of course, just the same way watching les porn makes men queer. ^-^
(also, Fei and Heero do NOT have sex anywhere in the fic. they're still barely past the holding hands stage. *rolls eyes* )
>If I were you, I would be seriously questioning my
>sexuality right now.
Uuuuhm. Why do yaoi-haters assume that everyone lives as deeply in denial as they do? I know what and who I like, and yes, it does include some girls, but yaoi is all about my love of the cock.
>On an off-note, you're writing yaoi featuring Harry Potter
>which is against the
>wishes of JK Rowling,
1) Where did she say that? 2) This is in the WORLD of Harry Potter, the main characters are from GW. Harry is not gay in that fic. Not that we'd hesitate to make him gay if it suited the plot.
(3) in a fic with harry as a main character, this would be called slash, not yaoi [/nitpicking])
>your characters are tremendously out
>of character,
Well, duh. They're 15 year old wizards in a boarding school who got as normal a life as a wizard can have, instead of being 15-year old terrorists raised to kill and destroy.
>you've even squeezed in a Mary-Sue, and that's just in the
> first chapter.
O_O WHERE?? *shock* There's only Fei and Heero in the first chapter! And Madam Pomfrey, at the end. She has about three lines. Meiran and Relena are mentioned, but they're 1)canon GW characters and 2) depicted in a less than flattering light. I really don't see a mary-sue anywhere in the fic. Please, anyone, enlighten me.
>Maybe I shouldn't expect so much of a Wing fanfiction
>writer, but my god this crap is
>awful.
Hmm, lessee... It looks like mister Kingslime (what a fitting name) has in his fics a... 1x2 songfic. Methinks someone forgot that saying about glass houses.
I'm not pretending that this fic is a masterful example of canon characterization and perfect plot, hell, we're making it up as we go along, but it felt like most of the review wasn't even about this fic at all. *snort*
Ok, this fic is far from being my best, if only because it's not really a fic, it's an adaptation of a roleplay. As such, it's supposed to be more fun than good writing. But that's really barely part of the complaint.
>The following review has been submitted to: Hogwarts
>Strawberries Chapter: 1
>From: KingSlime (http://www.fanfiction.net/profile.php?userid=61927)
>So, if you and another girl RPed yaoi... Wouldn't that make
>it lesbian cybersex?
Uhm. Wait. Playing two men makes us girls who like girls? ....Well, in that way, yes, of course, just the same way watching les porn makes men queer. ^-^
(also, Fei and Heero do NOT have sex anywhere in the fic. they're still barely past the holding hands stage. *rolls eyes* )
>If I were you, I would be seriously questioning my
>sexuality right now.
Uuuuhm. Why do yaoi-haters assume that everyone lives as deeply in denial as they do? I know what and who I like, and yes, it does include some girls, but yaoi is all about my love of the cock.
>On an off-note, you're writing yaoi featuring Harry Potter
>which is against the
>wishes of JK Rowling,
1) Where did she say that? 2) This is in the WORLD of Harry Potter, the main characters are from GW. Harry is not gay in that fic. Not that we'd hesitate to make him gay if it suited the plot.
(3) in a fic with harry as a main character, this would be called slash, not yaoi [/nitpicking])
>your characters are tremendously out
>of character,
Well, duh. They're 15 year old wizards in a boarding school who got as normal a life as a wizard can have, instead of being 15-year old terrorists raised to kill and destroy.
>you've even squeezed in a Mary-Sue, and that's just in the
> first chapter.
O_O WHERE?? *shock* There's only Fei and Heero in the first chapter! And Madam Pomfrey, at the end. She has about three lines. Meiran and Relena are mentioned, but they're 1)canon GW characters and 2) depicted in a less than flattering light. I really don't see a mary-sue anywhere in the fic. Please, anyone, enlighten me.
>Maybe I shouldn't expect so much of a Wing fanfiction
>writer, but my god this crap is
>awful.
Hmm, lessee... It looks like mister Kingslime (what a fitting name) has in his fics a... 1x2 songfic. Methinks someone forgot that saying about glass houses.
I'm not pretending that this fic is a masterful example of canon characterization and perfect plot, hell, we're making it up as we go along, but it felt like most of the review wasn't even about this fic at all. *snort*
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Yeah, Rowling is pretty uptight about the whole fanfiction thing...but FF.net still hosts 110700 HP stories. Lol, and the chances of any HP writers, slash or otherwise, stopping anytime soon is nil. And on that note I'm off to write an obscure Harry Potter fanfic! *dances off*
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Stupid person. *shakes head in disbelief*
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In my situation I put the dicovery that I was bi down to yaoi mainly because it showed me my attraction to men was on a non-realistic, romanticised yaoi-like level.
>.< but not because I was having lesbain cybersex. Not that I haven't had lesbian cyber sex. XD.
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>So, if you and another girl RPed yaoi... Wouldn't that make
>it lesbian cybersex?
No, it makes us gay men. Obviously.