(naruto) Possession, prologue + chapter 1

Prologue is a repost, and i've completed chapter one and rewritten stuff.

Title: Possession
Author: Asuka Kureru (from a plot created in collaboration with Kineko)
Fandom: Naruto
Lead character(s): Naruto, Sasuke... Itachi?
Pairing(s): ?
Genre: angst, action
Warnings: dark, ANGST, violence, torture, insanity, gore...
Notes: Shoulda been writing that in collaboration with Kin, but she didn't have any free time. ::sigh::

( prologue (you can skip if you still remember )

( Chapter 1 )

Yes, it is actually meant to be confusing. You're free to guess. I'm not saying anything, though. XD

Hmm, i think i need to add some sasuke wondering if this is really naruto , BEFORE he gets tackled. but i'm too lazy to edit that now. Any other comments ?

Teamwork sequelness - chapter 1 (complete, unbetaed)

(Sakura)

( Sakura and mommy, repost )

( Sakura and Ino, repost )

( sakura and ino, new stuff )

heh. ^^;;; I don't know if it sounds okay and if i managed to respect the who-knows-what thingie. I'll have to read again later. I also need a beta pretty urgently; i know my grammar sucks, and sometimes i use weird words and i can't even TELL and it bothers me so much. joisbishmyoga, if you could, I would love you even more forever than before. ;_;

And argh so sorry, once again there are tons of people who have given feedback, and I forgot to reply. T_T I am so, so, so sorry.