Instead three dogs burst out, maw wide open. Could use some plural consistency there. And a few times it's hard to tell who is talking. Now that the concrit is over it is time for the gushing part yes

aaaaaah Kakashi to the rescue yes and a fight scene that is basically just mad scrambling of the SHIT SHIT SHIT variety with Our Heroes pretty outmatched but still giving out hell and god I love those medics and Naruto being kind of crazy and Sakura being that awesome mix of tough and not that tough because after a day like that, she deserves to be able to whimper about her hands, and Sasuke using the phrase meat shield to describe himself poor guy has issues but he's still delightfully fuckdammit grouchy and fed up with this shit. Hoooo coherency is not my strong point today.