How you could possibly think that was an "oh please" instead of an (see all-caps above), I Do Not Know. Holy Cliffhanger, Iruka!!1!!
As for your current concerns, I say, write the dialogue first, then (unless it kills your current ideas) think about writing the fight around it? Hell, the manga/anime does that all the time: "Ah, you see my pose is different now... Wait... Is that a HUGE SPIDER YOU'RE DROPPING ON MY HEAD EW EW EW ok wait, I'm a Hyuuga, Must Reassemble Coolness..." -etc.
Sword of Smiting +3 just gets Naru and Sasuke right back into making snotty penis-size jokes at each other.
Which, come to think, might not be a bad way to take the advantage of surprise away from their opponents...
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How you could possibly think that was an "oh please" instead of an (see all-caps above), I Do Not Know. Holy Cliffhanger, Iruka!!1!!
As for your current concerns, I say, write the dialogue first, then (unless it kills your current ideas) think about writing the fight around it? Hell, the manga/anime does that all the time: "Ah, you see my pose is different now... Wait... Is that a HUGE SPIDER YOU'RE DROPPING ON MY HEAD EW EW EW ok wait, I'm a Hyuuga, Must Reassemble Coolness..." -etc.
Sword of Smiting +3 just gets Naru and Sasuke right back into making snotty penis-size jokes at each other.
Which, come to think, might not be a bad way to take the advantage of surprise away from their opponents...