Yah, it really doesn't. Also, it does have context -- they're out as a team, and then they get drunk and have sex. It doesn't jump right in bed, it's still got some buildup.
Before "Kiss Me, Stupid" (which is borderline character-study-disguised-as-porn in a few places), the last PWP-ish story I tried to write was Crossed Wires, see how well *that* turned out... >_>
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Before "Kiss Me, Stupid" (which is borderline character-study-disguised-as-porn in a few places), the last PWP-ish story I tried to write was Crossed Wires, see how well *that* turned out... >_>